IshRa SS - You are Mine (NEW) - UPDATED (15.9.14) - last part

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Hey Friends,
Well a small introduction of mine! Im Sunita ( avni_19).😊 I have been here in this forum for around 5 years , turned to I-F Dazzler two days beforee!!😊and yes this is my First Ever story on ISHRA!😳 I dont know hw it will turn out! plsss feedbacks required: positive/negative!

I am writing this story for my dear bestiee Alinaaa ( yhmfever) ! 😳

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Background : Characters same as the show, but a slight change in Ishita's profession! She is a Gynaecologist!

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Plot : Ishita - Raman are aware of their feelings for one another but yet to express it out! Shagun's entry and full on drama! watch out!šŸ˜†

Not proof-read! mistakes ho toh, maaf karna plss!!😳

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Sunday, At 1am midnight :

Ishita got ready to go to hospital for an emergency delivery case.

Ishu : Raman, suniye pls, mein ja rahi hu hospital emergency delivery case attend karni hai.
Raman: theek hai jao. Drive safely. When will u reach home?
Ishu : mostly by 4 or 5am! chalo bye! gudnite
Raman : haann theek hai! Gudnitee! ( as usual, his ego wala style)

Ishita reached the hospital. She was busy with her patients, forgetting all her surroundings.

(Guys, I am not including the delivery process as its not the main plot here! )

She got back to her office tiredd after the complicated surgery. She just wanted to reach home and hit the bed! it was almost 4:30 am! She tried calling her Ravan Kumar but not response. She tried 4 times and then stopped trying further, thinking not to disturb his sleep or else he will start taunting her once shes back home!

She informed her senior that she is done with the case and both mother and baby are healthy and left the hospital!

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At 4:45am

On the way back home, She could hardly see anything as it was raining like hell! After about 10kms drive, she spotted a lady crossing the road and Ishita had to slow down . The lady crossing was not right. She was very slow in crossing and swaying like she was drunk!

Ishita did not feel this right and slowed down and the drunken lady tossed over the car! Ishita got out of the car to help the lady and to her shock it was Shagun! She tried calling Shagun by her name several times. But Shagun was busy rambling something about Ashok and Suraj!

Ishita(ST) : Isse kya hogaya? ab kya karu mein? Raman ko call karu? Nahi... hmmm... I will take her to home. yahan chodna theek nahi hai!

Ishita: Shagun, dekho idhar, gaadi mein baito, i will drop you home!

Shagun did not reply instead she was humming some crap song!

Ishita shook her hard on her shoulders and asked her to sit in the car! Shagun barely could walk and she threw her hands around Ishita's shoulder! Ishita helped her walk and made her sit!

Shagun, mein tume ghar drop karungee!
Shagun: Kya Ghar, Kiska Ghar?
Ishita : *Shocked*

Shagun continued her rambling : Ashok threw my out of the house! woh Suraj bhi tha wahan par! (talli mode )

Ishita couldnot believe her ears and she was confused totally, should she take this lady to Bhalla House! She knew the consequences would be worse than an earthquake or tsunami at bhalla house! yet she had to so something. She drove straight to Mayur Vihar!

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At 5:45am: Bhalla House:

Toshiji: Raman Puttar, Ishita uth gayi kya?
Raman: Maa, woh hospital mein hai. Kuch emergency delivery case tha! waise abhi tak aaya kyun nahi! its going to be 6am!
Toshiji :*Nervous* : Kithne bajey gaye ti?
Raman: Maa, 1 am...
Toshiji: *Nervous* : puttar, usse phone karke dekho!
Raman: Jii Maa! He picked up his cell to see 4 miscalls from her around 4:30am! Maa, ishita ke chaar missed calls!!
Toshiji: Hey Mata Rani, kya hogaya! Cheti phone kar usse!
Raman was about to dial her number and he saw her car in the parking lot!

Raman: Aagayi aapki Bahu! ( half-relieved)

Shagun was standing near the steps, no one could see her!

Ishita rang the bell... Toshiji opened the door. Puttar, kya hua? sab theek hai nah? Toshiji understood something is wrong as her bahu was not happy with something.Toshiji tried shaking her. She was looking at Raman for help! Raman did understand that also!

Raman: *coming near to her* : Ishita, kya hua? tum itni tensed kyu lag rahi ho? surgery theek nahi huyi kya?

Ishita: Nahi, theek tha par... ( and when she was about to say further) Toshiji and Raman heard Shagun rambling cum singing coming inside their house! Raman got furious like Lion!

Raman: Yeh kya hai Ishita? isse kyu lekhe aayi tum?😔
Ishita: She narrated the whole thing that happened!😭

Toshiji: *a small smile* : puttar, tum bahut achi ho isliye tujhe yeh sab karna pada! par tu jaanti hai yeh kya kiya hai humare saat, raman ke saat.

Ishita: Mummyji, Mein bahut dar gayi thi isski haal dekhe! pata nahi tha! I am sorry... (in verge of crying)

Raman felt bad for her.

Raman: Oyeee Lambu ki Girlfriend, yahan kya kar rahi ho? 😔
Shagun : R...a...m.a..n , i am throw...n out of ho.u.se... ( Total Talli ModešŸ˜† )

Raman: Perfect with clapsšŸ‘, toh kisi orphange mein jaana chahiye tha na.. yahan kyu ayi ho? 😔
Raman screamed his lungs out which made Mr.Bhalla, Romi, and Ruhi come to the hall..

Poor Ruhi got scared seeing her dad like this! She noticed Shagun dancing there and she hid behind Raman's leg! Raman noticed this and patted her head slowlyy and asking her to calm down! She couldnot run to Ishima as Shagun was standing there!

Shagun: Hayee Romi, tu bada handsome hote ja rahe hai and threw her arms over his shoulders! almost kinda side hugging him( in full talli mode)

Romi: *couldnt stand ths, pushed her* : cheee.. ghandi aurat! 🤢😔 haato yahan se..

Romi could not stand this and he walked to his room!

Raman was getting irritated seeing Shagun here and as well as Angry at Ishita for getting her home! He picked up Ruhi and went to Ruhi's room to make her sleep again!

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Hall : Toshiji - Bhallaji -Shagun and Ishita!

Ishita didnot knw what to do, how to start! Jhansi ki Rani was getting scared, insecured. Some weird sensations on her mind, body! in short she was getting disturbed!

Toshiji seeing her bahu's face understood ishita's inner feelings and approached Shagun as only she can handle the matter now...

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PRECAP : IshRa Conversation!😳

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Guys, I am stopping here... Rest depends on feedbacks!😳😳

Part 2 : Page 2
Part 3 : Page 5
Part 4 : Page 9
Part 5 : Page 11

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Thank you guys for the likes and comments. It means a lot to me...😊
Here goes : Part 2

Toshiji seeing her bahu's face understood ishita's inner feelings and approached Shagun as only she can handle the matter now...

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Shagun was swayinggg totallyy in her own mood. She was rounding in her place. She was rambling something, it would be better to say she was cursing Ashok and Suraj for spoiling her life!

Shagun was feeling dizzyy too. Her eyes ached tooo.. She couldnot stand or see anything and she collapsed on the floor. Toshiji seeing this : Leh.. Ab kya karu Bhallaji??

Bhallaji : Isski jagah yehi hai.. zameen pe!! ( disgusted look and went away)

Ishita witnessing all this was feeling bad that no-one is able to understand her situation and backing off from helping her. She starts crying!

Toshiji : Oyee Neelu, iss kamini ko Nimbu paani pila dena!

Neelu made her way to Shagun to hand over the glass. Since she could not hold it properly, Neelu helped her gulp the juice in one go!

After that, She looks at Toshiji who is hissing angrily, Shagun demands... muj..he be..d cha.h.iy.ee..

Toshiji :Bed??? hayee!!! no Bed.. tu waisi zameen pe hai nah, yehi so jao! kaminii!!!

Ishita Puttar, tu jaa.. aise ro mat puttar. acha nahi lagta ! jaake Raman se baat kar aaram se! ( toshiji moves back to her room)

Ishita in full tensed and nervous mode moves towards Ruhi's room as Raman is there. She sees Ruhi sleeping peacefully and Raman in half sitting sleeping position! She goes over him and whispers Raman!!

Raman in a jolt wakes up and says to go to their room ( hand language) šŸ˜‰

Ishita goes out then. Raman makes sure his little princess is fine and sleeping.. and keeps two pillows either side and moves out to their room!

Raman: Ishita, kya hogaya tume? You know this bloody bitch is not worth of all this? how could you do this?

Ishita: Raman, I told you na I did not know what to do. My brain just stopped working. Surgery tha itni complicated and I was feeling really tired to think anything.

Raman: You should have called me then once u spotted Shagun!

Ishita : I miscalled u 4 times and u did not pick up! I thought if i ring again u must just start shouting at me and i was in no mood to hear all that!

Raman: Toh bata ab kya karna chahiye?

Ishita goes to Raman.. slids her arm into his and says : I am reallyy soorryy and breaks down. She keeps her head on his arm and starts crying. Raman then understands she is really scared now. He understood she is entering the insecure stage and thats why her brain is not working!

Raman holds her and makes her sit on their bed and gives her water and he held her hands and say : Dekho, you already brought this bitch into the house. Why dont you realise your mistakes. She is not worth of this help! She should be thrown out now. I dont care what Ashok or Suraj did to her. Just throw her out!

Raman : Aaj Sunday bhi hai. I cant go to office. Ab saara din iss chudail ki shakal dekhna padega mujhe!

Ishita : toh ghar mein mat ruko na. Go out for sometime. let she recover from her hangover and I will ask her to move.

Raman: You think she will move like that. She will insult taunt you again and this time, God swear. if she says something I am going to fire her!

Ishita: Raman, kuch nahi hoga! I will try my best. Phir pata hai, Mummyji is supporting me. I kinda like that. I was totally surprised by her calm nature. Mujhe laga she will blast me then and there itself!

Raman: She saw your face going red and crying, isliye kuch nahi kaha! kheir, yeh sab chodo. I just hope usski yeh naasha uthr jaye jaldi!

Ishita : hmmm..

Raman : tum tension mat lene while side hugging her! so jao thodi der keliye! u are very much tired! aaj koi aur delivery cases hai kya? (concerned tone)

Ishita : Nahi Raman, i cant sleep now. Nahi, ab filal nahi hai. pata nahi, agar emergency ho toh, jaana padega. waise aaj shaam ke 3 bajey, i have rounds. I will have to go for that!

Raman: haan toh theek hai na. Sleep for sometime and then see bahar kisiko kuch chahiye and then go for work! Ruhi ke paas main pura din hu! dont worry! ( still in hugging position)

Ishita : smiles a bit and relieved too.. and goes back to bed and sleeps!

Raman(ST) : kuch karna padega iss Shagun ko leke. Cant go out leaving Ishita and Ruhi here. kheir kuch soochte hai baad mein and sleeps off!

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At 10:30am

Ishita wakes up and sees Raman sleeping peacefully.

Ishita(ST) : *admiring her husband* : Shagun yahan hote huye bhi koi tension nahi hai chehre pe! and smiling widely! 😳

Ishita freshens up herself and goes out to see Shagun sleeping in a weird position! Infront of their doorway, one hand up, other down, legs thrown to one side!šŸ˜†

She sees Toshiji and Bhallaji having their breakfast and reading newspaper, and not even paying a heed to Shagun!

Toshiji : Uth gayi puttar. Chal aa ja.. kuch kha le!

Ishita : Mummyji, Shagun ko kya kare hum? kahan drop karenge! Ashok toh bahar fekhwaya tha!

Bhallaji : Koi beauty parlour mein drop kardo! wahan se rasta apne aap doondengee!! šŸ˜†šŸ˜†

Ishita : Papaji, aap bhi na!šŸ˜† Toshiji also joined with their laughter!

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at 11:30 am

Shagun tries getting up slowly with her hand on her head! She murmurs: huhhh! zyada dard nahi hai! Mein kaha hu! 🄱

Toshiji : Oye kamini... yaad hai yeh ghar! Mainu pechna liye? šŸ˜†

Shagun gets up in a jolt and gets irritated with toshiji's talks and asks for washroom!

Ishita-Bhallaji witness this and smile slightly.

At the same time, Raman calls for Ishita to help him. Shagun realises Raman is at home and how will she face him! ( guilt all written on face)...

Raman : Ishitaaa.. Ishitaaa... kahan ho tum yaar!!?

Ishita.. Comingg Raman...

Ishita enters their room and leaves it half-opened!

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Precap : Shagun out ! šŸ˜†šŸ˜†

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Kuch bhi with Shagun🤣

I laughed at her sleeping position If only Cv's handled her this wayšŸ˜†
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mr bhallaji's comment was superb . Laughed a lot.
continue soon dear...
waiting for next update

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