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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you!!! Amazing !!!! Brilliant!!! Looking forward to next part!!! 😊 !!!!
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awesome idea and prolouge..
plz pm me.. i am in
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice start.
Pm me whenever you update next part.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: samig

it all will happen but very slowly and very dramatically what say?

I don't know

However it will happen will try to make it a good one

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Awesome prologue

Now I am waiting for the update

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Originally posted by: -mina-

ufff Chahat what an intriguing start!! have been haunting this thread all day for your post 😛 thanks for the prologue, looking forward to more 😃

Thank you so much

I hope I live up to the expectations

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Originally posted by: Arshiishraragna

Good start yaar.. 👏 😊.. Do continue soon 😃

Thank you

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The prologue is just wow

Update soon

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Chapter 1

"Marriage is not a noun, it's a verb. It's not something you get, it's something you do. It's the way you love your partner every day. Marriage is based on love, respect, trust and mutual understanding Purab. Will you be able to do it? Knowing Aliyah's truth, what she has done to me will you be able to love, respect, trust and understand her how a husband should understand his wife. I want you to be very sure of it. You are marrying Aliyah so that Bulbul can be safe from Aliyah and Abhishekh. You are marrying her so that this farce of a marriage that Abhishekh and I have can become a true marriage filled with everything a couple wants and dreams of. Purab will you be able to be happy yourself? Because if you have the slightest doubt in your mind that you will not be happy with Aliyah then I do not want you to marry her. If you will not be happy you certainly will not be able to make her happy and if she is not happy then my family will not be happy and I will not stand that." Pragya said it all in one breath.

She was in Purab's room. The wedding ceremony was going to begin soon. During the pre wedding ceremonies she had seen Purab's indecisive mood when it came to marrying Aliyah. She wanted to be clear of his decision. She wanted Purab to be clear of what he wanted and be 100% committed to this marriage. Purab stood there gawking at her. His eyes popped as big as headlights. His mouth was open forming a perfect o.

Pragya realized that she had done it again. She shrugged her shoulders. "What force of habit, I am a college lecturer after all. I can go on for hours but that is not important. A single word from your mouth is what is important. Are you sure Purab?" "Yes Pragya Di."

Pragya caressed his cheek and adjusted the brooch on his sherwani. She came down to check the preparations. She was walking towards the mandap when a hand grabbed her wrist and pulled her behind a pillar.

"Aap? What are you doing? Let me go? Don't touch me." Pragya was pinned to the pillar by Abhi. She tried to wriggle out of his hold but he tightened his grip.

"Mujhe shaukh nahi hai tumhe touch karne ka. Where the hell have you been? Let me guess apne ex-aashiq ke room mein gayi thi. Yes, yes, yes, here come the crocodile tears. Don't you have an ounce of shame left in you? You are married and he is going to get married to your husband's sister still you are trying to get him back into your life."

Pragya stood there with tears in her eyes. Why did she let him affect her? Did he call himself her husband? Is this what a husband is supposed to say to his wife? Is this the way a wife is supposed to be treated in a marriage?'

"Abhi, Pragya kahan ho beta?" Abhi's dadi and her rocking cousins came looking for Abhi and Pragya. "Yo dadi?" Abhi and Pragya came out from behind the pillar.

"Oye rockstar pillar ke peeche apni professor ke kaunse gyaan le raha tha?" The two cousin dadi's teased the newlyweds.

"Nahi dadi it's nothing like that." Pragya felt shy out of nowhere. A touch of red adorned her cheeks. Why was she feeling shy if she was being teased on being behind the pillar with this heartless man?' She reprimanded herself mentally even added a smack on the head to make sure she would not let Abhishekh affect her in any way.

"Obvio dadi, Pragya is right. There was nothing like that." Abhi felt shy too. What the fish was happening to him? Abhi the rock star was blushing on being teased with this chashmish, this B... Beauty? Yuck.' "Dadi you think I need to learn anything from her? No I do not after all I am Abhi the rock star and the things she is an expert at I would never want to learn." Abhi winked at Pragya indicating at her being a manipulative B. Pragya glared at Abhi and he mouthed beauty'.

"Rock star Abhi today is your only sister's wedding. Go and get her from her room." "OK" "Tch kya OK? You and Pragya together have to get Aliyah down to the mandap."

Abhi and Pragya began going up the stairs. Pragya's foot got stuck in her sari and she was about to trip but Abhi supported her and did not let her fall. Pragya was about to thank him but Abhi opened his mouth. "Itni giri hui toh ho ki apne hi pati ke ghar mein apne ex-asshia ki shaadi ke din uske room mein ghusi hui thi ab aur kitna girogi? Koi limit hai ya nahi?"

Pragya swallowed another insult hurled at her and smiled for dadi's sake. Abhi and Pragya reached Aliyah's room. Tannu was there with Aliyah and a huge staff from Aliyah regular parlor.

"Stay right where you are. Don't you dare enter my room and cast your dark shadow on my bridal trousseau. Bhai what is she doing here?"

"Aliyah dadi sent her with me. We are supposed to take you down to the mandap."

"Uff dadi bhi na."

"Aliyah not a word against dadi."

"Bhai but..."

"Aliyah look dadi says that your brother and sister in law have to take you down to the mandap, it's a ritual and it is a good omen too. For you if I can marry her can't you bear her for a few hours? Now come on give me a smile."

Aliyah forced a smile for her brother. Pragya knew how special her wedding day is for a bride. She was the last person who wanted to spoil if for Aliyah. She decided to stay close yet far from Aliyah. Aliyah was dressed in a beautiful designer wedding trousseau. She was looking really beautiful. The darkness inside her which ruined Pragya's life had vanished and the glow of being the bride made her look as pure as the first dew drop. Pragya could not help but put a kala teeka behind her ear. Aliyah, Abhi and Tannu all thought it was some black magic she did. Before Aliyah could say anything hurtful to her dadi came.

"I send the two of you to get her down not to settle in her room. Pragya beta did you put a kala teeka for my beautiful girl." Dadi asked taking balayein of Aliyah.

"Jee dadi. I put a small spot no one will be able to see it."

"Good girl. Arre Tannu what are you doing here? Go down and see if anyone needs anything. Beta after all you too are a member of our family right?"

Tannu made a face and left from there. Dadi let out a small laugh. She knew Tannu wanted to enjoy every power of being part of Mehra family but she would never be able to handle any responsibility that came with the power.

"Dadi wo..."

"Haan beta?"

"Dadi shouldn't Aliyah take blessings from mummyji papaji?"

Dadi smiled. She took Aliyah, Abhi and Pragya to her room where Abhi's parents' photo was kept. Abhi looked at Pragya. Why is she so pretentious? Why was she all nice in front of dadi when she was a b**** in reality? Why did she have to give false hopes to dadi of her and Abhi's bright future? Why was she making it difficult for him? Why was she confusing him? He knows her truth then why does she have to fake that innocence he sees in her eyes during their intense eye gazes which he longs for even when he knows he should not because she will hypnotize him.' All these thoughts made Abhi feel dizzy. He was about to fall but Pragya supported him. He looked at her and she took away her hand.

Dadi, Abhi and Pragya brought Aliyah down to the mandap. Since Aliyah did not have parents her uncle aunt or her brother and sister in law could do all the rituals of her wedding. Aliyah did not want Pragya anywhere near her wedding but her brother was everything to her. He had been a parent to her. She wanted him to she had to let Pragya do all the rituals. Abhi and Pragya did all the pre wedding rituals for Aliyah. They blessed her and prayed for her happy married life. Abhi did not understand, Pragya was sad ever since the engagement but not today. She was genuinely happy for Aliyah and Purab. He knew that she was a faker but no one can be that good. He smiled as Aliyah and Purab were now safe from the dark shadow of Pragya and he too could get rid of her soon... He would get rid of her soon This thought broke something inside Abhi... Only he was too proud to feel it.

"Shaadi ka muhurat ho raha hai dulhe ko bulaiye" The pundit lit the fire in the havankund. He made all the preparations while Abhi went to get Purab.

"Purab come one it is time. Punditji is calling you. Finally the promise you made to me, it is time to keep it. Purab. Purab? Purab!" Abhi removed his pagdi and threw it on the floor. He was angry beyond anyone wildest imagination. Another betrayal. "First he broke Aliyah's heart by falling in love with that chashmish and now he insults my sister, Abhi the Rock Star's sister by ditching her on the wedding day."

Purab, at his wedding day with Aliyah, just disappeared! Do you believe it? Abhi couldn't find a trace of him!

"Why did he do that?! Why did he betray me once again? What on earth is he doing?!" Abhi smashed his and Purab's photo frame. Abhi's hand was bleeding.

"PRAGYA!!!"

A/N: Next update after the following 30 member(s) like the above post:
natashabc, meena_237, smala, rk143, aumigi, sham24, sangeethbala, -mina-, shivaniaroraji, anusha.nush, shakti_arsha, Arshiishraragna, hiral1979, het27, -Inferno-, Rozy77, prabha75, SnigdhaGautam, indi, moksha89, arunsunita_gm, Ethereal.Surbhi, ushankitvc, daisydee425, sonu-monu, SHINYSHREYA, -Martinski-, keenu_kk, vivkriti, babydolll,

More readers are always welcome.

Edited by Chahanya - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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chahat right 😳 anyways naam me kya rakha hai 😆
well i am sorry for late comment
but dont stop sending pms too 😆
anyways coming to the story 😊
u have written it so well...
i was having visual effect of it lol...😆 thts the truth 😕
i liked piller k peeche kuchi ku 😆😆
in the last u hooked the update at the perfect time😳😳
m curious to read more and EUREKA... next update is ready 😆😆
thst the faayda of unresing late right 😆😆
anyways i can understand abhi what was he going through... at the moment he is unaware of the truth...
bass ho gaya next update padhana hai

update soon... (formality k liye wrote😆)

thnx fr d pm...

p.s. i am freaking first 😲😲😲
Edited by babydolll - 11 years ago

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