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THANK YOU ALL WHO LIKE MY WORK

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I am not professional writer learn every thing from here ,If any one think my work Matched with any writer tell me I will remove soon
plz tell my fault n my lacking too if any thing is not good tell openly MY English LOL is not good so bear my English

sorry in Advance

PART 14

@ geet house evry one having there BF
they live like family so had their food together

GEEt : tai kaha hai woh aai nahi BF k liya she asked worried for her

MEEra : in her room said with sadness

evry one look each other control their anger n
geet get up to went to tai knowing well she will not eat any thing today

in room tai just holding letter near her heart and tear failing from her eyes she always show that how she tough but now she look so broken aise toote hui jaise kabhi jud hi nahi payegi


geet just control her tear and mummer pata nahi letter bhi ku bhajata hay just showing that he fulfilling his duty just duty no love affection tai ko aise dekhana


she went near tai and ask with low voice tai please control yourself and tai who alwyes show herself like coc**t so tough just hug geet and cried like small kid she just srying her heart out why he , he doing htis muje uska paisa , letter ye nahi chiye wo muje chiye sirf ek baar saal main nahi milne aa sakta sirf ek baar main jada to nahi maan rahi hu ku geet child hoke bhi main khud ko childless mehssos karti hu ku ...

TAi : ye money ye latter uska ehsas nahi deta ulta jada hurt karte hai bahot jada dekh na kiya usko meri yad nahi ati meri zarort nahi lagti usko maa ki zarorat sirf bachpan mein hoti hai kiya bol na geet ... n she break down in geet arms

geet want to console her but dont know how then pari meera n all came there

geet eying n wink @ pari to satrt

PARI : ohhh god yeh rona dhona woh bhi subha subha tai kahi apney tulsi wala drma tu nahi dekha na said with sarasticly

TAI ; ????😕

PARI : ohh ho tai ap na bilkul daily soap ki herone ki tarha dailogue mar rahey hoo aur agar kisi nai ap ko ase dekh liya na toh usko heart attack ajai ga 😆😆😉

tai is confuse with her nutanki geet n meera
continue

GEET ; toh kehna kya chati hai humri tai buri actor hai ha poring oil

meera : haha bol toh yeh kehna chati hai humri tai khrab dailogue bolti hai

PARI smile sheeply arey nahi mein nai aisa kab kha mein toh yeh keh rahi thi agar kisi nai shanta tai the great LANDLORD ko rota dekha to woh attack say mar jai ga q k tai to rulana janti hai runa nahi n wink 😉

meera n geet supers there laugh meera mumer in geet ear now valcano will burst soon
1 2 3

TAi : kyaaa 😡 bola tuna main rulana janti hoo came close to pari n twist her ears n said ab bol
PARI : ahhh tai dard horaha hai

TAI ;in anger 😡 dard acha hai mein toh rulati ho na huh ek toh rent time par nahi deti aur muje par ilzam lagati hai twist her ear more but this time little

PARI : ahhh fake crying tai ap na emotinal mod mein zyada achey thay aur rent ki bath mat karo mein next month dongi ab toh chudo na mera ear made inncoent face

TAi : tera next month kabi ayga haa knoting her brows😳

geet came between n realse pari ears from tai

GEET : janey doo na tai rent agley month packa de degi pinch her throut n said 😃

TAI : yeh toh bol rahi hai jis nai 7 month say rent nahi diya hai huh now table turn on geet

geet sab kuch bhol jati hia par rent nahi mumer herslef but meera listen this laugh 😆😆

geet " pout tai 7 month hi toh hai agely month le lena 😕😭😉

tai: saven month he toh he mimick her aur tera agley month kabhi nahi aay ga yeh mujko pata hai 😔

MEERA : ajai ga tai give her side hug other also said this give her asurance n wink both 😉

Tai : ok meera sirf teri wajh say chodti ho dono ko pointed them aur tum dono ki nutanki ban hogye to chalo bhook lagi hai mujko jab dekho tab nutanki kartey hoo

geet pari OOO 😭😭😭

all left when geet were leaving tai came n hug her

TAI : toh yeh sab jan kar karti hai hai na

geet smile hug her too n said jantey ho toh asy sad q hotey ho ap tai ap ek bety k liya sad ho aur hum sab jo ap k pass hai unk kiya 1 k badle u get 8 daughter unka kiya haa

tai came out from hug n cup her face n kiss her forhead hmmm tu sahi bolti hai

GEET :n sheeply 😃😎 tai wase mera next month ka rent maaf na

tai in her terence hmmm

n then came out realze what geet said

TAI : maaf 😡 tera rent oh mei kabhi maaf nahi karo gi LANDLORD HOON free mein yaha koi nahi rhta samji said with fake anger

GEET ; ley abhi toh bola made confuse face

TAI : hai woh toh tunai mujko ematoinal kardiya
geet gigle emaotional nahi tai emotional

TAI irritate n said ha wahi tera jo bhi

geet laugh aloud to see her irrate n pinch her nose

geet : chalo BF KARTEY HAI

TAI in her usual anger mein nai kab mana kiya chal

to be continue

here is part 14 i know it only geet side but i want to show relation between geet n tai

this part is written with the help of Mahimaan soo lots hugs to u mahi

thank you soo much for all who like my work n bear my tuti phuti angrazi aka english

NOTE FOR PM add Mahimaan n pooja

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THANK YOU ALL ONCE AGAIN FOR LIKING MY LIKING BUTTON IS NOT WORKING I DONT KNOW Y ONLY ME 😭😭😭
BIG HUG U ALL
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thank you

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Fantastic update!!!Loved it...waiting for the next update
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lovely update sunami came on geet bed awesome maan falling 4 geet & thinking if she is fine great
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely update fariya..
the bounding between tai and geer is really so great..
kabhi kabhi hum bacche yeh bhool kyu jaathe hai ki hum ajj jo bhi ha wo humari parenta ki wajaha se hi hai..
and jab unlogon ko humari jaroorath hothi hai tho humari ek jhalak unko bohut thakath dethaa hai naki humari madath kyu ki yeh madath karna tho hume unhine sikhaya haina..
just want to beat that son of tai..
but also feeling happy to see tai and all bonding..
pari and geets nautanki😆
just so cute yaar..
great work fariya ...
continue soon..
eagerly waiting for next..
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely fariya geet went 2 c tai who was cryng coz of her so calld son's letter😭
geet want 2 console her bt cant find d exact way😕
den came pari nd meera nd startd their drama😆😆
finally tai is came out 4m her emotional thing 👍🏼
geet nd tai share a nice bond👏
waitng 4 d nxt part

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