Hota kya hai yeh pyaar? SS/FF - Upd Chap 5 Pg 18 10/09 ;)

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WhiteQueen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: rani214
Sweetie fabulous ff ...Lovely prologue
Luv ur writing style...stalking style... wil hav fun reading it also happy dat its pakhi n kamla free story😆
Chap 1- so sad kalpi apne dream man ka chehra nahi dekh saki...patil uncle wrong timing
kalpi n patil uncle convo was nice...loved it
Aryan too is so cute
Chap 2 -kalpi to puri tomboy hai ...interesting
Like nisha n kalpi convo
Shayad mere kalpu ka dil toot jaayega kal 😔...also expecting raghav's entry 😉
Eagerly w8ng for next update n sorry dear for late cmmnt

Thanks of the comments Darling

I'm gald you liked my FF😳

Updating my next chapter in some time, have a look.

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WhiteQueen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: appyK
Swetha mujhe pm nahi mila😡 jaa mein comment nahi karti ( waise bhi abhi tak padha nahi..tujhe suna ne ke liye comment kiya😆)

Ok sirf accha update that issliye comment kar rahi hu...
Kalpi is jhalli.. Wow... Mr.perfect toh aayega.. Raghav toh aayega..
Darn that jhooti informer😡

Ab agar next time pm nahi mila toh jab tu soyegi tab tere bed pe leeches milenge😉

Sorry Appy for not sending PM, but I didn't send PM to anyone this time😳

But surely will send PM for my next update.

Asha isn't jhoot baba, there is some confusion which will be clarified in future chapters😃

Thanks for your comments dear😳

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WhiteQueen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: zindgidilse
Nice update shweta..
kalpi wore tore jeans ..
her dad.care for her very much...his talk with his wife's photo was too good.
nd that boss.,kalpi put cotton in her ears...loved it..
waiting for his mr. Perfectionist..

Sorry Ritu, maine kisi ko PM nahi kiya iss baar, next time will definitely send you PM😉

Thanks for the comments😃

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WhiteQueen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: fairylover
NAUC ka asar itthe b.. Ur Kalpi is inspired by Nisha. N u named one of her frn as Nisha as well... Neways fabulous update.
I am sure Kalpi will her Mr. perfect on Ganesha chaturthi.. she might not recognize him but she will meet him na?? Aryan is a stupid guy. creating MU in name of surprises n her frn Asha... i feel he never took Kalpi's name but she just thought it's for Kalpi. I am happy that Kalpi is not in love with Aryan and just ready to accept his proposal coz he is the one with whom she is most comfortable.

Sorry for late. Continue soon.🤗

Na re NAUC ka thoda asar hai, but this story was their in my mind from quite some time, thoda tips tho jaroor liya hai NAUC ke Nisha se😆, and kalpi ka dost ka naam soch rahi thi tho Nisha yaad aagayi, so used that name😆

And I'll answer your questions about the confusion in next chapter😃

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WhiteQueen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#65

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Ushoshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#66

Oye u didn't pm me for chap 2! 😡 I almost missed this update 😡Aisi nainsafi kyun swetha kyun 😭

Anyways, awesome update... Loving this Kalpi 😃

next tym pm nhi kiya toh I won't like or comment, bata rhi hu 😡

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Erika

@roni_berna

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Posted: 10 years ago

#67

Oh Wow! I like this form of Raghav 😳

Ragna having their cute tiff ☺️ It's good that Raghav knows Aryan's family too I guess 😃

I liked the cute boy Bunty and Kalpi is going to adopt him soon which is so cute 😳

Continue dear 😊

Edited by erikalui - 10 years ago

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Ushoshi

@_TheBlackRose_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#68

Nyc update... RagNa meet n ofcors fight 😆What else could they do? M looking forward to reading more 😳

Again commenting without pm, but this time giving benefit of doubt that u wud've pm-ed later 😉😛

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zindgidilse

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Posted: 10 years ago

#69

res
unres
wonderful update shweta
ganpati idol made up of clay...supereb...even i can also made idol of ganpati with clay...i made it earlier in my school time...oh god.. forget about me
coming to update raghav and kalpi clashed with each other was superb
her mr perectioist entered in her life that too on the day of ganesh chathurti...ganpati bappa moriya

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ButterflyChaser

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Posted: 10 years ago

#70

Are we not going to get pm kya?? ur story reminds me of so many characters in one.. i am loving this Kalpi a lot.. She is cool n lovely.

N tra NAUC fever sach m ni utara.. Ab bunty b aa gya yaha??? But this bunty is so sweet n he made idol n Nisha's potrait as well. I m dying to know what Rags was doing in that appartment. But loved their first meeting.. Soon thier fights will turn into love.. Kalpi had to meet her life partner n she met.

update soon n why r we not getting pms?? Any issue?? If not than pm me yar.. i do not want to miss ur updates.