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Posted: 11 years ago
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Really awesome...pls continue soon...
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superb update
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Its amazing
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it was amazing plz cont asap n i like your speed of updating but they are always short never mind i also give short n i give late also
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awesome update!!!
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Awesome update
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Chapter 6


Jasmine ran towards the site shouting...

Jasmine : Maam is everything ok?

Aliya : I am ok. But not everything.

Jasmine : Where is Mr.Zain?

Aliya : Well, I should ask you...Where is he?

Jasmine : (Looking around) Mr. Zain A...

Aliya : Where the hell is he? Is he invisible? Farheen dint inform me about Mr. Zain's invisiblity power.

Jasmine laughed.

Aliya : I am serious. Who he dosent know to keep up time...How will he keep his promise.

Jasmine : Maam, Farheen called.

Aliya : ...and asked me not to go to the site and added that his client wont come...

Jasmine : No maam, it seems even he is unaware where Mr. Zain is...

Aliya : Ok then...(Folding her arms against her chest)

Jasmine : ...then...that's it.

Aliya started walking.

Jasmine : Maam deal? What should I tell Mr. Far...

Aliya : Do you think I should finalize this deal?

Jasmine : No maam...I'll ring up Farheen once...maybe he knows the reason of Mr. Zain not attending the meeting...

Aliya : What will he do? He will say that this lady(Pointing herself) has made my client run away.

Jasmine : No maam...Once...just once maam.

Aliya : Your wish Jass...I leave it to your hands. I need to see or else at least talk with Mr. Zain today. Understand.

Jasmine : Yes, Maam. (About to leave and turns back) Thank you Maam.

Aliya : Weird...Mr.Farheen and his client...

Place : Bhopal.

Aayat : (Shouting and jumping in joy) Appi...

She stopped just behind Shabana and her the joy in her face died.

Shabana : Aayat...

Aayat : (Stepping back) Just leave me Ammi...

Shabana : Aayat look...

Aayat : How can you forgive his so easily Ammi?

Shabana : Aayat...look...Aayat...

Aayat : I doubt...Do you love your daughters?

Shabana : Shut up Aayat...This is not the right time or place to talk. Let him come in...

Aayat : I have no rights to stop him.

Aayat had tears in her eyes and she ran back to her room.

Shabana felt a hand on her shoulders.

Zain : Leave it Fhoops. I can understand her.

Shabana : No Zain, I apologize for her...

Zain : No...Fhoops...No need...After all I am the...

Shabana : Come in...

Zain looks around the house. By seeing it he can feel the emptyness...something lost...

Zain : Aliya...

Shabana : Allah knows where she is.

Zain face turned pale. He felt like someone cutting his heat out. The pain...the crush feeling...The fire...Left him speechless for a moment.

Zain : Aliya os not here?

Shabana : No...She used to call once in a day for one month...But after that Neither I got calls nor she picked up mine. She is somewhere lost. Till this day I pray to God to bring her back. I hope she will be in my arms one day...like in the past...Oh leave it...So what? Did you come here in any work?

Zain : No, Just to meet Aliya.

Shabana : Well, Zain can I ask you something?

Zain : Ask Fhoops...

Shabana : Are you married again?

This question...this one question was enogh for Zain to decide that he had to...had to find Aliya by hook or by crook.

Zain : Fhooops...

Shabana : No, last time when Rizwan came here he told that bhabhi is thinking of you getting married again...so only I had to ask this question.

Zain : No...Mom asked me to get married again but I denied.

Shabana : I wish Aliya is here to hear what you say.

Zain : Well, I came in search of Aliya here. But can I stay here for a day or two here?

Shabana : What kind of question is this? Stay here I would be happy. This is your house Zain.

Zain : I am asking this favour because I want Aayat to believe I am not a wrong person and I still love Aliya.

Shabana : Good. But I can say she wont hear you Zain . I mean 2 days wont be enough for you.

Zain lost all his hope.

Place : School office.

Jasmine : Sir, may I know why Mr. Zain did not attend the meeting today?

Farheen : What he was not there? Whare is this guy? I have tried his phone for at least 30 times he is not picking up.

Jasmine : Sir, Maam is angry and I don't think this deal will get clicked.

Farheen : Ms. Jasmine...

Jasmine : Sorry sir.

Farheen could only hear the engaged tone.

Precap :

Zain : Yes Mr. Khan...

Farheen : Where are you?

Zain : Bhopal.

Farheen : What? Any new deal.

Zain : Yes, My life.

Edited by ZaYa_Stories - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you for all your likes and comments on the last update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This is amazing dear!
Cont soon n thanks for the pm

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