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Posted: 10 years ago
well every one has their point of view
prashant he is a great men n his thinking is sooo positive
like his character before the way he care geet n maan
pammi uff really money is not every thing
u will buy luxurious but not care love n relation
maan n all left the mansion
hope now there is no hurdle in maaneet life
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Posted: 10 years ago
Fantastic update!!šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘Geet felt guilty and she hesitants to face Prashant but he made it her easy..he is thinking so positive...Loved sisters talk is so nice...Loved Maan's outburst...Pammi😔😔😔 Now Maan leaves KM with Dev and Annie...hope everything will be fine in Maaneet life..loved it so much...waiting for the next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update...
Prashant ne bahut achha kaam kiya...Geet bole uss se pehle hi baat kar li...aur ye baat ussne Jamai ban kar nahi par beta ban kar kaha...
Pammi ki baat sun kar maan ko gussa aa gaya aur pammi ko bata diya ki Geet usski biwi hai...
Lekin maan ko ghar chod ne ki koi jarurat nahi hai...Dev ne sahi kaha pammi ko hi jana chahiye...tabhi maan aur Geet santi se reh payenge ...
Arpita ne bhi jo kaha sab thik hai ki unko maa ki chinta ho rahi hai par woh maa ke pyaar ke khilaf nahi hai...

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Posted: 10 years ago
Anu... I'm sooo sorry yaara for being the late lathief ;) i had some unexpected work but then I'm back now. well coming back to the update as you said i loved it anu :) maan-pammi confrontation n also dev n annie's reaction to maan decision was great. Prashant is the real hero what can i say more Wowww... Ankitha i won't complaint any body in this situation will react the same way. Arpitha being a protective daughters is worried for geet's but wud she try to think from geet pov!! superb update :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Anu when r u updating next
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely update
prasht understanding geet her suitation
she confused face him ...geet was amazed prasht talking her relation with maan ...she proudly him got son
maan shouted pammi leave this mansion his sibilings went with him
geet daughters realised her mistake understood her mother
waiting for next update
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Posted: 10 years ago

MG FF-ESSENCE OF LOVE-Thd-10 / part-141/pg.no.97/26/8/2014




Maan called Adi ,...
Maan:- Adi,.. I want a palace ,.. search karo pura Delhi ,.. ek isa palace jo rayalty aur glandiour me kisi bhi cheeze me K.M. se kuch kami nahi honi chahiye ,. u have 2 days time ,. jaldi karo aur price jitna chahe uthna hosaktha hai ,.. i never mind,.. per it should be one and only master peace honi chahiye ,. samjhe thum?
Adi :- ji sir ,. i will find.
Maan:- o.k. then .
Maan laid on bed but no sleep. His body refused to take rest without his soul, as he left it with geet. He rolled on bed no. of times but now his heart and mind also not listening him. He got up at once and started to go to hospital driving himself. he dont know wat hapens if arpitha is there,.. r create a scene ,.. he dont want to create drama before geet, dont want to hurt her . But he has to go , he cant stay without her.
He is driving thinking about wat happns? dont know geets family accepts this relation? Agar wo sahmat nahi tho wat will geet do? wo meri saath dogi ya nahi? pehle wo ek maa hai aur maa ki mamata unse kuchbhi karwasakthi hai,.. I know she loves me very much per ,.. pata nahi ,.. kya karegi? agar maa ki mamata jeet gayi tho mujhe kya karna hai? mai geet ke bina nahi ji saktha? kya hoga? hey bhagwaan humari madat karo ,...

He stopped the car and entered in to the hospital corridar fearing to face anything. He reached geets room. There he saw Prasant sitting in a chair closing his eyes. He stood ther wondering to wake up him or not.Prasant opened his eyes and looked at him ,. he expected this ,.. isiliye tho he sent Arpita home. He now better understands his state and condition and especially his love to geet .Maan:- wo,.. wo ,.. mai geet ,..
Prasant :- ander jayiyena sir.
Maan looked at him like is he mean it.
Prasant:- haa sir ,.. jayiye ,..
Maan again looked at relectently like asking him is arpita inside?
Prasant:- understand that ,.. Arpitha nahi hai sir maine inhe ghar bheja.[now Prasant did masters in understanding their unsaid words]
Maan sighed in releaf and started to go inside ,.. when something striked him,.. he turned to Prasant and ,.. hugged him at once,. thank.u Prasant ,. thank.u very much ,.. dont know how to thank .u never thought that i would get such an understanding son like u . ur giving me life prasant ,.. mai zindagi bhar nahi chuka saktha hu thumhari ye abhaar..
Prasant:- nahi sir ,.. aap isa math kahiye ,. ye mera furze hai ki maa ko khush rahna ,. aur wahi mai karraha hu .aap ne mujhe aap ki beta kaha haina ,.. ek baap unki beta ko thank. u. boltha hai kya?Aur sir aap Arpitha ki baathon ko leke pareshaan math hojayiye sir,..maa ke saath itna kuch hua ,. wo wahi leke pareshaan horahi hai sir ,.. koi bhi beti apni maa ke liye isa hi sochthi hai sir ,. is me unki galathi nahi hai sir,.. wo samaj jayegi ,, sab kuch thik hojayega ,.. thoda wakth lagega per sab maanjayega sir ,. aap chintha math hojayiye ,. meri khayaal se maa thoda strong bannana hoga . unhe hi Arpitha ko samjhana chahiye ki wo kya chahthi hai ,..ye wakth aap dono saath rahneka ,.. ek dusere ko taakat banneka ,. tabhi baath age badsakthe hai sir ,.. pehle maa thik hojanedijiye,.. jobhi karna hai hum baad me karenge,.. tab tak sab log maanjayege,.. i am sure sir ,.. mai sab se baath karunga aur unhe manunga ,.aap ander jayiye ,..maa needs u right now.
Maan again hugged him thanking him with tears in his eyes.
Geets neend khulgayi ,.. dont know why? She searched every where in the room,.. when Maan entered in to the room. They chuckled seeing each other..
He came to her fastly sitting near her in bed made her sit by resting head post. He hugged her at once tightly. She imeadiatly senced that something went wrong ,.. bahut takleef me hai ,.. kisi baath ko leke pareshaan horaha hai ,.. she too hugged him to her.
He nuzzled her head in her crook of neck and shoulder feeling miserable to open up to her. All incidents fr. the too days ,.. her condition ,.. the fear loosing her ,.. Arpiths out burst and todays drama at k.m. everything taking a toll on him making him more emotional and vulnerable"I cant live a second without u misty" he said with chocked throat and began to kiss her every where on her face neck,.. where every where he get contact with her.He know he cant get peace any where else than in her arms.
His kisses slowly decending fr. her face to her upper chest,.. there to her blossoms,.. he nuzzled his face there trying to get peace by feeling her ,. finding peace,.. " hug me misty ,. hold me tight" he huffed ,.. Dar lagtha hai ki hum dur hojayenge,. I cant live without u misty ,...
He dont find any other way to get out of this tension, turmoil ,. he want a release and surely he get it in her only ,. peace and rest he could only find having her only.
Geet cupped his face lifting to her level looked in to his eyes which r telling everything about his state.She took his lips in to hers giving him peace,. solace,.. contentment ,..assurance that she will be with him.
She understood his insecurities towards their relation. She understood that something happened and bothering him to a great level and wat might be it? The question for their relation,. acceptance ,.. fr. both the families, and the society,.. etc,. etc,.. sab ki rajamandi ,... a big fat question, which didnt be answered till now?
She kissed him untill he became cool and calm kissed on all his face cooling him,.." kya hua? itni pareshaani me kyu ho? she asked him ,he noded his head in no like a small boy who dont want to tell anything to her mother.
She cupped his face making him to look at her eyes " mai jaanthi hu ,.. koi baath aap ko bahut takleef derahe hai batana,..."
Maan hugged her tight resting his head on her shoulder,..." misty ,.. haalath ki wajese agar mujhe kuch decission lenapadi tho kya thum meri saath dogi? meri saath khadi rahogi meri taakat ban kar? mujhe kabhi nahi chodogina?isa mujhe waada karsakthe ho?
Geet looked him , " Aap ko isa kyu lagrahe ki hum dono alag hai maan ? isa shak kyu arahe? decission aap lo ya mai lungi ,. hum tho ek haina?aur ye waada ,.. promise ,. kasam ,. isa shabd hum donoki beech ,.. inka koi maina nahi rakhthe maan ,.. ye humaari pyaar ,..ek dusere pe bharosa aur viswaas ki mothaj nahi hai maan. isa koi shabd bhi nahi hai kisi jubaan me bhi,.. mai humeshaa aap ki saath hu ,. hai aur rahthi hu. humesha aap ki saath rahungi aap ki taakat banke,. kabhi nahi chodungi aapko chahe haalat kitna bhi mushkil kyu naho ,.. mai aap ki saath khadi rahungi ,.. mai aap ke bina ji nahi sakthi maan.
Maan hugged her hearing her confident words ,.. feeling contented ,. assuring himself he closed his eyes in great satisfaction .
Geet now 100% sure that something is happening which was purpose fully hiding fr. her. Now she know its time to take some action fr. her side. She has to fight . She decided . Mai maan ko isi babasi ki haalat me kabhi nahi dekha,,. jarur kuch hua ,.. sab mujhe se chuparahe,. mujhe kuch karna hoga ,.. sab thik karna hoga,.she decided to face the situations and took bold steps to protect their love.
A week later,.. Its the day of geets discharge.
All the week Maan didnt leave geet a sec.doing all works to her taking utmost care on her more than her children. It irritates Aarpitha. she is quitely observing every thing,.. she didnt fully convinced ,.. ,.. and still in uncertainity, confusion ,. and her insecurities towards her mothers security ,.not allowing her to compramise,. still objecting her ,.. but she didnt say anything as Prasant strictly warned all the family to any confrontations and dramas in hospital premissess. he strictly warned them till geets health thik hojaye koi bhi is baath per behas nahi kare. she is observing the density of their love ,.. the bond between them ,. his care and geets dependance on him and how much comfortable they with each other ,.. the easeness in their relation ,. how perfect r they as a couple,. the compatibility between them ,..every thing.
Maan staid all the time with geet but he goes out when arpitha and others r with geet ,.. geet even though no body tells her anything she could sence the cliff between the two families ,.. arpithas indefferent behaviour towards maan,. she could sence wat is going in her mind,. wat is her turmoil? Annie dev and Arjun visited her every day and spends some time with her.
Maan cleared all the med. bills before Aarpitha goes to pay. She came to know it and her anger grew to a peak level? who is he to pay my mothers bills? wat he is thinking? wat is he trying to say? ye sab karke wo jabardashth hume manwayenge? hum kaise bhulsakthe ki ye sab inki waje se hua hai? ye achha hai pehle humla ,. aur baad me bill bharna? koun chahtha hai ye sab ? ,.. wo humari maa hai ,.. koi anaath nahi hai?hume unki bhik nahi chahiye,...
Maan made geet to sit in his car ,.. he sat beside her ,geet rested her head on his shoulders and Maan cocooned her. This burned Arpitha to the core " look he is behaving like maa is his wife" she gritted her teeth,.. here i am trying to understand this situation and mai maa ko samajneki khoshish karrahi thi per inhone humari parwaah nahi hai ,.. hume jarasa bhi wakth nahi derahe ,.. isa behave karrahe jaisa ki hume maa per koi haq nahi hai,. wo sirf unki hai ,. before she tell anything the cars moved.
The car reached geets house .. Maan so much wanted to take her to his farm house in which he is living presently ,.. but he didnt dare to do that because its not the way . He dont want to make the situation more critical so he took her to her house. Maan carried her to inside cocooning her in his arms and laid her on her bed. He adjusted the pillow so that she could lay comfortable. He now went to kitchen to prepare something for her by himself as she tired by this shifting.
All r observing this like statues . He is behaving like its his duty and its his responsibility,. and this made arpitha all lost her patience.
She came to him snacthing everything fr. him and keeping money in his hands,.. she shouted,. bus ,.. ab bahut hogaya ,. ab aap yaha se chahijayiye ,.. yaha aap ki koi jarurat nahi ,.. hum hai humaari maa ki dekhbhaal karne keliye ,.. wo humari maa hai ,.. hum jaanthe hai ki unki khayaal kaise rakhna ,.. bus aap aap ki bill ki paise lekar jayiye ,... aap koun hothe hai ki humaari maa ki meds bill bharneka ? aap ko koi haq nahi hai? aap ko hum per taras khane ka koi jarurat nahi hai ,.. hum khush hai bahut khush hai pehle ,. aap ki wajese hume itna nuksaan hua? hum aur bardaash nahi karsakthe ,.. jayiye aap hume chod dijiye,...
Maan stood rooted,... all stunned by this.
" ARPITHA',.. Geet shouted loudly in a warning way . she senced something that tension in the atmosphere and understand that something such type will happen So she slowly came out to kitchen,.. when she heard everything,..
" ye thum kya bakrahi ho arpitha? nuksaan? nuksaan tho sirf hume nahi arpitha unhe bhi bahut kuch hua ,.. wo bhi meri wajese ? meri wajese bahut nuksaan hua maan ko , agar mai inki zindagi me nahi hothi tho ,. tho ye sab nahi hothi? she looked at Maan ,.. haina?
Maan:- maan noded to no ,. nahi ,..
Geet continued,.. thum jaanthi ho ,.. pehle hi meri wajese inki ek bhai jail chalagaya ,. she looked at dev aur ek bhai ki shaadi shuda zindagi barbaad hogayi ,.. aur unki biwi ab jail me hai , unki chote chote bachhe bin maa bangaya ,.. anath hogaya dono ,... wo bhi meri waje se ,.. [ dev noded his head to no looking painfully,...no bhabhi]
Aur ab pointing to Maan inhe apnahi ghar chodna pada ,. wo bhi meri waje se ,. jis ghar me inki maa baap ki saari yaaden hai ,.. jis ghar me inki bachpan gujara wahi ghar chodna padi meri wajese,..
Maan tryied to stop her nahi geet ,. isa nahi ,..
Geet turned to Arpitha:- inki zindagi me sab uthal puthal meri anese hi hua hai , isse.pehle. wo khush hai apni dunia me,... wo khush hai arpitha, per meri anese sab badalgaya,. sab kuch horahai jo honi nahi chahiye , wo akela bangaya meri wajese ,.in sab ki jimmedaari mai hu ,..mujhe hi sab kuch thik karna hoga ,.. mai inhe ise akela nahi chodsakthi hu ,. inhe meri jarurat hai ,. ye kahi nahi jayega,..yahi rahega,.. mai inki saath jina chahthi hu ,.inki saath meri baaki zindagi jina chahthi hu ,.. inki suhaagan banke, meri ye adha adhhori zindagi ko pura karna chahthi hu ,.. mai inse pyaar karthii hu arpitha ,.. shaadi karna chahthi hu ,. ab aur akeli rahna mujhe se nahi hoga arpitha . i want a complete family,... a family ,.. with all of u and maan. mujhe samajneki khoshish karo beta ,.. aaj tak,.. aaj tak mai thumhe kuch bhi nahi pucha,.. meri sab kuch diya thumhe ,...abhi tak mai thumhare liye jirahi hu ,. per ab mai maan keliye jina chahthi hu ,. sab ke saath jina chahthi hu .. agar jina hai tho maan ke saath nahi tho mar,...
All stood stunned ,.. astound by geets open blunt confession,.. they never expected this including maan. they never thought that she will mouth her love infront of all. But she made them shut their mouths.
Arpitha got shock of her life .

Edited by anuradha.nandam - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

commt kab milega,...?
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow..what an update..
maan in fh
searching for a palace
so he will make his mishty feel special..
he came to hospital to get some peace in her arms
prashant was so understanding
arpitha..she is pissed off with maans care
n thinks geet is totally belonging on him
all back home n arpithas outburst on maan n geets reply for her was superb
if geet has lost something
maan has lost many things
geet confessed her love making all stun..
nice part
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Posted: 10 years ago
wonderful update dear, mind blowing šŸ‘

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