How I Met Your Mother ||Sandhir FF|| Chapter4 in page 26

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Hello everybody!!
Excited for Sandhir kiss, yeah me too 🤣
Ohk...m back with another torture, Yes I am starting another FF
You have seen the title I guess, but let me disappoint you by telling the story has nothing to do with the show xD But a dialog or two could be seen in my updates.
Here is the prologue, Happy Reading!! 😆



How I met your Mother


(Credits- -Keoli Appy-)


Despite the fluster of the traffic and dust from the streets thereabout, that park was so quiet and alleviating. People were roaming, children were playing. Though in a isolated corner, a man and a small girl was sitting in a single bench.

"Its half and an hour you are sitting like this. If you have a problem you can share" said a five year old girl glaring at him. "It's none of your business, little girl" he said not even looking at her. "Then please take your grumpy face and seat somewhere else" she rolled her eyes. He looked up to see the girl, and he saw a small girl wearing a small jumpsuit with a tight ponytail looking at him. He couldn't help but smile, she was so cute with those peanut sized eyes. "Umm...love problem" he spoke still not moving his gaze from her. "I knew that by looking at her face" she mumbled. "Once upon a time there was a guy..." he started his story. "Can't you cut it short, I don't have the whole evening" she yanked. He giggled. "Okay! Guy and girl met, they fought, guy falls in love and proposes her, but came to know that she is married and had a child" he spoke in one breathe. "You didn't even know that she is married? How foolish of you" she was flabbergasted. "How could I? She is divorced now, and she doesn't even look like she was married" he lowered his gaze. But again looked at her, a he thought she might not know the meaning of the word. "Divorce means.." he started explaining. "I know, what divorce means" she cut him off. He could see pain in her eyes. "I hope the girl loves you too" she muttered and started moving from there. "What's your name?" he asked from behind. "Does that even matter" she said and went away silently. He looked at the small figure disappearing in the fog. "I wish someone loved my mommy too" she thought while moving out of the park.




Did you read it 😲 I know total crap, but kya karun "Dil hai ki maanta nhi" 😆
*see people glaring*
*starts running*
Ohk throw whatever you feel like but not eggs, please 🤣 I am non- vegetarian but doctor ne mana kia hai khane se 😭 🤣

P.S- If you wany PMs, then like this post and buddy me. So I could stop disturbing other people!!
And you can also check my ongoing FF In love with my Psychiatrist

Loads of Love :*
Sush 😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
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INDEX
Prologue- UP
Chapter 1- Page 7
Chap 2- Page 13
Chap 3-
Page 20
Edited by sushie166 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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res. 😎
UNRES-

Kitni bari waali kamini hai tu..mujhe blackmail karti hai? 🤣[))] chal...moi won't update TOTR next month! 😡



😆

I loved the concept yaar...Bachi bohot pyaari hai and is a lot like RD too! 😉

update the next part! ABHI! 😳

P.S.S Abhi un-res karna mere waale pe! 😭
Edited by arshifan2012 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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you got me at the title ... I love that show xx
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Posted: 11 years ago
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diff story line
i think dat girl is sanyus daughter
thanx for pm
continue asap
plz update ur anoder ff also :))
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh ho new ff gud going dear

The proloug seems super intrstng the plot is so new n refreshing

Mi to title padh k hi fan ho gai 😉

N u were saying its boring its super awsmr totally luved it

I think dat girl is sanyu daughter n the boy was none another our hero rd n he fell in luv wid sanyu

Dat means little girl wish granted

Luking frwrd for amzng updtes do update soon eagerly wtng

Keep smiling dear 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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interesting concept dear... really loved it... eagerly waiting for updates...pls update asap yaara...
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i think i have already guessed most of the story concept! I don't think i should reveal it, and let it stay in the dark as a suspense, but i guess everyone else also understood! And coming this story, i really wanted a story like this one to read, but never found anyone writing it up this way! I really am loving this concept of the story, and its already in my favourites list! Thanks a tonne for coming up with this wonderful story and for pm'ing! I can't thank you enough for this story! Continue jaldi jaldi! Keep writing and lots of love! <3
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wah wah kya baat hai yaar,nice concept,i know that girl is sanyu's daughter and rd is also talking abt sany,hai na?
thanks a lot for the pm yaar
lots of love
pari
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Sush di superb prolouge its relly awesome i think o girl sanyu ki daughtre hai?
thanx for pm me updet asap.😳

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