Buoyant Bunty and his lovely Love Saga ![Update on page 16th]

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Buoyant Bunty and his lovely love Saga ! [SagUn SS ]

From the Horizon ...bright light colors are spreading all over the sky ..Sun is yet to appear ...

In that early morning time Sagarika was sitting on the bank of River Ganga...while the river is whispering some age old stories to the bank ...touching it intermittently as if narrating some past incidents ,and revealing the future expectations !

Sagarika was watching silently the morning rays of Sun and the musical whispers of the river !

She was sharing some of her innermost feelings of her life with the river ..as if she is talking with her mother --- here a young girl is revealing her heart felt feelings with her mother exclusively !

Why ? Why this quiver in my heart ...whenever I saw Bunty? Studied in London and mingled with many in the modern society , but never was attracted towards a person like this! A strong desire ..want to be with him ...longing to meet him, wish to share some exclusive feelings with him , why ..why this Banarsi boy attracted me, pulling me towards him ...want to be with him all the time ..is it love ??'

Suddenly it struck to her mind that he is the same guy who bothered her father on the street once ...and later his appearance near their house made him mad ! Since then he is fuming with anger !

How he will approve for this alliance ? A vast cultural difference between the two families ...how is it possible to fulfill my love and to be with him throughout my life in a relationship ?

Yes he has a special feeling towards me ..it overflows from his eyes,whenever he is in my presence !!'

A smile on her face .. as it spread and brightened up the entire area, the sun stopped on the eastern horizon , thinking whether it is necessary to rise!... Is her smile not enough to brighten up the entire world?

Sagarika!' ...a compassionate voice from behind ..she turned and saw the tranced Bunty in front of her !

There he is ... Papa wants to do puja to Shivji ...sent me to bring some Ganga water ...so for that here I am' - Bunty said ...

Sagarika as if talking to herself ...'oh ! I thought that I am seeing you in my dream ...are you really here ?' --

If you want you can touch and feel me Sagarika ..and decide ...is it a dream or real! OK so you are meeting me so frequently in your dreams too .. please tell me some thing about those dreams..'

No way Buntyji ..no girl will reveal her sweet dreams to anybody'-- her charming smile or her musical words ...which had the hypnotic effect most? ...he slipped into a trance and stood still as if entangled with a strong bind and unable to come out of it! She laughed like a thousand wind chimes that quivered with a gentle breeze !

He came out of that stupor and collected some water from the river in the bottle and before fixing the cap ...he sprinkled some water on her and said ...'Saga ...your mother is blessing you for fulfilling all your dreams !'

Spring reflected in every droplet on her face! She.. with mock anger said...'It is chilly here and you make me shiver ...not fair!'

Bunty with teasing concern ...'OK then let me wipe out the droplets and give you relief and some warmth !'

His mischievous smile and his twisting words..she thought in herself ..oh ...for such charming words of you..I am slipping out of my existence and want to be with you all the time ! She took a deep breath and sighed ..

Saga ..let us make a move,with tourists and pilgrims this place will become noisy again !'

She looked for her car and the driver was busy changing the stepney and said some more repair work is there to attend ..she has to wait for more time to move out !

Bunty offered himself to drop her near her door step ...she immediately agreed and sat behind him on his bike !

Banaras roads are famous for bumps and craters----her one hand on his shoulder and another around his waist ...his looks on the cloud nine ,her occasional touches made him and his bike lose balance ...moving zig zag with overflowing passions...they moved forward ,towards their destination ..The beginning of the new love Saga...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful SagUn OS Seetha ❤️ 👏👏👏 So enchanting and utterly sagunlicious story 😳

SagUn in the morning sharing sunrise on the river ...bike ride home...beginning of a new love story...so beautifully described with words that only you know how to weave so beautifully...
Love the title..buoyant Bunty...he is for sure, with a smile that never leave his face, and with positive attitude toward life and people around him, he surely deserve that name...
You break the ice Seetha 🤗, looking forward to many more SagUn OS/FF to follow.
😊

Here, let me add some of Biki's Caps here...SagUn on the bank of the river...early in the morning

https://i.imgur.com/rheLu6P.png

https://i.imgur.com/mFNO61u.png https://i.imgur.com/vwufAbQ.png
https://i.imgur.com/Uftnnza.png https://i.imgur.com/gi8QJz2.png
https://i.imgur.com/99ADWyK.png https://i.imgur.com/Ul8Yqyg.png
Credit for Caps: Bikica ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful ! Seetha! These are the baby steps for their love to grow and flourish!This reminds me of this song from Gulabii
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NRlbd51Hrtg&sns=em[/YOUTUBE]

Edited by Tulasi14 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lyrics of the song

Pallavi:
meghaalalo telipommannadi
tuphaanula regi pommannadi
ammaayito sagutu chilipi madi

Beet In My Heart endukinta kottukundi
Beet In My Thought ventapadi chttukundi
Oh My God emitinta kottagunnadee

Beet In My Heart endukinta kottukundi
Beet In My Thought ventapadi chttukundi
Oh My God emitinta kottagunnadee

Charanam 1:

hello pilla antu akatayi anandaalu
alapistuvunte swagatala sangeetaalu
adada nemali teeruga
manasu ghal ghal ghallu mani

akasanne haddu paavurayi paapayiki
aage maate vaddu andamaina allarlaki
maarga varada horuga vayasu jhala jhala jhallu mani

om namaha vachhipadu voohalaku
om namaha kalluveedu asalaku
om namaha ishtamaina alajadiki

Charanam 2:

nachhi natte vundi undi recchipoyi pichhesthundi
vaddantunna vinde vinduvanti chinde eedu
guvvala rivvu rivvuna yavvanam yetu potundi

pattaleka eedu nannu mecchukuntundi eedu
pandemvesta choodu pattaleru nannevvadu
antaga baeduru yenduku manaku edurinkemundi

ee tarahaa kompa munchetatte vundi
na salaha aalapiste seftee vundi
yenti maha antha joru taggu nemmadee...

Beet In My Heart endukinta kottukundi
Beet In My Thought ventapadi chikkukundi
Oh My God emitintha kottagunnadee

Beet In My Heart ...
Beet In My Thought ...
Oh My God ...
Lallalalalalla... Lalalala...lallalala...lalalallalala

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Branka my dear friend ..you added a visual treat to my narrative words ! Thanks a lot for liking my OS !
A small beginning ..hope it will lead others to write more beautiful and enduring love sagas in future !
This buoyant Bunty will definitely impress the father of the bride and will win the hand of our Empress !
Edited by SEETHA.K - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tulasi14

Beautiful ! Seetha! These are the baby steps for their love to grow and flourish!This reminds me of this song from Gulabii

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NRlbd51Hrtg&sns=em[/YOUTUBE]

Thanks Tulasi for good words ! Beautiful song ..added a musical touch to my story !😊🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Is this the first OS of Sagun??
Then this is awesome Seetha, love it, so well narrated.

Looking forward for more so jaldi jaldi. 😃

Vinaka.( Thanks)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely OS Seetha, on the banks of the river, a bike ride..., you gave wings to our imagination, thank you dear, very beautiful!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice start...😃 now give us a next chapter 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: LiliWorld

Nice start...😃 now give us a next chapter 😃



I can see Seetha falling from her chair😆. Now that you have fallen already, next OS is not a bad idea!😛

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