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Posted: 10 years ago
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Punarvivah


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Part-68

Morning...

Maan was staring at sleeping Geet..It was his habit to wake up before Geet and then to look at her without any trouble..this time he was having a full authority to look at her..A contended smile adorned Maan's lips..He bent a little and packed her forehead whispering a good morning to her and he tightened his hold a little on her body to feel her more..That tightening of grip around her made Geet stirred in her sleep. she was going to awake and Maan like always closed his eyes he wanted to see how Geet was going to behave today after their confession.

Geet opened her eyes and her eyes fell on Maan. He was sleeping with a sweet smile on his lips..(Poor GeetšŸ˜†šŸ˜†)..A smile crept on Geet's lips too seeing him sleeping so calmly...Today she was in no hurry to leave the bed what she always used to do due to the awkwardness earlier ..Today she could call him as her completely. She felt a sudden urge to feel him and she slowly brought her palm near his face and caressed with a very soft touch so that it did not disturb him..But Maan was already awake and was trying to control his urge to open eyes and see Geet's reaction . Her soft touch made him to feel a sensation in his body and he could not hold himself more ..

While keeping his eyes close he said to Geet-Geet if you are done with your routine morning inspection .. can I open my eyes? and Geet was so shocked to hear his voice ..She quickly removed her palm from his face and tried to get up but Maan had tightened her in his strong arms

He opened his eyes- Where are you running Geet? .Today I will not let you go so easily like always..

Geet was little short of the words-w..h..a..t do you mean by like always?

Maan-Do I need to tell you that you always do this since we are sharing bed..

Geet face was red now due to the shyness and embarrassment-That means you were always aweke and you saw all that? I mean my weird sleeping styles and all that..

Maan kissed her nose-yes..

Geet gulped her saliva She was so embarrassed now She always stared at him because she thought that he was sleeping but she was wrong- wo... I m sorry

Maan frowned at this-Kisliye?

Geet-For sleeping like that..I mean for sleeping on you? I disturbed you a lot with that..

Maan-Who told you that you disturbed me?

Geet was now confused-what do you mean ? Everyone used to scold me for sleeping like that.

Maan-Buddhu..did you ever think why I never complained about your weird sleeping style? And Geet nodded in yes

Maan-what did you think about that?

Geet-I thought that you had a habit to sleep harder than me so you never knew about my sleeping habits

Maal laughed at that loudly and Geet pouted at that--Maan I m going ..you are making fun of me...and she get up and tried to go but Maan pulled her to him and she landed on his chest. He encaged her in his arms while she was on him...her locks were hanging on her face..he settled them at the back of her ear from one hand and then caressed her face with his thumb..Geet was still looking at him to know the reply..Maan brought her face near him and kissed her temple..

Maan-Geet it was not you who slept on me but it was me who made you sleep in my arms..I came to know about your roaming habit during the sleep on the very first day..so I took you in my arms to make you comfortable and it worked..you slept peacefully after that and I too felt at peace by keeping you near me ..because that was the only time I could hold you close to me..

Geet felt a lump inside her throat hearing Maan. How could he love her so much.

Then she thought something and talked to herself in her mind-But it never happened when I was with Yash... How should I take that? Did he not love me? Did he too feel for me like Maan felt for Arpita? Arpita was so dutiful towards Maan yet Maan was not in love with her and I did nothing for yash so he had a more valid reason for not loving me... She felt scared and she put her head on Maan's chest and Maan felt his vest getting wet. He instantly turned and put Geet on bed and he took the support of her elbow on bed.-Kya hua Geet?

Geet cleaned her eyes -Kuchh nahin bas aise hi..

Maan-don't you want to share it?

And she moved little towards Maan shaking her head in to a no and hid her face in him clutching his vest

And Maan did not ask anything as he understood that something was bothering her which she did not want to tell..he stroked her hair and in few moments he felt her calm..He bent down a little and kissed her both eyes..

Maan-Geet waise ek baat kahoon?

Geet-Hmm..

Maan-You are...you. are.

Geet-Maan ..please say it na

Maan-You are very heavy..

Geet-What?

Maan-I swear...My body is paining like I have come after doing some heavy weight lifting

Geet-Hawww..you mean to say main moti hoon..

Maan-nahin... when did I say so?..

And Geet pushed him away from her as he made fun of her--Don't talk to me..he tried to catch her again but this time she was fast and he could not catch her..

Maan took the pillow in his hand and hugged it.. he smiled to see Geet entering the washroom.. He was happy that he had diverted her mind as she was feeling emotional for something..

Geet came out and went near closet, selected her dress for the day..and she selected the clothes for Maan too..

She was pretending as she was angry on Maan for calling her fat but in real she was thinking about the relation which she shared with Yash. Today Maan's one revelation forced her to think..but she was careful to not make Maan notice herself lost..so she was silent showing Maan that she was angry.

Maan went to get fresh

The time Maan was in washroom she went to take the coffee for both of them..Maan liked to have coffee but Geet liked both tea and coffee so it was not a problem for her to take coffee..


Geet came back with two cups of hot coffee..Maan too was out till then..He sipped the coffee..He found geet lost. He called her-Geet..but Geet did not reply

He again said-Geet...and Geet looked at him-Haan

Maan-Kya hua?

Geet-Nothing ...I m not talking to you as I m angry on you for calling me fat..

Maan-Ok..so let me check one more time if you are heavy or not..if you are not heavy then I m ready for the punishment to call you fat..and he moved towards her to lift her in his arms Geet thoughts came back to present from the past and she blushed at that and tried to get up from there-No need to do that?

Maan-No.. I want to check one more time..Geet for that moment forgot everything and she tried to ditch Maan but he caught her wrist and brought her near her. He caged her in his arms

Geet-Maan let me go..door is open ..koi aa jaayega..

Maan-aane do..I m with my wife,,jo aayega wo apni aankhen band kar lega

Geet- Maan you are too much..

Maan- ahaan..you haven't seen my too much ..that is yet to come..and he nuzzled his nose in her neck and Geet felt a tickling sensation there..he cupped her face in his palms and his lips were very close to her lips.. He did not need her permission now to taste her to love her.. Geet too was losing to him now but she controlled herself and as he was going to touch her lips. He was just about to touch her lips but Geet bending down, picked up her clothes without watching them and ran in to the washroom blushing..

Maan took a deep sigh ..and smiled..he was not able to keep his hands away from her now..He did not know how he was going to spend these few days till they are married again, keeping himself in check.. and then his eyes fell on the bed..he saw that Geet had taken his shirt in the washroom instead of her kurta.

.and he smirked to see that..and he waited her to come out..

Geet had her bath and picked her kurta to wear but she saw that she had picked up Maan's shirt instead of her kurta.. She was shocked to see..

She slapped her head-Oh God..what i did? Ye Maan bhi na ..kal se mujhe kya ho raha hai? I m not in my senses now? Ab kya karun? Mera kurta to bahar hi rah gaya.. I think I should ask Maan to pass it to me ..Please God..help me. bas ab Maan chup chaap se mere dress mujhe de de..bina mujhe tang kiye

She opened the door of the bathroom slightly and called-Maan..

But Maan did not reply..

She looked around but Maan was not there she one more time called him-Maan are you here?Again she did not get any reply..

Geet-It seems he is out of the room...Thank God..now I can go and pick up my kurta ..Maan ko pata bh nahin chalega.Then she after wearing his shirt with the salwaar came out to take her kurta ..

She picked up it and turned to go back in to the washroom but bumped in Maan..She closed her eyes in the anticipation of falling hard on the ground but it did not happened..She found herself secured in Maan's strong arms

Maan was waiting for her to come out...He did not reply her when she called him but kept himself little away from the door of the washroom so that she could not see him..He wanted to tease her for wearing his shirt but he himself got lost in her seeing her in his own shirt..he never thought that a simple shirt too could look this s### on Geet..His black shirt was complementing her white milky skin..she was covered with scent of her soap and shampoo and that was working as a drug on Maan. He felt himself tempted to feel her soft skin...he was not able to keep himself away from his fresh found love..He looked at Geet who had closed her eyes due to the fear of falling..

Maan bent his face towards her in a urge to suck the water droplets which were sparkling on her face and were constantly dropping there from her wet locks..Maan's lips touched her skin to suck the water and Geet instead of opening her eyes clutched Maan's vest to control herself from reacting on that touch..And Maan's attention turned on her this act ..He looked at her face

.. her breathes were getting heavy..He made her stand on her feet.

.Geet opened her eyes and found Maan staring at her..Maan's intense gaze was on her and her heart started to beat faster ..she felt if it was going to jump out of her body. She tried to move back but his hold on her was firm..and he too moved with her..Now she was moving back to and he was moving forward..He was in not in the mood to leave her ..he wanted to feel her more..so he kept moving with her..soon Geet's back hit the wall..Geet looked in to his eyes..Maan removed her wet locks from her face to get a clear view and his fingers were creating an effect on Geet

...He cupped her face in his palms and he packed on her cheeks and then the corner of her lips..and Geet's hand automatically rose

and she placed her face on his exposed chest which was visible because he was wearing the vest..Her palm caressed it there and Maan felt a burning sensation there with that cold touch of her palm and he grabbed her lips in his

and groaned-Geeettt..

and Geet instantly removed her hand from there as she thought that Maan did not like it so he called her like that.Maan deepened the kiss..Geet too was feeling so tempted to touch him but did not dare again to touch him and she turned her hand in to a fist to control her urge to feel him..Maan noticed her removing her hand from him and turning it in to a fist

..Geet was breathing unevenly due to the passion and the temptation..Maan left her aftert few second and looked at her.. she was standing there with her closed eyes and trying to control her raised heart beats.and she was applying her all the force on her fist to suppress her desires

Maan-Geet.. Open your eyes..and Geet opened her eyes..they were little moist..

Maan held her fist in his palm and opened it..He could see the imprints of her nails on the soft skin of her palm ..they were very deep to tell about the force which she applied to control herself..Maan kissed there and put her palm on his chest again.

.Geet looked at him..

Maan then kissed on her temple and said-Geet..You too have same rights on me as I have on you. You don't need to stop yourself.. I m all yours ...you can feel me the way you want..His voice was so soft yet husky

Geet stared him for a moment and hugged him..she put her face on his chest. Her breathing was still uneven so Maan caressed her back to make her calm..

And then he remembered what he wanted to do with her at first..When he felt that Geet's breathes were quite under control.. he thought to start his mission to tease her again

Maan smirked- Geet tell me if you are a thief?

Geet was confused-what?

Maan-haan aur nahin to kya..I did not know that you are a thief?

Geet-What? Me and thief?How can you call me a thief?

Maan-Haan ..See you stole my shirt..I was searching it here and it was with you..By the way is it your hobby to steal someone else's clothes..You have your own clothes..why did you wear my shirt?

Geet was too shocked to hear that and she spoke -Maan I did not steal your shirt..I took it that by mistake. I left my kurta here and took your shirt in..I called you twice but you were not here so what could I do? Had to wear it to come out..

Maan-I don't know anything I want my shirt back right now..

Geet-haan to de rahi hoon na let me change first..

Maan-nahin mujeh abhi chahiye ..mujhe pahanni hai ye..

Get was so shocked-How can I give it to you right now? Aur jyada jaldi hai to dusri pahan lijiye

Maan-No I will wear this one only..

Geet - Maan this is too much now..


Maan-Kya too much..mujhe shirt chaiye matlab chahiya Wo bhi abhi

Geet-achchha ? Is It? Ok..I m not going to give it now..Do whatever you want .

Maan-Are you sure?

Geet-What do you mean?

Maan- I mean you said na to do whatever I want ..So I m taking my shirt back right now..

Geet-haan jo karna ho kar lijiye ..I m not going to give you this at any cost

Maan-that's not a problem I know how I can take that back..

Geet-OK..I too want to see what you do..

Maan-Challenge..that too to Maan Singh Khurana?

And geet nodded -haan

Maan-Ok..here I go and now I will take my shirt back right here right now only.. and he strode towards her and she was again with her back on the wall..

Geet eyes widened to see him-(ST).Was he saying true? No no ..he can't do this..and next moment Maan was unbuttoning the shirt..


He opened the first button..

Geet did not say a word she knew that he would not go ahead She smiled to see him..

Maan did not realise what he was doing as he was again lost in Geet...

His eyes were n her face not on his hands .And next moment she felt Maan's hands moving downward to open the second button and his fingers started to do their job but Geet held his hands and Maoned-Maan..please..

And Maan realized what he was doing as he too stopped at once..He noticed that he had moved far ahead in the effort to tease her..he looked at her ..she was very shy and embarrassed too to look back at him..Maan left her and both turned quickly to avoid each other's gaze..

Then Maan slapped himself in his mind and turned..He picked up her kurta and gave it too Geet-Geet ..go and change..Geet took the kurta from his hand ..she still was not looking at him..after taking the kurta she rushed in to the washroom..

For Geet this was all new. She was standing with the support of the counter in washroom ..her eyes fell on the mirror which was reflecting her image..she looked at her own face it was tomato red..she blushed seeing her own face..She had witnessed so many unseen sides of Maan since they confessed their love..

Geet talked to herself-Oh God How I m going to handle all this.

With a blush on her face she changed the dress and come out..she handed over the shirt to Maan and Maan again made her blushed with his act..

He with the shirt held her hand too..Geet looked at him and found him smiling with a naughty grin at his face..

Geet avoided his gaze.and turned to Go but Maan pulled her towards him and whispered in her ears-Geet you are really looking edible right now..all red red..and Geet's breath stuck in her throat hearing him..It was morning only and she had seen too much..Day was going to be long for her..How she was going to manage with her Lover boy husband..

Geet-Maan.. If you are going to continue it.. how will you get ready?.Everyone must be waiting for us..

Maan knew that it was too much for Geet..so he said-OK Geet..then we will continue it later..Is that ok?..

Geet was all shy shy with his comment ..so to avoid him she ran out of the room ..and Maan taking a deep sigh entered the wash room.. Geet went in to the kitchen to see what was going on there..

Priya-Geet you are still not ready ..kya hua? And then Geet remembered that she was not ready yet .. as she only had bath and changed the clothes-Oh no I will have to go again there..Maan ka kya bharosa..pata nahin kya krenge.(To Priya) haan wo main bas dekhne aayi ki kuchh ehlp chahiye aapko?

Priya- NO Geet Suresh has done everything so you go and get ready I think you both are late today..

Geet-Ji maa ...and she went again to the room..She shot a quick prayer to God to keep her safe now from her husband..She entered and saw Maan wearing the same shirt

Geet-Maan ..why are you wearing this shirt..ye to maine pahan li thi na..you don't need to wear it..you wear fresh one..

Maan-No..I will put it only today..Atleast you will be with me today for the whole day and I wont miss my wife when I m away.. I will feel you around me..It has now your body fregnence ..You know that I m having a meeting and will be out for the whole day..and I would feel you around me in the form of your fregnence .

Geet smiled at this and went to get ready..Maan was ready so he left to have breakfast as he had to discuss some topics with Ram regarding meeting..

Geet too got ready and came down..she helped suresh and Priya to serve the Breakfast.when she came to serve maan their eyes met and both smiled seeing each other..

All had Breakfast and then Maan left for the meeting and Geet and Ram for the office..

Geet asked Anie to come to FH to take the trial of the dresses which she was preparing for her marriage..

Part-67 <-prev/next->>Part-69

Background score by Priya

song-Ek din aap yun humko mil jaayenge

Film-Yes Boss


How was it? I hope you all are satisfied with there romantic scenes..there are so many more and I will try to incorporate them as the story proceeds..Please leave your generous comments because these comments are going to decide if you are liking the style of writing the romance or not -Rashmi


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Edited by Rashmi... - 9 years ago


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Posted: 10 years ago
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congo for the new thread rashmi

the update was just too lovely and sachi mein romantiiiccc... full of maaneet scenes which we crave for...and after reading the whole update even am thinking like geet, abhi tho bas morning hua ... aage kya kya hoga... šŸ˜† but tumne maan ko meeting mein kyu bheja😔... office mein bheja hotha tho wahaan bhi thoda romnace kar lethašŸ˜†

the secrets of weird sleeping habits is open now... geet now dont have to fear to think how maan will react nor maan has to think of any bahanas to take her in his arms now...
routine morning inspectionšŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜†

geet thinking whether yash loved her or not... yeh tho hona hi tha... its only natural for us to compare two things...

maan tho sachi mein chalu lover boy hainšŸ˜†... he is not leaving a chance to touch geet or to tease her... but i love his natkatpan... the kurta shirt adla badling and its consequences was just superb... maan though naughty but his eyes are always open on geet... checking whether she is comfortable or not... and the way he eased her saying that she too have right on him was superb... kudi nahi tho patha nahi apne haat ka kya haal kar dethišŸ˜†

maanneet scenes tho aise hain jaise kithna bhi do kam lagtha hain...am already now waiting for the next... banner ke sab scenes aayenge na... so we have 3 more dhinchak ones... i donno for which am waiting more for... snae and ladder ya rtm ...


Edited by -lakshmi- - 10 years ago
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Yeh update acha nahi hai...Naya wala post karo...
Edited by JeevanaP - 10 years ago
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Rashmi šŸ¤—...thank u for the awesome update...loved the bg song and all the pics u used ā¤ļø...like Geet said...it is still only morning and already so many romantic Maaneet scenes 😳 ...uff this new found love between them is so beautiful ...all their scenes were so well written šŸ‘...could feel their emotions and passion so well šŸ‘šŸ¼...plz continue 😊
Edited by --Ratna-- - 10 years ago
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Amazing update
one of d romantic update from u
loved it alot
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Awesome dear
Lv it
Awwwv so cute

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