*Completed* Th#3 ArHi SS: Make Me Love

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sadhnasoumya

@sadhnasoumya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#991

Read all the parts so far
Very interesting
Gonna read the rest now
U write so well

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Tapdance

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Posted: 11 years ago

#992

Well the previous thread was closed so commenting here..

Chp 4 was wonderful in the way the transition of her feelings was explained..from gratitude to respect to admiration to awareness an infatuation and then love to obsession. ..

She really is obsessed...crazy for him ..

His stance is understandable and correct and she seems to be loosing it bordering on madness in love. ..

What an apt way to describe the title...she wants him to make her love someone else and before that she wants him to make love to her...

Will it really be love if he doesn't have those feelings...seems tough for him to to understand her or love her in that way..can he and if he can't...will he..

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Tapdance

@Tapdance

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Posted: 11 years ago

#993

Ohh my!

He was married and then divorced because he couldn't father a child..well payal had her priorities straight...that never implies that she never loved him...It implies that her dream of being a woman completely... of being a mother was more important to her...what could Arnav do...she didn't want to understand. ..

As to Khushi..yes her whole world is Arnav now...but people change and so does their love for other people..she is too young to be so sure...she is sure about him for sure...but how sure is she about herself?Khushi does sound like a whining kid sometimes!

Well the villain is back..is this how Arnav will realize his love if he loves her that way somehow that is...

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Minnie

@Illuminatus.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#994

Chapter 4-

how beautifully you have chronicled the stages of attraction that lead to love in Khushi's life. amazing.

Chapter 5-

So so amazing... Make me love someone like I love you!! ... phew!! so poetic.. I want to fall in love right now.. just to know how Arnav and Khushi feel.

Chapter6-

The last lines send a shiver down my spine. But. the highlight will be, Khushi saying ...when that man will make love to me, the only face I want to see, the only voice I want to hear and the only name I want to take repeatedly will be yours"

Chapter 7-

Khushi is bold.. she knows that Arnav will not say anything to her. fabulous and quite a shock value to the story.