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Posted: 11 years ago

hopefully the weekend... thank you...

yet to pen it down... kind of lazy... and also lost a bit interest in writing..as of now..

hopefully i will write it soon.. and end the story...

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Posted: 11 years ago

PART 13:

THANK YOU FOR THE LOVELY COMMENTS... JUST SAY I AM LAZY IN REPLYING.. SORRY... BUT I LOVE READING THEM...

THIS UPDATE IS FOR RAJ, ABI AND URVASINI... THANK YOU FOR REMINDING THAT.. U LIKE TO READ THE STORY... THAT REALLY FELT NICE..

The family sat down and had their breakfast... with humi and zoya pulling their legs.. and shared a laugh.. and gaffur smiled at them.. he always dreamed like this.. but I lost hope.. but things happened.. and he cherished, and he looked up to razia having the same parental pride in her daughters.. a bit more on humi.. for being ready to accept zoya as her own aapi... she came forward and kissed both her daughters and did a nazar utaro rasam for them both.

G: zoya can u give me dilshad No..

Z: yeah abbu.. she dialed on gave the phone to the gaffur.

KV:

Asad was happy he was not caught, and he bathed freshen up and stood infront of the mirror only to see the hickey in his neck.. and looked at them... and remembered.. how close they were yday.. he blushed... if anyone told him.. that asad ahmed khan.. will be hopelessly in love with a girl like zoya farooqi.. he would laughed it off... but now it it so true.. love changed him.. in a way.. he never thought.. he remembered his ammi words... love is beautiful.. and being in love... is the best feeling... and he felt all that more...he looked at his cupboard.. and wore a normal tshirt and jean.. instead of his usual 3 piece.. as zoya calls them boring... and he made sure his collar covered the hickey..

As they sat down for breakfast, dilshad smiled at his son.. his dress.. his face.. it loosened up.. and it held the sneaky smile through out... she thanked god and zoya for it.. she always wanted her son to be happy.. and to fall in love... to smile.. to enjoy the small joys of love... he did... now.. she also knows that her son was not in his room last night, she could guess where he was by his small smile in the face.. but she didn't want to confront him.. on this.. she trusted asad and zoya on this.. and she wanted him to cherish this small stolen moments.. of love.. they will be memorable for lifetime.

As her phone rang

D: yeah zoya.. hearing her name.. his smile widened and his attention focused..

D: ok..

G: assalam walekium dilshad..

D: assalam walekuim siddique saab..

G: actually I wanted to invite you all over here for lunch.. so that we can have family get together ..

D: ok .. we will come there by 1.00 pm..

G: ok we will be waiting.. kuda affaiz..

D: kuda affaiz..

As asad looked up,

D: siddique saab has invited as for lunch today..

A: ok ammi.. I will come around 12 and pick u both.. and he moved towards his office..

He sat in his chair.. but the smile never left his face... and he looked at his mobile.. his wall page.. he couldn't do any work... his heart.. mind .. his whole being was filled by one person... his zoya... he couldn't stand it any longer.. he messaged her..

A: r u free can I call..

Z: I am in kitchen.. with ammi.. call later...

A: god save me in the afternoon..

Z:😡

A:🤗



Z... kiss.😳

His zoya... He smiled...

By sharp 12 he picked his family and reached the gates of siddique mansion by 12.30... and he stopped..

Humi watched the car at the gate... and she shouted in the hall... JEEJU is here...and the whole family was at the footstep only to see the car still outside the gate...

Gaffor looked at and he tried to move towards them.. only to see zoya holding his hands.. in a NO..

Z: abbu... give poophi some time to convince Mr Khan,,,

In the car:

D: asad move the car..

A: ammi.. I am so sorry... I was thinking about zoya.. and I totally missed the fact that this house snatched away all your happiness... and bcoz of me.. u have to give up ur self respect and smiling u accompanied me to this house.. I totally forgot... Please forgive me..

D: asad... let the past go... I am here not just for ur happiness but also for my happiness. And my happiness lies urs and najma .. and urs.. lies in zoya.. and she is the daughter of this house... I am going to my DIL.. parents house.. where MR Rashid is staying... yeah.. may be I will be bit upset seeing Rashid.. but I wont hurt or insult him.. past is past... but I will thank ful to him for giving me u and najma.. u both are my life... now will u move..

A: ammi..

D: will u move inside or not.. look zoya is waiting for u.. she indicated... the whole family standing at the door...

D: or I will open and go to her..

Asad saw zoya holding her abbu hands.. and her eyes.. looked at the car.. with expectations.. and it was becoming a bit teary as time moved ..

Asad zoomed in and zoya smiled... and the whole family smiled and welcomed them.. zoya took dilshad and najma for a hug.. and she silently held asad hands. As they moved inside.. they settled in the hall..

Hu: aapi now u can leave jeeju hand he is not going anywhere.. she declared.. and everyone turned towards asya.. and they smiled.. and zoya left his hands and tried to move.. but asad stretched his hands and held her firmly..

As: saali saheba... I am holding my fiance hands.. dear..

Hu: jeeju.. u r already supporting ur wife to be she grumbled..

A: come here..

As humi came close to him. Asad took her for a cute hug.. and held her face and kissed her forehead..

A: be happy like this.. always..

H: thank u jeeju... R the best.. and she hugged him.

Z: yes.. he is.. after all he is marrying me.. she declared..

And humi hugged her sister. And elders smiled.. as najma hugged asad.. and pouted..

R: shall we go for lunch..

As they sat in the table, as asad was about to sit in the side chair, gaffur stopped him..

G: asad.. u will sit here.. he showed the place of the head of the table..

A: abbu..

G: now u r the eldest among this generation... and I am handing over all the responsibility to u and zoya... now sit..

Asad looked dilshad and she nodded her head affirmative.. and he sat down.. with gaffur taking his right.. as zoya came with razia and humi with food.. and saw asad in the chair.

Z: jahapanah.. got his throne here too she declared with smile and pride in her face..

As they served food.. everyone eat with smile.. and dilshad noticed that all the dishes were asad liking and smiled..

D: razia bi.. the food are delicious..

R: thank you.. who actually zoya did most of them.

D: really zoya.. my bechari.. she didn't have to cook u know.. I can do that. I just want her to be happy..

Z: thank u poophi..

R: but she know.. how to cook asad likes.. isn't.. they say .. they way to a man heart is through his stomach.. but it is different fact.. that my daughter had occupied a very special place in the heart of everyone in her In laws..

As they finished and sat in the hall, dilshad gave the gift she brought for all the family members of the house including.. shirin and Rashid..

D: siddique sahib.. she started..

G: dilshad.. u can call me bhai.. now we share that relationship... i.e if u don't mind...

D: ofcousre bhaisahib...

As the elders were speaking.. zoya stood behind her parents and instructed asad with her eyes to speak them about their nikkah. And he signed her to wait... she pulled the cushion. And inserted inside her tummy to remind him about her threat.. and asad smiled at her form and shaked his head in a No.

Shirin: zoya r u pregnant... she asked innocently.. and the whole family turned and aroundto see zoya standing just like that.. and zoya pulled the pillow out... and looked down..

Hu: abbu looks like aapi is very eager to make u nana... and she in bullying my poor jeeju over there... she said..

A: rightly said saali sahib... Poor me..

Zoya came forward and stood infront of him..

Z: oh really ... Mr khan... So I am the only one in hurry for nikkah.. isn't... no problem.. I will spend another 6 months in my parents... she smirked her face and hugged razia...

A: ok .. no problem.. I will be peacefull too.. he replied back..

D: bhaisaab. Looks like they have decided what we wanted to.. though we thought about the nikkah in 10 days,,,, they want another 6 months... then nikkah will be after that only..

G: yeah u r right.. how can we go against their wishes.. he played along.

Zoya and asad looked at each other..

Z: but if u want as to get married in 10 days.. then I am ok... and I am sure asad is also ok with that too..

A: hmmm..

Z: what hmm.. weren't u saying last night.. she blabbared and asad looked like dear caught between and hope she wont spill his late night visit..

WHAT DID HE SAY LAST NIGHT ZOYA.. a new voice came from the front door.. and they turned to zeenat and anwar standing ther..

Z: appi .. jeeju.. and she ran to hug them.. only to see zeenat inginring her.. and went to hug asad and gave him the blessing.. and met with the rest of the family.. and jeeju hugged and smiled and blessed her..

Gaffur and razia conveyed their whole hearted thank you to the couple for bringing their zoya and zoya went and stood behind zeenat trying to catch her attention..

Z: appi.. please...

Ze: asad.. who is she... I am her bcoz u called me and u remembered me.. no boby else did..

A: appi... pls...

Ze: ok for u..

And she took zoya for a hug.. and kissed her..

Z: u too appi.. she whined.. u know appi... asad didn't call u on his own. He got a reminder for uma and raj .. to invite you...ok

As they settled down..

G: they nikkah will be in 10 days... and it will a grand one..

And hugged asad and zoya..

Precap:

Ofcourse the nikkah..i.e the last part..

Note:

Thank u for ur lovely feedbacks. And comments..

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Edited by kals82 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Res too 😆
Unees 😉


AWww Asad an Zoya r too cute !!! 😆 loved them !!! ❤️
Sad taht next part would be the last ! 😭
Edited by SBanoMalik - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
unres

well first thanks for the delication&as much as I am happy reading update,I am more sad bcoz next is last part.

And Kalyani before u end the story I need to ask u: have u disclose all truths? I mean Zoya's ammi actual murderer.
Rashid proved innocent but what about the real curpit?
And about AsYa nikaah: if u r comfortable please put mature stuff on SR&also do post Epilogue 😉
Edited by -ABI- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved the update.. Especially the Zoya threatening Asad part..
Did I read right, the next part is the end??
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely
Hope to see ur next update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely part
family bonding is so sweet
thanx for pm
plz pm me for next part
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Such a cute update di
Full of asya nok jhok
Zoya's pregnancy threat was so awesome. Zoya is already shameless but asad didn't expect this fom him. Indeed love changes a man.
API & jiju is finally here. Thanks for mentioning my name.
Nikkah. Last part? Can you make 2 more parts di? Want to enjoy pre nikkah functions too. Plz with a big puppy face!
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow.. asya getting married in 10 days..
but why last part..?? continue na yaar plz

awesome update
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved d updt dear
Loved Asya & there cute banter
nikah is happening in 10 days
nxt updt last 1
no plz don't end it so soon

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