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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hii guys... after reading soo many ffs' i thought i shud write one too...so here goes it..

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Character Sketch

Sujal- (played by Rajeev Khandelwal)- he is a fun guy of 18 yrs old...in grade 12,handsome, humorous, dashing ...lives in Canada...but an Indian...
Kashish- (played by aamna shariff)- She is a fun girl,good looking ,smart, 18yrs old in grade 12...lives in India...but she has just moved to canada...

side charaters
Kripa(played by Neha bamb)- Kashish's friend,lives in Canada,18 yrs, gr 12
Angad( played by Iqbal khan)- Sujal's friend lives in Canada,18 yrs ,gr 12

So all of them r in high school,...just abt to graduate....

Now, all these live in the same place...and here comes a whole lotta fun for all my readers!!I ll soon be posting 1st part...


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if u guys lik my work,i need comments...just "cont.soon" or " 👏 " bhi chalega,jis se mujhe pata chale tht u r reading...ok..?

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey..the charecter sketch is good...& story seems interesting too.....but yaar....do these guys fit as 12th grade kids....they seem mature... 😕 .....waise it will be fun...imagining them as youngesters....

Do continue soooooooooooon 👏

Luv,
Akanksha 😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey the character sketches are awesome 👏 . i would love to read this fanfic where sujal and kashish are in canada cause even i am living in canada right now 😉 . can't wait any longer 😉 . plzz......... continue soon. really waiting for the first part. 😊 😛 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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me love it if angad kripa in it then i want to read this story and i also love kashish sujal what a koinkidink
fantastics.
please be contiueing soon
awsomes

same to same

avantika
😆 👏

(if you guys have watched tara rum pum im harry the team manager)
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey... ur ff looks grr88...! Start it ssooon..! 😳 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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grade 12 kids that's cool 😛 interesting intro 👏 👏 its good u r trying something different frm teh normal character 😃 waiting 4 the first part 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 1

A girl from Air India steps on tht land and her hair r coming all over the face cuz of the wind…thts our dear KASHISH.

A guy jumps up from the bed like a spring after hearing the darn Alarm and shuts it off and sleeps again, but the sun rays from the window wake him up..….thts our dear SUJAL.

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krips:Are yaar…kitni der laga di …I was waiting for u outside the airport..
Kash: Kya kahu yaar…wo immigration walo ne roka tha..to take pic and all documents stuff…
krips:Oh ok ok.. I get it…so..how was the journey..
Kash:Sooo tiringgggg…..but fun….cuz I traveled in plane for da 1st time…lolzzz
krips:Oo I c….yaar….teri bohot yaad ayi…aur mujhe tujhse itniiiiii saari batein karni hai ….intniiii saari baatein karni hai…tht kya kahoon kitnii saaaa[ kash stops her>
Kash:Haan…ab yeh dialogue baji band kar…mera samman kaun uthayega…tu…????
krips:La mein uthati hoon [ moves ahead to take one of the bags]…
Kash:Rehene de bohot bhari hai…and waise bhi its just 1 bag…and car is just a few steps ahead…I ll do it…
Both go towards the car….they put luggage …they sit…they go to kripa's home…

Actually kripa is living alone(she came on student visa) ,same with kash….now thye r gonna live together…

Here comes kripa's home…ek flat hai…she opens the door…..typical Indian ghar hai..[from inside] (lolz)….Indian khane ki khoshbu aa rahi hai…

kash:Are tuje Indian khana banana kab aaya…tuje toh kuch bhi nahi aata tha naa//!!
krips:Yahan aake sab sikh liya…
kash:Wowww….chalo achha hai….where's da washroom…I wanna go to freshen up…
krips:Straight to the right…tum jao.., tab tak , mein khana lagati hoon….
kash:[thinking( to herself)> bol toh aise rahi hai…jaise mein uska pati hoon…."khana laga deti hoon"
She freshens up and comes back and sits on table…her legs r paining….
kash:La tuje help kar do…
krips:No just yeh microwave mein hi garam karna hai…nothing long to do…u sit and relax…
kash:Ok
Tabhi she picks up the remote to switch on the tv…and to her surprise she sees…there is a bill!!!
kash:Are yeh kya be….hotel se layaaaa tune….mujhe doubt to ho hi gaya tha……ki tu meri achanak itni seva kyun kar rahi hai….kya zaroorat thi…hello mam…mien burgar ,pizza kha sakti hoon…..
krips:No actually burger pizza kaa samaan hai..but mujhe aaj Indian kahana khana tha tere saath…aur itne dino se nahi khaya …
kash:Yaar…leking this cud be expensive naaa..
krips:Are hum toh parties mein bahar se hi late hai…and nothing costly…its normal….
kash:Ok …I see…
They both eat…and then go into the room….kash enters the room…its all pink….cuz pink is kripa's fav. Color….
kash:yeh kya kiye be…pink achha hai…but this is too much yaar….ab mein aa gayi hoon…I m gonna put curtains sky blue color and bed peach color….
krips:No…I said no….yeh toh aisa hi rahega…
kash:No I m gonna change it….wahan India mein bhi hostel mein yeh haal tha…yyaad hei…log hame pinky kehte the…..
krips:Kehte hai toh kahen…and waise bhi no1 gonaa come here….
kash:Ok lets do 1 thing…u take tht bed I ll take this 1…and I ll put all my things on this side…u put there…
krips:Ok …
They start talking…kash talks abt their old Indian friends and kripa talks abt her new friends in the school….
Kash: hey where is th e school…and when shall I go for admission….and all my documents …and my …
krips:Ufff…don worry…I have already talked with ur counselor and u can hand him ur marksheets from Indian school…he ll see it and probably u ll have to take a simple test…and they ll give u 4 courses this semester…and listen…take physics,chem.,bio and phys ed…this sem…it ll b good for u…
kash:Ok…physics is hard…
krips:u think tht…but over here.u ll not find it hard……
Blah blah ballahh….lik this they talk abt school stuff…and all tht..
Edited by dhvanisoni - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: aaakkii

hey..the charecter sketch is good...& story seems interesting too.....but yaar....do these guys fit as 12th grade kids....they seem mature... 😕 .....waise it will be fun...imagining them as youngesters....

Do continue soooooooooooon 👏

Luv,
Akanksha 😛



thnks a lotsss..for liking my ff...i ll soon b posting 2nd part...after my promo..
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: fravashi

hey the character sketches are awesome 👏 . i would love to read this fanfic where sujal and kashish are in canada cause even i am living in canada right now 😉 . can't wait any longer 😉 . plzz......... continue soon. really waiting for the first part. 😊 😛 😊


thnks a lotss for liking it...wiil b posting next part tomorow
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: *Avantika_4eva*

me love it if angad kripa in it then i want to read this story and i also love kashish sujal what a koinkidink
fantastics.
please be contiueing soon
awsomes

same to same

avantika
😆 👏

(if you guys have watched tara rum pum im harry the team manager)



thnks for liking...first i was gonna put s and k only but then i though for friends i shud pu a and k cuz lotss of ppl lik their jodi....including me


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