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Posted: 11 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: crazy_sweeto

Awesome dear, I am really glad that you thought of bringing social issues in this story. In this way we can aware those who still think of their family before their dignity and are reluctant to protest. You did amazing job. And about this story I don't have words to explain. I don't feel pity or sympathetic towards Sanyukta but I feel proud of her and indirectly on you that she decided to fight back and not to mourn over her loss.

And I just realized that this was my longest comment ever.😛

Love
Aparna



You made me feel so special :*
Thanks 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82
sushmit so u r a boy...well mine is payal..😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: rajdeep_goldie

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="6" color="#993366">sushmit so u r a boy...well mine is payal..😉
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heyy m girl 🤣
its sushmita xD
HIE payal...!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: RisingPhoenix

That chomu Sameer. He is just disgusting. I hate him to the core of my heart😡He is just pathetic. I can not tolerate him anymore 😡
How on earth can any man disown his child???😡
And Sanyu's dad. God he is same as his good for nothing son-in-law 😡
He never respects his daughter
For Sanyu I would say she has to fight now. For her as well as for the little kid she has with her.
Feeling really bad for Nysa 😭
Poor soul I pity on her
Precape, yay I am excited for our hero's entry 😃
Plz now I can't wait
Update soonish
Thanks for PM me 😃
And yes, u r fabulous 👏
Hats off to you 👏



Itna gussa 🤣
Yup , people like them should be killed with acid.
Thank you so much 😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
#85


Thanks 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: SanDhiraddict

Yay its me who is first at liking and commenting on this chapter..😃 Never before achievement by me this time. 🥳Yeah...congo 😆

Nice start dear. Loved it.
I already started hating Sameer and Mr. Aggarwal...hope they are not going to be recurrent and frequent in this ff. Even I hate them, but they will be a few more times, just show the real faces of these cruel people 😉

Sanyukta is a fighter though started doubting that since engagement episode..nevermind that's in the show only but wait she shown some affection in this chapter too even after they disowned her. Arrrggghhh girl you have done enough now don't let your family be your weakness or Achilles heel. I am glad you made her do that. Yeah, she pissed me so much after that episode. So, am trying to make her do things which I want her to do in the show 🥱 But then a little bit of typical Indian girl also neede to be shown.

Nysa seems a cute and intelligent little girl. I already started adoring her. Poor baby but she is strong too.I am sure she will be the central character in this story. (*Duh it has to be afterall it is HER mother we are going to read about*). She is too cute, I love the pic of that small firl in the banner. So proud of myself to search it out. 😳

Kastuki is a sweetheart...never leaving her friend and never fails to point out obvious things ignored by Sanyukta. She is always a helping hand, thats what frenz are for.

OH...is this going to be based in Norway? I so love that country. Stories of Vikings, Nordic mythology are my all time favorite.Though they are not going to be here but Norway is enough for me. I can never forget my brief stay there. So loved that country. Oh, you had stayed there, then I had to be really careful while describing the country. Forgive me if I write anything wrong as I dont have much knowledge about it and it will be my imagination and a bit wikipedia 😉

About the precap...*smirk*...I am waiting to know THE Randhir Singh Shekhawat. And your wait ends here 😆

Thank you for the PM. I'll wait for the next PM and update eagerly. Updating now!

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Posted: 11 years ago
#87
So here is the second chapte, and yeah its about the hero 😉
Nothing sort of his character is described here, we all know how is he. But yes, in this FF he is a bit more polite.
Ohk, I dont know why the song "tera dhyaan kidhar hai, yeh tera herp idhar hai" ringing in my head 🤣 am so crazy xD

Chapter dedicated to Swagata di (Sandhiraddict) - Thank you so much for liking this, I hope you like this part too. (I stalked your name from Pari's FF 😆)
Happy Reading.




Chapter- 2

"Renuka Aunty, where is he?" asked Parth to Renuka who was busy setting breakfast in the table. "He is sleeping till now" smiled Renuka. Parth laughed and went to his room. He slowly opened the door to see him sleeping like a pig in the bed. His whole room was messed; his shoes were in one corner and socks at other. Parth face palmed. "Oye, khumbhkaran ki aulad, wake up" he pushed him. "Let me sleep" he said in an irritated voice. "So, who told you to be awake for so long" said Parth. "I was busy completing the report of my new project unlike you roaming with your girl friend every time" he said and pulled a pillow and covered his face. "I don't understand what problem you have with my girlfriend, she is so nice" complained Parth. "Yeah, she is nice, you said that for the previous one too" said Randhir waking up. He understood that Parth won't let him sleep anymore. "But Vidushi is nice and we both are really much serious about each other" said Parth, Randhir rolled his eyes. "Why do have so many problems with relationships" asked Parth. "I don't know, I mean it seems so time wasting to me" said Randhir taking out the towel from cupboard. "You will understand the value of relations when you will fall for someone" said Parth. "My life is fully planned, I will never fall for anyone" he winked and went inside.


They got ready and went to his private basketball court. It had been their weekly Sunday routine to play a match against each other, where as always Randhir used to won. "So, what the problem in being in love?" asked Parth dribbling the ball. "There is no problem, but I think love is overrated" said Randhir snatching the ball from him. "Dude, overrated?" asked Parth waving his hands. "Yeah, it's all bullshit; I mean we can love only our self and our closed ones, and not meeting a random girl two days before and crossing all limits to make her happy" he said aiming the ball in the goal. "I am desperately waiting for the time when you will fall in love" said Parth. "And that time won't ever come" said Randhir after doing the goal. "We will see to that" said Parth confidently. "Mark my words, Randhir Singh Sekhawat will never fall in love" he emptied the whole bottle of water on his face and body rather than drinking. His muscular abs and chiselled body was shining due to the sweat and the sight was breathtaking.


"No one will ever believe that THE Randhir has this side of his also" said Parth while Randhir was busy buying tickets of amusement park. "Dude, if you have done with your nonsense then let's go I am in no mood to destroy my Sunday for your ramblings" retorted Randhir. "Why are you so bossy in the office" asked Parth again, eating the cotton candy. "So that no one takes me and my order casually" he stated as a matter of fact. "I want to tell you something" said Parth hesitatingly. "I knew it, something is going in your head otherwise you won't have been irritating me, rather would have been pouncing on that cotton candy" remarked Randhir. "I have invited Vidushi and along with her Shivani is also coming" said scared Parth. Randhir narrowed his eyes. "Run before I kill you" said Randhir. And Parth started running and Randhir behind him.


They had a nice outing, Vidushi and Parth were busy with their PDA, while Shivani never left a chance to cling on Randhir, much to his annoyance. They had their dinner and moved back to their home. "Dude, don't you have your home, why you keep on coming to my house" yanked Randhir. "People think that I am your friend but I am your cousin and I have all the right to come here" Parth made a face and entered the house. They were having a family time but Parth again started the same topic which Randhir hates. "Aunty, why does he runs away of relations so much, I mean he is 27 but still no girlfriend" he made a face just to tease him. "I have no idea dear" said Renuka enjoying the chat. "Dude, having a girlfriend isn't some possession or status symbol. You had so many yet see am more successful than you" he spat back. "Still dude, I hope you aren't a gay" laughed Parth. "Yes I am, and you know what Vidushi will leave you anytime, and then am going to marry you only" said in an irritated tone and went back to his room, while Parth and Renuka laughed still their stomach pained.


"Yes Mr Mehta, you called me, is there anything urgent" said Randhir in the phone. "Sir, I told you about the vacant post of Mechanical Design Engineer, we have selected a girl from India, she was the topper of the prestigious institute FITE" said Mr Mehta. "That's interesting, has she responded to the appointment letter?" asked Randhir. "Yes sir, she replied in positive, I am forwarding you the mail" said the person in phone. His laptop beeped, and he opened the mail. "Ms Sanyukta Agarwal, I am so eager to meet you" said Randhir smirking.


I know this was short, but I didn't wanted to start the next part in this story.

Thank you so much for the likes and comments, am so overwhelmed!

I hope you like this too, do like and review


Loads of Love :*

-Sush 😳

Edited by sushie166 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
Nice chapter. thanks for PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
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beautifuly written dear... will be waiting for ur next update... :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely update
Rd and Parth bond
Super cute
Update soon

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