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bina_a

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1061

hmmm so dev was tryin to avoid Ms. Kapoor!!! so his plan back fired ;) like your intro says lots of fire work between this couple!!! I'm love their story just like the way i love maaneet story :)

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Mishtieeeee <3

@Koolsmile

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1062

Back again Avi , this tym for Locket 😃 😳
Read chapter 18 loveddd it 😃
I can so sympathise wwith Dev 😆
The title first had me thinking of some dark pasts or realities but as Dev's state came in view , I was almost in fits 😆 I dunno if I should rejoice on Dev's state as he got what he deserved or should sympathise wid the rich, carefree, spoilt person who got the taste of his own medicine from a strong-headed woman 😃 yayy Naintara xindabaad 😆
A slammed-door on face can change so much 😆
Bechara Nakul had to bear his anger 😆
I love Dadi's character , so poised n perfect 😃 I actually pitied Dev when Dadi smirked to herself, planning a punishment for him ignoring the highness 😆 n bang on ! She hit the right spot 😆
In the end I got hurt seeing Dev's I-star being hit by the ball but actually , fainting coz of the weakness Loved the feelings of concern ,worry n regret Dev had had while tending Naina n curious also, about those burn marks n bruises on her 😕 Reading more 😳

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dqno1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1063

Originally posted by: Koolsmile
Back again Avi , this tym for Locket 😃 😳
Read chapter 18 loveddd it 😃
I can so sympathise wwith Dev 😆
The title first had me thinking of some dark pasts or realities but as Dev's state came in view , I was almost in fits 😆 I dunno if I should rejoice on Dev's state as he got what he deserved or should sympathise wid the rich, carefree, spoilt person who got the taste of his own medicine from a strong-headed woman 😃 yayy Naintara xindabaad 😆
A slammed-door on face can change so much 😆
Bechara Nakul had to bear his anger 😆
I love Dadi's character , so poised n perfect 😃 I actually pitied Dev when Dadi smirked to herself, planning a punishment for him ignoring the highness 😆 n bang on ! She hit the right spot 😆
In the end I got hurt seeing Dev's I-star being hit by the ball but actually , fainting coz of the weakness Loved the feelings of concern ,worry n regret Dev had had while tending Naina n curious also, about those burn marks n bruises on her 😕 Reading more 😳

Hum toh Dev ke deewane hai 😆

It is so good to see you Naureen

Tum aa gaye ho
Noor aa gaya hai

Badi bewajay
Zindagi jaa rahi thi

-- Gulzar ❤️

Tere aane se mera dard hawa mein udd gaya..

Isse dosti keht hai ya dil ka rishta, samajh nahi aa raha hai 🤗

Edited by dqno1 - 11 years ago

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Mishtieeeee <3

@Koolsmile

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1064

Dev ki deewani to main bhi hun magar sirf Locket k Dev ki 😆
Mujhko to aan hi tha 🤗

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dqno1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1065

Originally posted by: Koolsmile
Dev ki deewani to main bhi hun magar sirf Locket k Dev ki 😆
Mujhko to aana hi tha 🤗

Haan mere liye bhi 😆

🤗

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Mansi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1066

maan and geet are so cute but confused at the same time abt each other.

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Mansi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1067

loved the entire trip thingi and also how maan was being protective of his love

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Aditi.kesari

@Aditi.kesari

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1068

This is awesome yaar. can u share ur other works as well?

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ppriyanka83

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1069

Haaye manali trip (ch-15) hmesha yaad rahegi..esp cabel car incidents..hw innocnt n heart touching..i read it 4 tyms in a row..nd thn Dev n Tara (ch-18) were awsm..

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sessy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1070

part 15-this kabir guy sure smells trouble.even when maan is not sure about geet's feelings he do not want any one to assume anything about her,kya pyar hai yaar

lol maan named Ms.Iyer as his personal dragon 😆.i really did not like the way maan was thinking,but adi's call cleared all the misunderstanding(phew).excellent song choice. my fav lines in this update-

I had promised myself to walk with her come what may and yet at the first hint of something not going my way I broke my promise. If she walks away from me now, I only have myself to blame. I await with bated breath to know my punishment. Am I going to get a chance to redeem myself? Will she even consider a rash person such as me to be her friend?

part 16-my my Dev Khurana is not only an eye candy and a sly fox but has an excellent skills in sales and marketing.

poor naintara has to do all the chores,while the devil is having all the fun.even her ever trusty rule book did not help her much.

my fav lines in this update-

He looked at Dev Khurana wondering if it would be too simpleton-ish to kiss his fingers.🤣

Even yoga and meditation had abandoned her because all she could visualize was her hands around his neck squeezing tight. 😆

Bambi in the clutches of a wolf. That was the first thought that entered her mind. The second thought was her own outfit at the moment 🤣

i am curious to know about her past after reading that her nightmares came back.wonder what had happened.excellent song choice,it suits our devu very well.

part 17-it was fun reading geet's pov.geet is a very simple girl with no interest in materialistic things.

Darji always says that thanks and condolences should always be offered in person.this lines proved how much respect she has for her elders and how sensible she is.unknowingly they both fulfilled each others dreams.this kabir guy is the limits.what does he think of himself.the way pinky shooed him was too good.good job pinky 👏

what geet told her friend about maan was so true.she knows him for a yr and still they never said "hi" to each other.it's good that maan took the initiative and said "hi" to geet.( me doing this)

geet twirling with her dupatta as in some yash raj film heroin was funny 😆.excellent choice of song.u always amaze me with awesome choice of songs for the updates.

part 18-i was absolutly speechless for some time after reading this update.to the outer world Dev seems to be a happy go lucky and party loving person,but deep inside he is a person who do not act bratty and head strong.be it in the case of pari or the way he acted when naintara fainted.

he realized that there was no music today. His mind was a complete blank.this line proves how much he is affected by this incident.it's like he is missing an important part which makes him HIM.

the disclosure of the burn mark and the bruises on naintara came as a shock to me 😲.what had happend to her in the past,i really wanna know.

thx for the updates,loved it.