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Gayathri30

@Gayathri30

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Posted: 10 years ago

#451

Originally posted by: anithu
Hi Friends..

Indeed a Big update..Update will be available tomorrow..

Currently editing in progress..

Please wait for me...

Sorry for inconvinence..

No worries please take your own time we shall wait 😃

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anithu

@amrithatec

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#452

Episode 24

Karthik:Enaa da..Mobile laa nondraa..

Vishnu:Sumaa Game daaa..

Karthik:Nee ellam..chinaaa kulandhaaa madiri Game vilayadraa..We have so many useful things to do laa..

Vishnu:Amama ammam...Raji aa nee correct pannanum..Naaan Lakshmi aa pannanum..We have so much userful things ilaamachaan

Karthik:Dei..I am taking about Our Job..New job...Edhavadhu Sadikanum daa..Adhukkuappram dhaan mataadhellam..Unnaku appidiellam thonalaa..

Vishnu:Enadaa..ennanamo solraaa..

Karthik:Unkitaa poi solren paaru...

Lakshmi Enters..

Lakshmi:Enaa Friends rendu perum eppidi thaan kusu kusu pesikitae irupeengalaa..Naangalum ulaa varalamaa..

Karthik:Lakshmi unga kitaa onnu kekanum..

Lakshmi:Sollu Karthik..

Karthik:Raji Coimbatore Okie..Neenga Trichy..Eppidi friends neenga..

Lakshmi:Adhuvaa adhu periyaa kadhaa..

Vishnu:Lakshmi sollunga sollunga..Anything interesting..

Lakshmi:Amaan vishnu...Oru three weeks kku minnadi..Naanum engamma vum..Nalaa PG Ladies Hostel irukaa nnu search pannikittu RT.Nagar , Ulsoor , Indira Nagar , White field kku ponom...edhuvum sollikramadiri ilaa..Seri Flats dhaan best nnu..Ad kodukalamnu oru Agency kku pogalamnu.. Auto pidika try panaa..Anga..Raji appa..Share Auto owner kitaa Fight pannikittu irundharu..Fight Sema serious aa poikittu irundhudhu..Appo Raji..bayandhu poi...Appa kaiyaa pidichu..vaanga paa..enaaku Bangalorae venamnu aludhukittu irundhaa..Appram Enga amma...appram pakuthaala irundhavangaaa ellam console panni Raji appa vaa velakivitom..Apidiyae introduce pannikitom..Oru naal fulaaa flat thedunom...kadasiyaa..Raji appavum enga ammavum...White field laa oru vidu pathom..Raji appa koncham bayandharu..Enga ammaa.,.every month namaa vandu pathukalam nu solli..indhaa flat aa settle agitom..Appidiyae Nanum rajium friend agitom..Raji romba appavi..romba sweet..yaaru ennasonalum nambiduvaa..Pavam ava...Anaa bayangaraa Kovakari..

Vishnu:Lakshmi Sema story poonga..

Karthik:Unnaku ellam vilayatudhaan..

Lakshmi:Neenga...rendu perum close friendsnu pathalae theriyudhu..

Karthik:Raji engaa Lakshmi..

Lakshmi:Solla marandhuten..Yaaro Kaushik aam..Team Lead..Enga rendu perayum...pakanumnu sonnan...Raji aa pathadhum...I will call you later Lakshmi nnu sollitaan Karthik..

Karthik:Something Fishy..

Vishnu:Yendaa..

Karthik:Onnum ilaa..Lakshmi ungalukku Coffee venumaa..

Lakshmi:Ilaa karthik..Lets wait for Raji..avaa call panrennu sonnaaa..Innum panalaa..

Raji text a message to lakshmi..

Lakshmi:Karthik..Raji is in danger..

Karthik:Enna achu lakshmi..

Lakshmi:Raji "Something is wrong" enaa conference room laa wait pannu nnu sollitu..20 mins agiyum koushik varalaa..Velilaa varalam naa..Door Auto lock agirukku nnu message pannirukaa..

Karthik:Seri vaangaa poi help panaa laam..

Lakshmi:Eppidi dee door auto lock achu..

Raji:ilaa..naan dhaan sumaa kadavaaa saatunae...adhu Auto lock nnu ennaku theriyadhu..Eppo ennaa panradhu..

Karthik:Raji dont worry...irungaa tension agamaa koncham..

Vishnu:Machan..Are we going to break the door..

Karthik:Pinaa ilayaa...

Lakshmi:Venaam karthik...eppo dhaan we are new to this office..problem agiraapogudhu...

Karthik:Seri irungaa..Naanum Vishnu vum Security aa kuttikittu varom..

Lakshmi:Bayapadadhaa raji..Wait pannu koncham..

Raji:Seri Lakshmi..Koncham tension aa irukku..

Lakshmi:Onnum problem ilaa..Security vandadum..Problem solved..

Raji:Thanks lakshmi..

Security:Enaa thambi..

Vishnu:Ananaa..oru chinaa problem..engaa kooda conference room door Auto lock agiruchu...andhaa Room varaikkum vareengala..

Security:Koncham irukaanga...ingaaa innorutharaa pathukaa sollitu..vareen..Ramasamy...naan koncham officekkulaa poittu varen..Kocham aduvaraikkum pathuko..

Another Security:Seri anaan..neenga poittu vaanga..naan pathukuren..

Karthik:Onnum problem ilalaa Sir..

Security:Enga kitaa spare key irruku...Kavalaapadadheenga..

Lakshmi:Apadaa Door unlock agiruchu..

Vishnu:Thanks annan...

Security:Ingaa paaru ma..inimae alert aa irungaaa..Ingaa Conference room Auto lock door..Puriyudhaa..

Raji:Seringa anan..

Karthik's(Mind voice):Raji..nee yen evalvu appaviyaa irukaa.Something tells me..Namakulaa enaaamo iruku..Unnoda parvaaa..unnoda sirrupu...unnoda voice..ennaku edho solaavarudhu..First time..naan evalavu tension aguren..unnaku edho problem naa..Oru ponaa..first time pathadhum..evalavu thonumaa..Pakalam..namakulaa enaa nadakaapogudhu nnu..

Lakshmi:Raji indhaa indhaa thaniyaa kudi..

Vishnu:Paaa..oru one hour semaa tension machaan..

Raji:Sorry enaanalaa dhaan laa..

Karthik:Adhellam onnum ilaa..vaanga..namaa..theriyumbavum..seminar hall kku poganum..Next Half induction irukulaa..

Raji:Correct dhaan karthik...namaa polaam..lakshmi..

Vishnu:Amaan..andhaaa kaushik engaa..

Raji:Theriyala vishnu..engaa ponaarunnu..

Karthik:Elaaam avaralaaa dhaan..Be careful Raji..

Raji:Sure Karthik..

KRVL goes to Seminar room..

Susan:Hi Guys Had your lunch..

Vishnu:Yes susan we had..

Susan:Food court laa sapadhellam..sumaraa dhaan irukum..

Karthik:We will adjust susan..

Susan:enaa girls onnum comment panalaa..

Raji:Karthik sonaadhu seri dhaan Susan...

Lakshmi:Edhellam pazhagirum adhadhaan solraanga Susan...

Susan:Seri take your seat...Ippo Salary account create panaa..Citi Bank/Indus Ind Bank officers varuvaaga..Edhu ungalukku best nnu thonudhu..Select it and fill the form..

Karthik:Sure Susan thank you..

Susan:You are Welcome Karthik..

Vishnu Whispers to Karthik:Enaa machaan..Yosikuraa..

Karthik:Onnum ilaa..Amma appavukku call pannanum..adhaan..ippo panaalamaa..ilaa evening panalaamannu..

Vishnu:Dei office mudinchadhum pannikalam daa..venaaa..nee message pannidu..Everything is going smooth nnu..

Karthik:Hmm..adhuvum seri dhaan..

Lakshmi:Raji idhu oru chinaa vishiyam..Seriyaa..just be careful from next time..Seriyaa..

Raji:Naan adaaa yosikaa..

Lakshmi:Appram..

Raji:Naan romba sandhosamaa iruken..

Lakshmi:Ennadhu..

Raji:amaaan..ennaku oru problem naa..ennakaga three friends irukangalaa..ada sonnen..

Vishnu:Raji...

Raji:Sollunga Vishnu..

Vishnu:Pulliarikudhu Raji..

Raji:Yen Vishnu..

Vishnu:Ungaaa friendship aa nenachudhaan..

Raji:Friends???

Vishnu:Yes Friends..Kaikodungaaa..

Raji's Mind Voice:Karthik...

Karthik:Raji...kupteengala..

Raji's Mind voice:Naaan ennoda adimanasulaa kupdadhu ivanukku eppidi kekudhu..

Karthik:Enna Raji..

Raji:Onnum ilaa..Kupidalamnu yosichaen..

Karthik Smiles..

Karthik:Seri appa call panningalaa..

Raji:Hmm pannen Karthik...

Karthik:Indhaa Door lock pathiellam solalayae..

Raji:Ilaa solalaa..

Karthik:Good..

Raji:Bank officers ellam vanduthaanga...

Bank Officers:Please Raise your hand who needs Salary account on Indus Ind Bank and who needs in Citi Bank..

Vishnu , Lakshmi and Karthik raise hands for Citi Bank..But raji raise for Indus Ind Bank..

Vishnu:Yen Raji...

Raji:Enga appa kku already account irruku..So secured aa irukum..adhaan..

Karthik:Suddenly raise his hand for IndusInd Bank..

Lakshmi and Vishnu shocked to see this..

Bank officer:So neenga rendu perum IndusInd Bank dhanae..I shall give you the form..

Raji:Karthik ungalukkum IndusInd bank dhaan pidikumaa..

Karthik:Ennoda friend kku adhaan pidikum..adhaan..

Raji:yaaru adhu karthik..

Lakshmi:Vishnu ivangaa...Friendship rombaaa adigama ilaa..

Vishnu:Adhey dhaan lakshmi..Enaa acting paaa..

Raji:Enaa vishnu naan act panrennu solreengala..

Karthik:Sumaa irendaaa..Raji act tension agavenaa..Namaa rendu perum IndusInd Bank laa account vechupom..Avaanga rendu perum Citi Bank okivaa..

Raji:Okie Karthik..

Karthik:Raji Pen irukulaa..

Raji:Iruku Karthik..Vangiten..

Karthik:Perfect..Vaanga namaalae poi form vangittu vandhu fill panalam..

Raji:Vaanga Karthik..

Vishnu's Mind voice:Naan paakradhu Karthik dhanaaa..Angel kku appram evaakittum...ivan eppidi kudi pesaamataan..Angel kitayae..Uru uru nnu dhaan pesuvaaan..Engayoo idikudhae..

Lakshmi:Enna vishnu yosikireenga..

Vishnu:Karthik...Raji kitaa pesuradhaa pathi dhaan..

Lakshmi:Idhulaa yosikaa enaa iruku..

Vishnu:karthik koncham..Reserved type..endhaa ponnukitaayum pesamataan..Raji kooda pesuradhu..something something aa theriyalaa..

Lakshmi:Adhey dhaan vishnu nanum yosichen..Raji um appidithaan..Kandipaa Something Something dhaan...

Vishnu:But jolly dhaan..Office laa nalaaa entertainment namakku..

Lakshmi Stares at him..

Vishnu:Enna Lakshmi muraikureenga..

Lakshmi:Job laa evalavu irukum..Idhellam oru polapaaa..

Vishnu:Time Pass lakshmi..

KR comes after finishing the form..

Karthik:Enaa machaan..muraikuraa..

Vishnu:Ennaku karthik nnu oru friend irundhaan..Adhaan avaan engaa nnu theduren..

Karthik:Yen adaa...nakalaaa..

Vishnu:Onnum ilaa Machaan...unnoda Raji kku edhavadhu help venumanu kellu..

Karthik:Dei...medhuvaa..solraa..Ennoda Raji yaaa..

Vishnu:Dei..nadikadhaa...daa..Nee oru ponnukooda pesuradhayae ennalaa nambamudiyala..

Karthik:Yen naan pesaakudadhaa..Raji.is Unique daa..

Vishnu:dei..paathu oru 3-4 hrs irukum..Adhukkulaa..Raji pathi therinchiruchaa..

Karthik:manasukku pidichavangalaa..mansodaaa feel panni pathaa..avangaa unaraamudiyum..

Vishnu:Machanaa..udanae..ungaa amaa kku naan call panni nee eppidi pesuraanu sollanum..Avaanga next flight edhuthae vandiruvaangaa..

Karthik:Onnm nee kilikaavenam..

Raji:Karthik..Oru nimisham..

Karthik:Sollunga raji..

Raji:Karthik...Kocham vareengalaa..andhaa Bank representative kupidraanga..

Karthik:Polaam vaanga..

Lakshmi:Vishnu neenga fill paneeteengala form..

Vishnu:Pannikittu iruken..

Lakshmi:Seri naan poi form fill panadhaa koduthuku varen..

Vishnu's Mind Voice:Sutham...indhaa Karthik kku eppavum macham dhaan..School laa..Sailajaa...College laa andhaa Angel...Ippo Raji..chaaa enaa design anaa life daa idhu...Vishnu unnoda Life time ambition Lakshmi aa correct panradhu..Enaa Problem vandhalum seri...

Bank Representative:Neenga rendu perum koncham andhaa room laa wait pannunga...We will demonstrate Bank Rules and Regulation Please..

Karthik:Vaanga Raji pogalam..Vaanga..

Raji:Ilaa endhaa room laa dhaan Auto door lock agumae..Bayamaa iruku..

Karthik:Naan iruken laa Raji..Vaaanga..

Koushik enters..

Koushik:Hi Raji..

Raji:Hi Koushik..

Karthik Whispers:ivandhaan andha kaushik aa..

Raji:Amaan Karthik..

Koushik:Raji who is he??

Raji:Ennoda friend Karthik..

Karthik Smiles..

Koushik:I had a call thats why.,

Karthik:Bank representative will come now..Ok Raji let sit here..

Raji:Seri karthik..

Koushik fumes..

Precap:

KR Fight..

Keep guessing..

Edited by anithu - 10 years ago

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veda

@sizzling78

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#453

haiyaaa me the 1stuuu

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ammukuty

@ammukuty

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#454

Superb update Anita but felt quickly ended ma 😆 now

Comes karthik hahaha paiyan gaali raji when will you realise

Hoyt feeling for karthik

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ammukuty

@ammukuty

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#455

Eagerly waiting your next update u

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veda

@sizzling78

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#456

it's a fantastic update sis 👏

KV talk was cool 😎 yenda topic yedhutu K pesinaalum namma V adha kadaisila KR luv liye mudikira speciality yaarukku varum sollungo 😆😆

LR's Friendship's FB scene was nice 😊

next scene door's autolock scene was nicely potrayed 👍🏼 it shows R's innocence when R was locked up in a room KVL's restlessness shows the bond of their friendship & K's mindvoice after it was so lovely ❤️

when R called K in mindvoice K asks wht ? was such a cute scene it shows their understanding in few time they spend with each other 😳😳

VL talk was vry funny & V's mindvoice is so hilarious 🤣

when koushik with KR K smartly stayed with R for her safety was so fabulous 😉

precap : yenada story romba smoothah move aagudhe innum KR oda unique speciality ana avanga fight varaliyenu paarthen correctah vanduruchu 😆 but pls sis fight kudunga but same update liye cute patchup scenenum kuduthurunga 😛

by the way when is ur next update sis eagerly waiting for it

Edited by sizzling78 - 10 years ago

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Abinaabi

@Abinaabi

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#457

thanks for ur awesome update sis raji so sweet and innocenta irukka 😳 kartik ku feelings arambichiduchu jolly vl lum super vishnu ore latchiyam lakshmi correct pannaradu ennoda vazhthukal visnu precap kr fighta eagerly waiting for ur update sis

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anithu

@amrithatec

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#458

Originally posted by: ammukuty
Superb update Anita but felt quickly ended ma 😆 now
Comes karthik hahaha paiyan gaali raji when will you realise
Hoyt feeling for karthik

Thanks Ammu for your sweet comment..Hmm ya..Next update wednesday..Koncham KR fight tharalamnnu..Adhudhanae their speciality

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anithu

@amrithatec

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#459

Originally posted by: sizzling78
it's a fantastic update sis 👏

KV talk was cool 😎 yenda topic yedhutu K pesinaalum namma V adha kadaisila KR luv liye mudikira speciality yaarukku varum sollungo 😆😆

LR's Friendship's FB scene was nice 😊

next scene door's autolock scene was nicely potrayed 👍🏼 it shows R's innocence when R was locked up in a room KVL's restlessness shows the bond of their friendship & K's mindvoice after it was so lovely ❤️

when R called K in mindvoice K asks wht ? was such a cute scene it shows their understanding in few time they spend with each other 😳😳

VL talk was vry funny & V's mindvoice is so hilarious 🤣

when koushik with KR K smartly stayed with R for her safety was so fabulous 😉

precap : yenada story romba smoothah move aagudhe innum KR oda unique speciality ana avanga fight varaliyenu paarthen correctah vanduruchu 😆 but pls sis fight kudunga but same update liye cute patchup scenenum kuduthurunga 😛

by the way when is ur next update sis eagerly waiting for it

Thank for your long comment..Wll update on wednesday

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anithu

@amrithatec

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#460

Originally posted by: abinayaabi
thanks for ur awesome update sis raji so sweet and innocenta irukka 😳 kartik ku feelings arambichiduchu jolly vl lum super vishnu ore latchiyam lakshmi correct pannaradu ennoda vazhthukal visnu precap kr fighta eagerly waiting for ur update sis

Thanks Abinaya for quick comment..Next update wednesday..Adhu short fight aa ilaa length aa nnu stay tuned