Thread 5
Chp15
OMGGG I just freaking loved EVERYTHING about the Mussoorie trip even though it was from Maan's POV only!! First we have Kabir now who is hating Maan cause he thinks Maan has everything where as he doesnt n is simply jealous of Maan!! Its not Maan's fault if he was born in a rich family!! And now i know how Diary made its entry n i think it actually deserves it, this days should be really penned down in one of the best Maaneet moments of this story and what an awesome start to start with the diary, though i know Maan's ego played the part of a villain in that beautiful moment but i still loved it cause he immediately felt he did the mistake of assuming things that Geet could think so low of him which wasnt true n missed the golden opportunity of spending this time with her n the guilt was so much that he started thinking was he even redeemable? I mean just for asuming things if he feels so guilty n then i wonder what will he do if god forbid he actually commit some mistake? If this small mistake is making him so restless then i hope he really doesnt do any mistakes cause the pure heart he has, he may never be able to forgive himself n i dont want a dhukhiyari Maan!!
And even though he was so high on his ego he made sure her fear goes away n so he starts talking about the place n its surroundings and i found it all the more adorable when he again went back to he MSK mode thinking his work was done as she was at ease!! And that small close Maaneet moment was awesome when she trips n falls on him n keeps on slipping n getting more closer when she tries to get up!! And he totally won my heart when he did the promise of not drinking just by seeing how she held the dupatta on her nose as she dint like the smell of the beer!! Woww m just totally in love with this Maan, he is soo damn adorable!!
Ch16
Dev-Tara, i think yours is the first FF I am reading where these two got such an importance as not only characters but also with the awesome love story i have read on them!! Both are 'ek se badhkar ek' or 'sher ko sava sher' types!! I loved it when Naina gave it back to him when again he came to her demanding the work she had done just before the presentation n was like go for it Tara n show him that he cant always take away the credit of ur work but what next came was a shocker to me!! God Dev is such a smart n intelligent business if only he gets more serious but none the less i absolutely loved the way he used his so called unused brain n got the project done with double budget n hence the profit n poor Tara again had to work under him!! And haww he is not only credit taker but also tiffin chor!! I really wonder who had tough time dealing with another? Dev dealing with her Rule Book, Discipline n her professional attitude or Naina with his unprofessional attitude n having the worlds time to attend all the parties and delaying the work? Who suffered the more? 😆 Anyways i also loved that small unintentional bathroom scene of Dev-Tara's! Dev ka hosh udd gaye hain!
Chp17
Loved it again! You write the updates with such perfections that i really feels that all this things are actually happening in front of my eyes!! I can so very well connect to the Geet's excitement of going on a trip who has hardly went out of the city or state!! Her dancing n seeing if she is looking good n asking Pinky to accompany her by wearing a suit so she doesnt feel left out n i hope too that Darji allows her to wear Jeans when she asks him about it!! And chalo finally Geet checked out Maan warna toh i thought she has some love for floors n ground that she keeps staring at them, it was good progress seeing Geet openly n shamelessly drooling over Maan!! I found it too adorable when she wanted to feel like an heroine of YRF, her dreams n desires are so innocent just like her but she knows that can never be the reality n she has responsibilities on her but the moment she stole for herself when Maan was on phone n did a dance n twirled with her dupatta like those heroines made me smile widely!! And i really liked the fact that even if they doesnt talk to each other she had trust in him when those man started walking towards her n she immediately hide behind Maan n he too reassures her that nothing can harm her now!! And that hug was like cherry on top sach mein and Maan babu ne chance pe dance maar diya, he had his personal heaven in his arms toh majaal hai he wont have his own time looking n drinking her appearance? And can he get any more cute? I mean he breathe heavily just to get off those tendrils off her cheek cause they get a chance to kiss her cheeks? And even i wonder how will be Maaneet's fight? I mean i know they dont even talk to each other toh getting into a fight is totally not happening but i would love to read one? I hope there is one Maaneet cute wala fight in this story where they are arguing on some silly thing!!
And grrr Kabir, what will he get by lying? Does he likes Geet m gald Pinky asked him some logical questions n his lie was out!! And then comes their first ever conversation which starts with "Suniye" it already sounded like a wife is calling her hubby n then comes the famous "hmmm" Maan kabhi nahi badlega sach mei, he n his hmmms!! But this conversation ended with the most beautiful ending ever which is actually the start of Maaneet's journey now, she asking for the persons who gave her notes every wishes to be fulfilled n he immediately mentally saying ke "meri har dua tum ho Geet"!! This had me grinning like a mad girl really!! And for a change i dint mind someone eavesdropping too cause this made Maan realize that he actually never tried talking to her!! And it was totally his day today, like someone has written it down ever so beautifully!! He had her head on his shoulder while sleeping n also got to put the earings and then finally came his "Hi"
And i really liked how he unknowingly fulfilled her dreams toh she gave him his best Birthday ever again unknown to her!! Maaneet moments are so damn romantic n i love reading Maan's POV more cause they make their moments all the more beautiful as he already knows about his feelings n acknowledges it too!!
Chp18
I wonder what it is that Dev is still keeping himself going with Pari n Singhania's?? It cant just be business or that Singhania's are his clients? It clear that he hates being with Pari n knows what she really thinks of him how does what pleases him n yet he doesnt like it n why only with Pari he is like this?? It just cant be cause she thinks of him as her Prince Charming or that she likes him? And wow what that one unintentional bathroom sight has done to him? Just one look of her womanly side n he is gone? He avoiding her n not liking anything in his life but again missing the spiciness or may be missing Tara has made his world go ups side down!! He has become so irritated just cause he is dreaming about Tara n wants to get rid of her but Dadimaa had some special plans n she get him n Tara go to a meeting together n he finally realizes that he has missed being around her n her style of working n how perfectly she corrected all mistakes done by Sasha and how is a thorough professional in just perfect in job!! Glad he held himself responsible too for Tara's condition n regrets doing all this to her!! She has become so weak that she fainted by just from a ball hitting her!! But i wonder what are those bruises n that brunt on her shoulder? I so m waiting to unfold Tara's past!!
Just wanna say m loving all the characters a lottt !!!
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