ASYA SS' THE HIDDEN TRUTH - note/teaser @ 85

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Posted: 11 years ago
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a heart felt thank you for all the readers of my story... for supporting me to write.. and for encouraging me..



take care and keep smiling...




part 2:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/103898658

part 3:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/qubool-hai/3968631/asya-ss-the-hidden-truth-note-teaser-85?pn=14


part 4:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/109922628

part5 :https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/110048743


part 6: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/qubool-hai/3968631/asya-ss-the-hidden-truth-note-teaser-85?pn=30


part 7:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/110316084


part 8:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/qubool-hai/3968631/asya-ss-the-hidden-truth-note-teaser-85?pn=49


part 9:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/110672184

part 10: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/110876778

part 11:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/111480193

part 12:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/112120976


part 13:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/112850657

HIDDEN TRUTH..

There are 2 truth hidden here..

1. Zoya ammi is buried under the factory

2. How knowing the truth leads zoya to find the biggest truth of her life.. her love for asad...

I don't know the full story as such.. will write as thoughts come..

I will try to follow as much logic possible...

Ofcourse this story will be based on qubool hai and the same story line with a little twist from mine. It starts when Rashid out of jail due to the bribe.. and asad knows the truth of the bribe there. Asad and zoya are partners in sorrow, somehow they connect with each other.

By the tanveer is in and out as well she has changed the chip and out of the KV.. never to enter again. THE MOST UNWANTED PERSON IN THE SERIAL..Razia is not completely wrong here. What happened in the factory was an accident.. not an intentional killing, but at the moment to save themselves they used Rashid and shireen love for Rashid forced the brother in gaffur to bind Rashid . they left zoya in the orphanage with thought of adopting her after a month without letting gaffur parents know the truth about it. By the time they came around zoya was out of the country and the records were lost in fire. They still talk about zoya among themselves and humi also know that she has elder sister who is lost.or razia is she acting like that infront of gaffur...???????

Part 1:

Khan Villa:

A: NO Mr.Sharma... he is a criminal... And I want you to appeal in the court against his release.

S: but we don't have proof..

A: I will bring the proof... you just go ahead and appeal and get a date for the next hearing I will do something. He tried to kill my ammi... I wont spare him.

Suddenly his phone was snatched from his hand.

D: Mr Sharma.. u wont do anything like that... If u do like that I will fail a case against you and ur client for false charges. And I want you drop all the work on this case.

S: Mam.. asad sir... he dragged.

D: I will explain everything to him... good evening. And she cut the call and handed the phone to asad.

A: ammi...

D: asad... trust me... I know ur abbu... He is not a criminal... and if u have any love and respect for me.. I want you to drop everything . will u do that for ur ammi.. she asked

Asad just nodded and walked away in fury. He didn't come home for dinner. Around 11 pm zoya came to the dinning hall for water and saw asad sitting in their bench. She made his coffee and sat next to him and waiting for him to talk. Though they cant stand each other under normal conditions, in this bench they left all their egos and differences aside, and shared their deepest thoughts and fears with each other.

A:this is not correct Miss farooqie..

Z: Mr khan.. we don't know the complete truth either.. poophi can be right too..

A: ammi is still thinking using her heart.. MISS F.. she doesn't want to see the real face of the man she loves..

Z: MRK. Love always guide a person in the right path...

A: I don't know about love MISS F..but this is wrong..

Z: MRK.. please let this go.. for the sake of ur family... ur brother and sisters.. need their dad.. and I know the importance of dad presence...

A: MISS F.. are u forgetting about the family of the person buried under there. No body in the family know . they will think she is still missing.may be still searching. she may have children too who waited for her arrival. Even if janab Rashid dint do the crime.. he still responsible for hiding the truth.. he should have come open a long time with the truth.. atleast that person family will know the reality of what happened. Ammi has bounded me by her words.. now I am feeling guilty for the family too. Knowingly I am hiding.. this is not fair... Fair at all. And he kept his hands on his forhead in despair.

Zoya understood asad point of view, and was just stunned his concern for the family of the victim.. and admired his thoughts. Asad will make peace only if he could something for the victim family, and zoya took that on herself to know about the victim and trace the family in her zoya farooqie methods. She didn't want Rashid to go jail, her heart didn't believe he could do a crime like that.

As the morning dawned, zoya looked at her i-pads to know her plan of action.

Zoya will be little bit mix of brennan and bracket two female leads whom I have admired the most in crime investigation... so let see how she goes ahead.

By the way... do let me know... whether u like the concept... I am not greedy though.. a minimum of 60 likes will make me write the part 2..

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DancingBell thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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GUD START KALYANI...👏

IT'S INTERESTING...😳

UPDATE SOON...😊
Edited by aksasya - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow this is a nice concept Kalyani ,,
and looks interesting !
reminds me of soo many beautiful episodes in QH <3
Update sooon !!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Such an excellent story
I hope gazia accepts zoya at last
I really want to see miss bond zoya
If possible team asya in action
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice
so we will get nancy drew zoya
or we will get mr. and mrs. bond haha
is razia really good hard to believed
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved it... Lukng frwrd for nt prts... Continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I'm finding it hard to believe Razia is innocent. However, nice concept Kalyani.. Please continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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concept is awesome!!👍🏼
I hope this truth comes out soon coz Its not in that show!!😡
Love yah..❤️
Miss you..🤗
Update soon!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey kalyani
i liked the way it started
actually this is what i craved to see in QH
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow this is amazing Kalyani di. The concept is awesome. Loved it. Cant wait for next part. Update soon. Di u dont send me pm for this part. Pjs send me pm of next part. Pls pls

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