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.ButterCup.

@.ButterCup.

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#901

chapter 19A -B

I'm totally spellbound..

u r an amazing writer..

while reading these two parts

my skin broke into goosebumps..

especially what khushi had done for him and

the realisation he felt that

he is in love again with the same girl..

so he finally shares his past with her..

i just loved arshi convo..

part B end was superb..

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.ButterCup.

@.ButterCup.

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#902

chapter 20A-B to 21..

loved arshi moments they spend in kitchen..

i just want to give a tight hug to arnav..

poor he also going through so much..

20 par B was so cute..

loved the way khushi calm him..

each line and emotion touched my heart..

Aww nani and Anjali teased arshi..

totally enjoyed it..very light hearted updates..

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.ButterCup.

@.ButterCup.

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#903

Chapter 22 to 23 AB

Splendid parts..

First of all the quote you share .. It's awesome

3 words, 8 letters, 3 syllables, 5 vowels, 3 consonants, 2 nouns, one emotion, many meanings, a big lie, a rare truth: I LOVE YOU!

omg such a lovely confession..

He is so sweet .. He buys a teddy for Khushi..

Gracefully written.. I think this is my second most fav chapter..

khushi hiding something big from arnav

And arnav sensing that.. & It hurt him that she didn't trust him..

Finally, khushi open up and told the reason why she come again in arnav life..

And TG arnav misunderstanding got cleared..

Glad to read that some light romantic moments between them..

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.ButterCup.

@.ButterCup.

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#904

chapter 24

bravo!👏

i think the whole ff is my fav..

reading every part..

making me fall for this story again and again..

i just loved every bit of this story..

beautiful is a little words..

but what u convey in this part..

i'm totally spell bounded..

Brilliant piece of writing.⭐️

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neha_shah

@neha_shah

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#905

All chaps r nice but ch-23 /b is exceptionally good specially d touching part was khushi getting angry irrespective of arnav being angry or not. khushi is sooo sweet! :)

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arnavini

@arnavini

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#906

wow wow wow 😊 😊
wat a superb thread ...
this entire ff is a classical journey of my lovely arshi..
and all thanks to u..

its tremendous...

i think its hard to describe the words.. about deir love and hw u hav put down in ur ff.. its jst outstanding.

i really likd part 24.. as it was a total fairy story .. of my arshi.

hats off for such a lovely ff...

u are a.superb magnificent writer...