Hota kya hai yeh pyaar? SS/FF - Upd Chap 5 Pg 18 10/09 ;)

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WhiteQueen

@WhiteQueen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: _TheBlackRose_
Awesome!! 👏
Love ur writing style!
Why is Kalpi behaving like me? 😆
Ok, Kalpi going to fall for Aryan, but Aryan already has a gf, I guess Suhana... That's what's going to happen right?
plz update soon...

Good to know that you're like my FF's lead, give me some tips on how you want kalpi to be😆

Updating FF in short while😉

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WhiteQueen

@WhiteQueen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: sweet_aditi
awesome start dear 👏👏
i lov ur way of writing.. n thanx 4 pakhi n kamala free ff 😆
nw update next part soon 😃
n when will be raghav ki entry?? is dat khadoos boss of kalpi is raghav??
lots of q na?? 😃
so update jaldi se 😳

Thanks for double post😉😆 Raghav ki entry me aabhi dher hai, hero hai zara dher se entry marega😛😆😆

Updating FF in short while😉😃

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WhiteQueen

@WhiteQueen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: zindgidilse
wonderful shwet@
ur style of presenting the story like we r watching the beginnig of a movie.
nice introduction to the characters of the story..🤗

Originally posted by: jiya007
Awesome update and love the way you narrate the story, continue soon

Originally posted by: -HeyJude-
Nice one whitequeen

Originally posted by: smileysmile
Wow, Shweta, your writing style is so different. Its really good. Loved it. Waiting for the next update.
Thanks 😊

Originally posted by: appyK
Loved this narrative style.. Nicely written swetha.. Continue soon..

Originally posted by: sunyy
Good start waiting for rags.

Originally posted by: niru04
Nice story.ur writing style so good.update.soon

Originally posted by: chahat4u
Hey I loved it sooo much. Loved your narration style! 👏 😃 Please-2 continue soon and do pm me please. 😊😃

Hey you all Thanks for reading my FF and leaving you comments, much needed.😃

Updating next chapter in a while have a look😳

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Sevenstreaks

@Sevenstreaks

Trailblazer

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Posted: 10 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: WhiteQueen

Thanks Sandhya😳

Why did you feel the father daughter relation is like in Bommarillu movie🤔, I will watch it again😉

may be because of perfect father and messy Daughter😆...

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Wild_Cat

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Posted: 10 years ago

#45

😲haila main itna late kaise ho gayi😲

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WhiteQueen

@WhiteQueen

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: fairylover
It's awesome sweetheart.. specially the way u narrated it n mind it before entering the rooms... U r not allowed to enter RagNa room while they are doing *Ahem Ahem*. U can close ur eyes and tell us what u heard.😆 Thodi cheating b chalegi... u can peep from keyhole but unhe disturb na krna.😉
So Kalpi is not able to see his Mr. Right's face in dreams.. Aryan has gf n Kalpi is gonna be heartbroken on knowing it. Great. Thanks for pm.

BTW hows u?? I heard u were unwell.Hope everything is fine now.

Thanks for you comments Vish, I love stalking so choose to write in narrative style. I wanted to write as if I visualize stuff, I'm glad you liked it.

Regd RAGNA private moments, thodi cheating karongi, keyhole se unhe dhekungi thaki woh disturb na hoo😆😆

I'm feeling better darling. Just updating next chapter in a while have a look😳