FF: The Legend of Moriya

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Posted: 11 years ago
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CHARACTER SKETCH

Chanakya

chandragupta
Durdhara
Helen


Season 1- Inception of the Great
Episode 1- The day when it all began


People of Magadha Mahajanapada were very happy that day. That day they were celebrating the coming of Vasanta Ritu, perhaps the happiest day of their life, ah well it was for rich atleast.
The roads of Magadha never got crowded like this before. The rumour was that the new king, Emperor Dhanananda was himself coming to greet people. It was a rare and amusing for people as Emperor never really met people in person. He did not like his people as they consider him descendant of a shudra mother.(Mahapadmananda his father, was son of a shudra concubine of king kalasoka.)But he enjoyed respect
among Buddhists and jainas and because of his patronage jains and specially buddhists were spreading their influence both among people and the court. Though more than his religious inclination his taxes and cruel punishments had created chaos. People feared him, they never dare to oppose or attempt for a revolt. Once there was a revolt conspired by Mahamantri Shaktaar and Acharya Chanaka. But he easily crushed the revolt, People were
afraid to help them and nanda surely did not hesitate using his vast military. Nanda badly crushed the revolt and both Shaktaar and Chanak were arrested.As shaktaar's influence and popularity was strong in Magadha he was released but Acharya Chanaka faced a fatal death by several injuries on his head. Nanda spread rumours that Chanak was sent to taxila as punishment for conspiring against him. Shaktaar was sent to exile in Panchala. Now Shaktaar's two sons
Ajay and Shriyak are grown up. Ajay is an Acharya now and runs his own gurukul which is the only gurukul in Magadha because Nanda stopped all gurukuls in Magadha but he let ajay run his gurukul because of brahmin crowd and katyayan, his MahaAmatya who is married to Ajay's sister Suvasini.The alliance was not agreeable to shaktar but his son Shriyak forced him because he wanted to gain favour of Katyayana and by him of Dhanananda.
Nanda is a cruel, ruthless and worthless ruler. He had killed many people just to maintain his power which is giving no protection to Magadha but sacking its charm by heavy taxes.

One person- Suno, suno maharajadhiraja Dhanananda padhaar rahe hain...A huge crowd gathered around him. Suddenly they saw a big Chariot coming towards them. They all started shouting- Maharajadhiraj ki jai ho, Samrat ki jai ho, Maharajadhiraj ki jai ho, Samrat ki jai ho...
DhanaNanda gave sign to his charioteer to stop the chariot...
DhanaNanda to people- AapSabko Vasanta Ustavak ki Bahut Badhai
People-Samrat ki jai ho, Samrat ki jai ho...they all started showering flowers on him...
Suddenly the chariot galloped...
A person- Dekho, hamari samasya sunne aye the, huh, ye sab dhong hota hain. Koi nirdhanon ki nahin sunta.
second person-aur dhanananda se aise apeksha karna bhi vyartha hain.
first person-meri to yahe prarthana hain ke koi aisa shaasak aye jo nirdhano ke samsya sune, unhe samzhe, unka nivaran kare, parantu aisa agle 100 varshon mein hota nahin dikhta.
Second person-aaj ke din to ye saari baatein mat kaho, chalo rajprassad mein aaj nirdhonon ko bhojan aur daan diya jaa raha hain.
first person-haan chalo, pata chala saara bhojan aur daan samapt ho gaya aur hum yahan vilaap karte rahe...
both laughed...
Two Brahmins were getting themselves checked at the gates of Magadha.
Officer-Aap kis janapada ke rehne waale hain acharya?
Acharya-Taxshshila
Officer-Aapka karya?
Acharya-Rajneeti ka acharya, takshisla ke gurukul mein shikshak hun.
officer folded hands and bowed to him.
Acharya-Maa Bharati tumhara kalyan kare.
Officer-Pramaan?
Acharya gave his seal of taxila to him and his identity card.
Officer read that magical name-ACHARYA VISHNUGUPTA, aap pravesh kar sakte hain.
Vishnugupta-Dhanyawaad
Vishnugupta was watching people dancing, enjoying, singing and throwing colors on each other. Vishnugupta got emotional.
Bhadrabhatt(His companion)-Magadha aake aap bahut bhavuk ho gaye hain acharya.
Vishnugupta-Apni Maatrabhoomi laut kar kaun bhavuk nahin hota. He took some soil in his hand and spread it on his head.ah...ye hain param ananda. Meri maa, meri maatrabhumi ka aashirwaad hain ye mitti.
Bhadrabhatt got emotional-Acharya, hamara marga kaun sa hain?
vishnugupta-Marga nahin Bhadrabhatt, ye pucho ki hamara dhyeya kya hain? Dhyeya man mein hon aur atal ho to maarg apne aap hi mil jaata hain.
Bhadrabhatt smiled...
Vishnugupta smiled-Chalo...

Somewhere in Magadha...a cowherd was feeding his cattle. His sister, Mura was preparing food.
Mura- *cough, cough* Bhaiya
Her brother- Kya hain??
Mura-Aapne Chandra ko kahin dekha, subah se pata nahin kahan chala gaya hain.
Her brother- Maine he use bheja hain, gaiyon ko charane gaya hain.
Mura-kintu ye uske vishraam ka samaya hain, aur phir rang prasad bhe to jana hain, daan lene.
He started getting irritated- Tum aur tumhara putra, dono ne mere jeevan ko bojh bana diya hain.
Mura had tears in her eyes- aap aisa kyun keh rahe hain..
He shouted-to aur kya kahun, tumhe aur tumhare putra ko paalne mein mera kitna dhan chala jaata hain, meri patni bhe tumse aprasanna hain, tum waapas piplivana chale jao.tumhara putra bhe mere kisi karya ka nahin, gaiya charane se jayada uska rajneeti mein man lagata hain, jab dekho
rajya ko viksit karne ke liye naye naye suzhaav deta rehta hain, Jaise magadha no nanda ke baad use he sambhalana hain...

Episode 3,4- http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4138828&TPN=2 (Copy and Paste the link the view episode 3)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow !! Cool Idea Monidi ! I'm Glad To See You Back !! The First Part Was Great ! Loved It !! And Mamaji ! Anjaane Mein Sach Hi Bol Gaye !!

And Yes, Congratulations For Becoming A Rockerz !!!!!
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Originally posted by: Radhikerani

Wow !! Cool Idea Monidi ! I'm Glad To See You Back !! The First Part Was Great ! Loved It !! And Mamaji ! Anjaane Mein Sach Hi Bol Gaye !!

And Yes, Congratulations For Becoming A Rockerz !!!!!


Thanks dear. You have always been loyal to my ffs. thanks so much for the comment.😳
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Episode 2- His fate was written in stars

Vishnugupta and Bhadrabhatt were walking towards rajprasad.

Bhadrabhatt- Acharya, hum jis gyan sabha mein sammilit hone aye hain wahan samrat honge, kya aapko peeda nahin hoge unhe dekh kar.

Vishnugupta-Bhadrabhatt mein shikshak hun, gyan dena aur uska vahan karna dono mere karya hain aur mein wahan Amatya Katyayan ke anurodh par jaa raha hun, we takshashila ke medhavi chaatra reh chuke hain aur bahut sammanit bhe. Unka anurodh mein nahin thukra sakta tha aur mein ye dekhna chahta hun ke itne varshon mein Magadha ne kitna uddhar kiya ya kitna patan kiya hain. Apne maatrabhumi ke liye hun mein yahan, nanda ke liye nahin.

As they were walking Vishnugupta heard something which fascinated him. Some children were playing king-ministers.

One child- Samrat ke jai ho...

Second Child-aap sab virajmaan ho jaye. Amatya, aaj ke is parishad ke aavahan ka kaaran?

Child- Samrat Chandragupta...

Vishnugupta was watching this whole drama.

Child-Samrat...Vaahik Pradesh Magadha par aakraman ke yojna bana rahe hain.

Samrat- We jab tak yojna banaenge tab tak hum vaahik Pradesh par aakraman kar us par adhikar kar lenge.

Child-Parantu samrat, kya ye uchit nahin hoga ke hum vaahik Pradesh par aakraman kar wahan se dhan lekar rajya punah unhe lauta den, isse hamare rajkosh mein vridhi hoge aur humein wahan ka karbhaar bhe nahin uthana hoga...

Vishnugupta-nahin, ye kadapi uchit nahin hoga.

Children were shocked seeing those Brahmins approaching them. They al l bowed and greeted them.

Vishnugupta- Chandragupta, yahe tumhara naam hain?

Chandra- Haan Acharya...

Vishnugupta- is prashna pe tumhara kya uttar hota Chandragupta?

Chandragupta-Nahin acharya, ye kadaapi uchit nahin hota?

Vishnugupta-Kyun?

Chandragupta-Kyunki ek rajya par kewal isliye aakraman karna kyunki hamein uska dhan chahiye ye sarvatha anuchit hain, ye dharma ke viruddha hain.

Bhadrabhatt-parantu isse rajkosh mein vriddhi hoge

Chandragupta-rajkosh mein vriddhi ke liye dharma ka tyaag karne se narka prapta hoga aur us rajya ke sena aur praja ko haani. Ye dharma aur karma dono ki drishti seanuchit nahin.

Vishnugupta-Sadhu.

Bhadrabhatt- Chandragupta tumhara upanayan sanskaar ab tak kyun nahin hua?

Chandragupta-Mein kulhina hun acharya...gaiya charata hun, muzhe koi acharya apne aashram mein sharan nahin denge.

Vishnugupta- Jagat guru Prabhu Krishna bhe gaiya charate the, gaiya charana samman ka karya hain, to tum kulhina kaise hue? Chatur varna dharma ke anusaar charo varna ek dusre par aashrit hain, varna kea lag hone se manushya vibhajit nahin hote, varna unhe jodta hain todta nahin. Chandragupta...

Chandragupta- Haan Acharya...

Vishnugupta-Takshshila mein adhyaan karoge???

Bhadrabhatt and children shocked completely, specially chadragupta...

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Episode 3- Bittersweet first meet

Chandragupta answered- Awashya Acharya, mein Adhayan karunga, Adyayan karna mera swapna hain.

Vishnugupta- to chalo mere saath rajprasad chalo.

Chandragupta smiled...and left with them. His friends were shocked and one of them ran towards Mura's house. He reached Chandra's house.

Akshay- Mura maa...ha ha...(he was taking heavy breaths after long running), Mura maa...

Mura came out...

Mura- are Akshay, aao maine tumhare or Chandra ke liye bhojan banaya, aake dono bhojan kar lo.

Akshay-Mura maa...wo...wo Chandra...

Mura worried- Chandra, kya hua Chandra ko?

Akshay- Maa wo Chandra ko do Brahmin apne saath le gaye hain.

Mura- Saath le gaye hain, kahan?

Akshay- Wo rajprasad...

Mura shocked and extremely worried- Kya rajprasad? Parantu kyun? Aur tum sab kya kar rahe the, tumne use roka nahin?

Akshay-Hum sab stabdh the maa, kuch suzh nahin raha tha?

Mura-kya hua?

Akshay-Maa wo Brahmin ke rahe the ke we Chandragupta ko Takshashila le jayenge adhayan karane.

Mura shocked and slapped Akshay- Koi pakhandi aake ulti seedhi baat kehta hain aur tum log use chale jaane dete hon...pata nahin kyun le gaya hain wo mere Chandra ko. Muzhe abhi rajprasad jaana hoga...she left quickly.

Chandragupta while walking...

Chandra- Acharya, muzhe apne mata ko suchit kar dena chahiye, we chintit ho rahe honge.

Acharya- Chintit hoke we tumhare peeche rajprasad aayenge.

Chandra-Kintu unhe kaise pata chalega?

Acharya-Tumhare mitra unhe suchit karenge...

Chandra-are haan...to acharya pehle mere griha chaliye...

Vishnugupta-Nahin Chandragupta, abhi hamein rajprasad jaana hain, tumhari mata se hum shyam ko vartalap karenge.

Chandra-Parantu acharya...

Vishnugupta-Koi vivid nahin vatsa...

Chandra stopped...

In Dhananada's Palace...

Amatya Katyayana was severely scrutinizing soldiers who were appointed to protect Magadha's palace's gates...

Katyayana-Koi bhe sandhigta vyakti rajprasad mein pravesh nahin karna chahiye...agar koi vyakti sandhighta lage to use mere paas turant lao.

Soldier-Jaise aapki agya amatya.

Amatya-hmm...

Acharyas of different janpadas were entering the palace for gyan sabha. Buddhist and Jaina Munis were also invited and were giving royal treatment, more than Brahmins which irked them.

One Brahmin-Ye bhikshukon ko hamse adhik samman de rahe hain, ye hamara apmaan hain.

Second Brahmin-Samrat se kya apeksha kar sakte hain, unka Buddha aur jaina dharma ke prati lagaav ka sabko pata hain parantu samrat se vivaad karne ka saahas kise mein nahin. Accha hoga hum apmaan ka vish pee jayen anaytha hamara aur tiraskaar hoga.

Acharya and co. entered palace's gates. Chandragupta was shocked to see such a huge and grand building.He was very excited as a kid.

Chandra-Kitna vishaal griha hain ye acharya, kya samrat akele he yahan rehte hain?

Bhadrabhatt-nahin Chandra, unke saath unke patni, putra, putrid...acharya stopped him with his glare. He did not like futile talks at all. He considered it time wastage.

Chandra-huh...muzhe bhe yahan rehna hain.

Vishnugupa smiled-Awashya...

Chandra-Kya aise ho sakta hain acharya?

Vishnugupta-Man mein kuch karne ke sat iccha ho to har dhyeya ko paana sambhav hain. Kintu uske liye tumhe uchit prashiksha aur adhyayan karna hoga.

Chandra-Mein gyan ke vehen ke liye tatpar hun achary...

They all entered in the palace after severe checking by guards.

Vishnugupta- Chandragupta, tum sabha griha ke bahar raho aur jab tak mein aur bhadrabhatt bahar na aaye, yahan se jaana mat. Tumhara jeevan mere liye tumse bhe jyada amulya hain. Chandragupta was little confused now. He thought- Acharya abhe to muzhse mile hain, itna lagaav unhe muzhse ek shan mein kaise ho gaya? Even Bhadrabhatt was confused but he did not dare ask him anything. They entered in Sabha griha.

Chandra was really fascinated seeing such a huge palace, though made of wood it was beautiful to look at, it was the most magnificent building in the whole world at that time.

Chandragupta unconsciously started walking, amusingly admiring every aspect of the palace, its pillars, its construction. He didn't realize when he came out of palace and reached the royal garden. The garden was equally beautiful. Chandra personally loved nature and animals. He loved natural beauty. He found more peace in nature than in a big house.

As he was admiring the flowers in the garden...

Two young girls came running from behind and suddenly one of them bumped with Chandragupta and they both fell.

Girl-ah...tum...dekh kar nahin chal sakte.

Chandra-Shama karein devi kintu aap peeche se muzhse takraye.

Girl-Tum muzhe galat keh rahe ho, tumhara itna saahas. Mein abhe sainikon ko bulati hun.

Her friend-chodiye ne rajkumari...iske vastra to dekhiye, koi daas lagta hain.

Chandra shocked- Rajkumari...

Girl-haan, hum rajkumari hain, RAJKUMARI DURDHARA...

Chandra was delighted to see a princess for the first time in his life. It war rare for civilians to even glare at rajkumari and now she was standing in front of him.

Chandra- Shama kijiye rajkumari, maine aapse anuchit vyavhar kiya.

Girl-Mein shama nahin karti, galti ke liye dand deti hun..sainik...

Chandra-shama kijiye rajkumari kintu aapka ye vyavhar anuchit nahin, ye aapko paashvik banata hain.

Girl-paashvik , tum hamein pashu keh rahe ho.

Chandra-Jo vyakti apne galti hote hue bhe dusre ko dosh deta hain weh pashu he ho sakta hain.

Durdhara was highly offended...-Tum, tum...ah...ho kaun tum?

Chandra- Chandragupta...

Durdhara-Rajprasad mein kya kar rahe ho?

Chandra-Mein apne acharya ke saath aya hun, we gyan sabha mein...ah...he slapped himself...mein to bhul he gaya and he quickly ran towards rajprasad...

Durdhara-are suno...bahut vichitra tha ye, hamein pashu keh ke chala gaya.

Mihika(her friend and second girl)-she murmured- pashu se kuch zyada hain bhe nahin aap...

Durdhara-kuch kaha tumne...

Mihika-nahin, kuch bhe to nahin...ah chodiye aap use, chaliye rajprasad chaliye nahin to mahadevi humpar krodhit honge.

Durdhara- haan chalo kintu woo...(angry mode)

Mihika dragged her- Ab chaliye...

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Episode 4- That Greedy Prince, that Silent Wound
Mihika and Durdhara went to meet Mahadevi, Dudhara's mother.
Mahadevi-Aaa gaye tum dono, jab dekho tab utpat machate rehte ho. Jao Vasanta Utsav ke lye taiyaar ho jao. Mihika, Kumari ko aise sazana ke samasta Magadha kumari ke sundarta ke prashnsa kare.
Mihika-Kumari to bina kise sajja ke he kitni sundar hain, sajawat kumari ko nahin, kumari saj sajja ke shobha badhati hain.
They all smiled...Mahadevi left and Mihika started combing her hair.
Durdhara-Mein bahut aprasanna hun.
Mihika-Kyun Kumari?
Durdhara-Wo dusht muzhe pashu keh ke chala gaya, bhala kise ko dosh dene mein aur pashu hone mein kya sambandha?
Mihika-he he...kumari wo aapko seedhe pashu na kehte hue ulti baat kar ke pashu keh ke chala gaya.
Durdhara-Agli baar mein usse milenge to accha path padhayenge, aisa paath wo jeevan bhar nahin bhulega.

AT THE SAME TIME, IN MACEDONIA'S PALACE
Achleis- Prince, can i come in?
Alexander-oh yes General, please.
Achleis, late King phillip's general entered in Alexander's room.
Achleis-Sire, its been 5 days since your father died and you still have not given us orders, are we going to attack neighbourhood's terriory or not,as The Great Sire Philip Planned?
Alexander-I have been thinking about this General, frankly i am not interested in victories.
Achleis-But sire, you are prince and soon to be the new lord of Macedonia, our people expect you to be fearless and spreading glory of our state.
Alexander grinned-General, i said i am not interested in victories but i am very much interested in one particular victory and that will surely crush barbarians and put Greeks on the top of the world, no one will dare
to challenge us.
Achleis-That's sound awesome but what's the plan?
Alexander- WINNING THE WORLD, CONQUERING THE WHOLE WORLD.I DON'T WANT TO RULE MACEDONIA BUT THE WORLD.
Achleis shocked-Sire forgive me but are you serious, i mean this can take us quite a good time period to achieve and we never know what will be its consequences. We can loose too and that will certainly degrade our pride
Alexander- Don't you believe in my capabilites? I am Aristotle's student, i have been declared an excellent warrior. I won't sit back in this palace just because of fear of loosing. Either i will win the world or never show my face to macedonians.
Achleis-I certaily believe your capabilities sire and surely our military does.
Alexander-Then make the army ready, we will soon start the journey of conquering the world and we'll start from uniting Macedonia.
Achleis not speaking a word bowed to him and left the room.Alexander grinned.

At Selecus's Place...
He was drinking alcohol when suddenly his slave came...
Slave-Congratulations sir, you have been blessed with a beautiful child.
Not being much amused...
Selecus-Is it a boy?
Slave-NO sir, she is a girl.
Selecus angry-Then i don't want to see her face. Stupid Helena, couldn't produce a boy for me. I crave for a boy, not a girl.
Slave-Don't you wanna see her sir?
Selecus-ah...he left to see his daughter but not happily. He reached to his concubine Helena who was not in good health after the delievery.
Selecus saw her daughter and touched her head-Atleast she is beautiful. Hopefully she will catch the king's attentions. Then only she'll prove wrothy for me.
Helena-Can't you behave a little nice with the baby? She is your daughter, the part of your spirit.
Selecus-Girls are born curse, they are worthless.They are only good for either when they marry a king or when they die.
Helena-Atleast name her...i want her to name...Suzena.
Selecus-No we will call her HELEN,after your name.By far you have been the most beautiful among my concubines,she has inherited your beautiful features. Selecus now became
a little soft to her and kissed her head.

In Magadha...
Acharya Vishnugupta and Bhadrabhatt entered the Gyan sabha. Everyone was greeting each other warmly though buddhist and jainas did not mingles with Brahmins, neither brahmins liked them.They both couldn't each other eye to eye.
Vishnugupta straigh went to Badanta Jeevasidhi(The most powerful monk of the time with huge support from the emperor.)
Vishnugupta-Pranaam Badanta...
Jeevasidhi was amused by his act. He did not expect a brahmin greeting him though he was a respected person in all sects and religions.
Jeevasidhi-Tathagat tumhara kalyan kare. Other brahmins did not like it.
Vishnugupta-Aapke baare mein bahut suna tha badanta, aaj ke gyan sabha mein aapke swaccha vicharon se ekaek hone ka saubhagya prapt hoga, ye mere liye garv ke baat hain.
Jeevasidhi-Mein bhe is sabha ke aarambh ke liye utsuk hun. Nirvan vijaye Buddha ke sat gyan ka prachaar karke muzhe ati ananda prapta hota hai.
Vishnugupta smiled and bowed to him.
Suddenly another brahmin greeted vishnugupta.
Brahmin-Pranaam Acharya.
Vishnugupta-Pranaam.
Brahmin-Acharya, muzhe aise lagta hain maine aapko kahin dekha hain, kya hum mile hain kahin? Kise gyan sabha mein ya kahin aur?
Vishnugupta-Shama karein Arya, mein Takshashila ka rehne wala hun, Magadha aaye muzhe kai varsha ho gaye.
Brahmin-Kahin aap Acharya Vishnugupta to nahin?
Vishnugupta-Jee mein Acharya Vishnugupta he hun.
Brahmin-Bahut suna tha aapke baare mein acharya, aapke gyan ka bakhaan to pura jambudweep karta hain. Mere ek bachpan ke mitra ka bhe naam vishnugupta tha, mera sabse priya sakha. Bahut pehle kise kaaran varsha wo Magadha chod kar chala gaya tha. Bahut dhundne ke prayas keya pitaji ne parantu kuch pata nahin chala.
Ab to jaise uske aane ke aas he chut gaye hain. Ek shan ko to aisa laga jaise aap he mere vishnu hain kintu aisa nahin ho sakta, mera vishnu mar jayega kintu nanda ke jeevit hote hue is rajprasad mein nahin ayega.
Vishnugupta remained silent.
Brahmin-Aapse milke muzhe ati harsha hua. Shama kijiyega agar maine aapko apne dukhad varta se nirash kiya ho to.
Vishnugupta-Nahin Arya, mein to dukh ke liye he kaamna karta hun, kyunki dukh he muzhe gatisheel rakhta hain. Dukh mein bhe ek anokha sukh hain.
suddenly one person called that brahmin- Acharya AJAY...
Ajay-haa...he left
Vishnugupta-Ajay...Ajay...huh...
Bhadrabhatt-Acharya, kya ye vahi ajay hain, aapke bachpan ke mitra?
Vishnugupta-hmm...
Bhadrabhatt-Aap unse milenge nahin
Vishnugupta-Shaant raho bhadrabhatt, mein nahin chahta ke Magadha mein koi jaane ke mein Vishnugupta Chanakya hun...Arthashastra ke Acharya Chanaka ka putra.
Bhadrabhatt-jee acharya,mein swayam par saiyaam rakhunga.

The announcement began...
Announcer- Maharajadhiraj, Samrat, Parmeshwar, Samrat Dhanananda Padhar rahe hain. Everyone stood up. All the musicians started playing instruments.
Dhanananda came and gave a hypocrytic smile...and sat on the throne. Amatya Katyayan was with him.
Katyayana-Aaj ke ye sabha samrat ne gyan ke prakaash se Magadha ko ujjawal karne ke liye bulaye hain. Is sabha mein sabhe janpadon, mahajanpadon aur ganrajya se aaye uhe sarvashreshtha
Acharya aur gyani padhare hain. Samrat ko yeh vishwaas hain ke ye gyan sabha sat gyan ke prakaash ke diye mein ghee ka karya karege. After getting signal from dhanananda
Announcer-Gyan Sabha Aarambh ke jaate hain


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Posted: 10 years ago
#7
Very Well Written !! Loved Dury-Chandu's Convo ! And Also Mura's Anxiety !!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hai,

i read ur story of chandragupta moriya, it is nice and excellent, but i am fond of moharika stories as well as saurabh stories. pls write on them .

bye😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: rlakshmi81

hai,

i read ur story of chandragupta moriya, it is nice and excellent, but i am fond of moharika stories as well as saurabh stories. pls write on them .

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Episode 5- Conflict, Can they Escape?
Gyan Sabha started...(After some meaty discussion main conflict started)
Buddhist monks first Challenged Brahmins for debate...
Nagananda(Buddhist monk)- Atma ka koi astitva nahin(His debate point)
Varasiddhi(Brahmin whom he challenged)-Atma nirjara hain, amar hain, atma he sat hain.
Nagananda- Pramman? Nirvana vijaye Buddha ke anusara Atma ka koi astitva nahin hain, jo hain weh nirvana hain, nirvana pratpti ke liye
ashta maarg pe chalan he manushya ka kartavya hain. Atma agar hain to weh kahan hain? Kis prakaar ke hain?
Varasiddhi-Atma nirjara hain, amar hain, uska koi prakaar nahin. Nirvana atma ke saakshatkaar se he sambhava hain.
Nagananda angry-To aap Buddha ke gyan ko niradhaar keh rahe hain.
Varasiddhi-Haan, Buddha ke anusara atma nahin hain, kintu aatma nahin hain to punarjeevan kaise ho sakta hain, buddha ke anusaar punarjeevan ko rokne aur
nirvaan prapta karne hetu he astaanga marg hain. Agar jeev ka mrityu ke baad punah janm hota hain to yeh atma ke bina kaise sambhava hain?
Nagananda-aap hamare gyan ka aapmaan kar rahe hain acharya...aap buddha ke gyan ko chunauti de rahe hain...
Suddenly all this started in big fight, Dhanananda was gladly watching the choas.He never wanted religious peace in Magadha. He thought religious unity could
harm him as Brahmins were against his cruel nature but with Buddhists and jainas he behaved nicely and gave them their deserving respect,so they supported him.
Bhadrabhatt-Ye sab kya ko raha hain acharya? Gyan sabha gyan badhane ke liye hote hain kintu ye...Jeevasiddhi was also sad watching such childish behaviour of
learned men.
Jeevasiddhi-shaant...shaant ho jaiye...
Suddenly everybody became silent. Jeevasiddhi was a powerful monk, nobody could dare defy his plea.
Vishnugupta stood up- Agar Samrat ke aagya ho to mein apna atma ke vishaya mein mat rakhna chahunga.
Dhanananda- Agya hain brahmin.
Katyayana-Aapka naam
Vishnugupta-Acharya Vishnugupta
Katyayana-Kis vishaya ke acharya hain aap?(Actually he know him, he was his junior in takshashila, but the process was mandatory)
Vishnugupta-Rajniti aur Arthashastra
Katyayan-Aapka nivaas janapada?
Vishnugupa badly wanted to say Magadha but- Takshashila...
Katyayan-Aap apna mat rakh sakte hain Acharya
Vishnugupta-Mein yahan baithe mahaan muniyon, acharyon aur bhikshukon ko saadar pranaam karta hun.Mein Acharya Vishnugupta Takshashila ke gurukul ko pranaam karta hun.
Dhanananda was getting irritated...
Dhananda-shigrha kar brahmin, muzhe neend aa rahe hain...(In insulting way, but vishnu remained silent)

Chandragupta was getting bore outside.
Chandragupta-Pata nahin kitne der aur chalege acharya ke gyan sabha...mein takshashila jaane ke liye kitna vyakul hun. kaisa hoga takshashila, are buddhu,bahut he vishal hoga,
takshashila ka gurukul samasta jambudweep ka shreshta gurukul hain. Muzhe abhe se he adhayayan mein lag jaana chahiye. Chandragupta sat on the floor and started doing meditation.
Mura was on her way to Rajprasad. She had no money so she was running with all her energy.
Mura-Pata nahin kya kar rahe honge wo mere chandragupta ke saath, kahin use daas bana ke to nahin le gaye. Ye bhi ho sakta hain ke we mere chandra ko brahmin ke vesh mein behla kar kise dusre janapada
mein le gaye hon daas banakar.Hey Mahadeva mere Chandra ke raksha karna, we bahut bhola hain, bilkul aap ki tarah. Hey prabhu mere chandra ke raksha karna.
Suddenly she stop...
Mura-Kahin Piplivana se to koi, nahin, nahin, mere chandra ko uska satya nahin pata chalna chahiye, kadapi nahin...she started running harder.

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