FF: Try To Remember Me..COMPLETED! - Page 39

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Posted: 18 years ago
oh wow that was an awesome update eman!
i love it!
so finally a dance but he's still a budhu for keeping mum...
i hope that he would get jealous now and then tell Bani!
love it!
please continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
Part 36

Jai couldn't sleep. He kept thinking of Bani and the guy who didn't leave her side through out the evening. The fire of jealousy and envy that was burning in his chest seemed only to grow with every thought. He walked up and down his room and tried hard to control his restlessness, but he couldn't fight his emotions anymore and without realising what he was doing he walked through the hotel corridors to Bani's suite. He knocked on the door a couple of times, before a sleepy Bani opened it. 'Mr. Walia?' She was surprised and concerned at the same time. She wondered what he was doing there at 5 a.m. in the morning. Jai didn't say a word. He hold her hand and pulled her behind him towards the garden. Bani wondered what was wrong with Jai. She tried to ask him a couple of times, but when he didn't answer, she kept quiet and followed him. They walked towards the small lake and Jai made her sit on the bench. Bani looked at him while he walked up and down. She was about to ask him what was wrong with him when he started talking. 'Who was that guy in the party?' Bani was surprised at his question and kept starring at him. 'Who was it!' Bani wasn't at all pleased with Jai's tone. 'Did you wake me up and dragged me down in the middle of the night to ask me who Angad is?!' She was irritated and didn't try to hide it. She got up and tried to walk away. Jai stopped her. 'Please Bani I need to know.' His tone was softer. Almost begging. Bani calmed down and took a deep breath. 'That was Angad. He is a friend from college. After I dropped out we lost touch. He has left India after graduation. I haven't seen him for years, un till at the party that is.' Jai just nodded his head. 'So there is nothing between you two.' Bani shook her head hesitantly. She used to have a huge crush on Angad. He used to be the hot shot of college and all girls were head over heels in love with him, but she wasn't planning to tell Jai about it. Thinking about her silly crush made her smile. She used to dream about marrying him and write him poems she never send. She was surprised and happy to see Angad again, but to her big surprise there was nothing left of her old feeling towards him. The feelings she had for Jai were much stronger and made every crush she ever had look so silly and stupid. She looked at Jai and he looked away from her. He started walking up and down again without saying a word. Bani dropped herself back on the bench and wondered what he was thinking off. Minutes passed by before Jai stopped walking all of the sudden and looked Bani right in the eyes before broking the silence. 'Bani … you must think that I'm crazy to pull you out of your sleep and out of your room like this in the middle of the night. Yes, I'm crazy Bani. I'm crazy about you. I don't know what you have done to me. What spell you have casted on me. All I know is that ever since you stepped into my life, you have enlighten it. You have brought happiness back into it. You have giving my life a sweet flavour. I can't think or work properly. Your on my mind all day long. When your not around I miss you. When you are with someone else I feel like dying. When your with me I feel like flying. Bani you have turned my life upside down. I … Bani, I … I love you!' Bani looked at Jai in shock, while her heart was beating in her throat. She didn't know what to say or do. Jai kneeled down and hold her hands and looked right into her eyes. 'Bani. I know that this is a surprise to you. Maybe an unpleasant one, but please before you refuse me, give me a chance. I …' Bani put her finger on his lips and didn't let him finish his sentence. 'I love you too.' Bani blushed and quickly looked away from Jai. Jai was thrilled, got up and pulled Bani off the bench and right into his arms. He twirled her around and screamed in his loudest voice that he loved her. Bani giggled and felt she was the happiest woman on earth. 'Please keep your voice down. You will wake everybody up!' Jai laughed and hold Bani close to him. He whispered sweet words into her ear and kissed her gently on the lips while they were standing in the moonlight, unaware of the world and unaware of a smiling Zyad who was watching them from his balcony, while a song was playing in the background. It was the song he got in reply many years ago.

Ahwak (I love you)

I love you.
And I wish I could forget you.
And forget my soul with you.
And if it gets lost, it's ok
If you've forgotten me.

So I've forgot you,
And when I forget all your pain.
I'll start longing for it again.
And I find my tears remembering you again.
So I return to you.

At times,
The whole world comes with you.
And its wish becomes yours.
And then, maybe you will end,
Depriving me your.

I dream of finding you
Thinking of me, and I of you.
And my eyes meeting yours. ,
And their words written on your face,
While you try to hide them.

And I'd nourish you,
Wake up from my sleep to call you.
And send my soul to wake you.
So you who has stirred my soul,
Wake up and feel the fire that is set within me.


Edited by Grumpyyy - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
Part 37

'Pia! Hurry! You can kiss Pushkar later!' Anjali was nervous. Today is her dads and Bani wedding and she wants to be ready on time. She is happy that finally after months her dream is coming true. When her dad and Bani told her a couple of weeks back that they were getting married she almost fainted. She had hugged her dad and cried her heart out. Finally she would have a loving mother again and be part of a complete family.

Bani looked at herself in the mirror. She was nervous and happy. Today was the big day. She would marry the man she loved and share her very soul with him for the rest of her life. After a short knock on the door, Rano walked in and Bani knew it was time to get down. Her sisters accompanied her to the altar where her prince charming was awaiting her. Anjali was holding her dads hand and when Bani reached them, she made her dad hold Bani's hand. 'Bani aunty. Today I'm marrying you my dad. I have full faith in you that you will love him and make him happy. Please take good care of my papa.' Jai, Bani and all the guest started laughing and Bani promised in front of all to love Jai with heart and soul.

Natwar and Rano were watching everything from a distance. 'You know Rano. I want to have a daughter just like Anjali. She is the best daughter you can wish for, don't you think? I'd only want her to look more like you.' Rano blushed and giggled. 'Yeah, she is really something.' A cough made them both startle and step away from each other. Pushkar smiled mischievously at both and Rano quickly walked away blushingly, leaving a grinning Pushkar and Natwar behind. 'You really love her, huh dude?' Nattu sighed deeply. 'Just like you love Pia, mate.' Pushkar sighed even deeper, while he looked how his lady love was giving instructions to servants. She was still as bigheaded and self-centred as ever, but if it wasn't for his ignore treatment she would probably have never admitted that she loved him. He knew she was trouble, but he took her the way she was. He loved her and in love you can't set conditions.

Zyad looked at the newly wed couple. Jai was flirting shamlessly with Bani, while she blushed all the way. He was happy his friend had found his true love and got married. He wished him all the best and was happy he had played a role in getting the two duffers together. He smiled to himself and let his mind travel to a far past. 'Uncle Zyad, uncle Zyad!' Zyad looked down at a smiling Anjali. He kneeled down and pinched her in the cheek. 'Wow, who is looking so gorgeous today. Will you please be my date for this beautiful evening milady?' Anjali giggled. 'It would be my honour sir.' They both laughed and Anjali hugged Zyad. 'Thank you for everything uncle! I hope one fine day, you will find your true love too! And when you do I will do my best to help you get her!' Zyad felt a lump in his throat. 'Stop it Anjali. You will make me cry and look like a wimp!' Anjali giggled and kissed her favourite uncle on the cheek and hugged him even tighter. Zyad smiled a sad smile and shook his head in an attempt to forget the unforgettable. 'I love you. And I wish I could forget you. And forget my soul with you. My love, I swear, you're still my love. I swear, even if you've forgotten me. I swear, I can never forget your love. Can you try to remember me? Try to remember me.'

The End!

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Posted: 18 years ago
Well guys,

That was it. Thank you all so much for reading my ff and bearing with me. I'm sorry it took so long. 😳 I hope you guys liked it.

Thanks again very very much!

Lots of love!

Grumpyyy
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Posted: 18 years ago
wonderful ff beautiful ending 👏
btkr thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
Wow, lots of updates phataphat and then khatam?? 😭
That was very nice Anjali got her wish finally...
👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
very nice ending grumpy.. n this was a very nice story
finally he found his brain n talked to her 👏
so any other plans to write another FF???
😃

other than KAA ff.... 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
What a wonderful ending to a lovely FF 👏 👏 👏 .......liked it to the bits 😊 ......hope you would start writing another ff soon 😊 .......thanks 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
Thx alot guys. I really appreciate it. [hug] Right now I have to finish Battle of the Heart first and after that Ill only write a ff if I have enough time and know I can update almost daily. It's not fair to keep people waiting. As a ff reader myself I can understand really well how annoying that is. 😳

Thx again for reading my ff! 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
ohh GOD!!! i just love this zayed guyyy!!!!
can you write a ff about him too??? plzzzz
he's just so i dn't know deeppp!!!
i felt that the story was abt himm!!! and i loved itt!!!!!
thank you for writin itt!!!

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