AbhiGya SS: Benaam Sa Dard... Completed. - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: babydolll

recently came across...

idea seems promising...
update soon

Thank you I hope I can deliver what you have liked
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
Loved the idea
Update Soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
it all will happen but very slowly and very dramatically what say?
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14

Prologue:

The room was dark, so dark. He made sure his eyes were open, fearing he had gone blind. He couldn't see his hand, even though it was literally an inch from his face. He gathered his courage to call out a hello, hoping against hope that someone would answer. Nobody did.

He knew he was being silly, he knew no one was there. No one had been there since 3 months. Yet he sat there waiting... Waiting to smell the fragrance of incense sticks... Waiting to hear the tinkles of her anklets... Waiting to see her face... Waiting to hear her voice... Waiting for her to scold him for leaving his wet towel on the bed... Waiting for him to burn his finger in the hot coffee she brought for him... Waiting for her to soothe his pain... Waiting...

Benaam-sa yeh dard thehar kyun nahin jaata,

Benaam-sa yeh dard thehar kyun nahin jaata,

Jo beet gaya hai woh guzar kyun nahin jaata,

Benaam-sa yeh dard thehar kyun nahin jaata...

Sab kuch to hai

Kya dhundhti rehti hain nigahen,

Sab kuch to hai

Kya dhundhti rehti hain nigahen...

Kya baat hain main waqt pe ghar kyun nahin jaata,

Kya baat hain main waqt pe ghar kyun nahin jaata,

Jo beet gaya hai woh guzar kyun nahin jaata,

Benaam-sa yeh dard thehar kyun nahin jaata...

Woh ek hi chehra toh nahin saare jahan mein,

Woh ek hi chehra toh nahin saare jahan mein,

Jo door hai woh dil se utar kyun nahin jaata,

Jo door hai woh dil se utar kyun nahin jaata,

Jo beet gaya hai woh guzar kyun nahin jaata,

Benaam-sa yeh dard thehar kyun nahin jaata,

Jo beet gaya hai woh guzar kyun nahin jaata...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
ufff Chahat what an intriguing start!! have been haunting this thread all day for your post 😛 thanks for the prologue, looking forward to more 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
Good start yaar.. 👏 😊.. Do continue soon 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: aumigi

lovely concept, please update soon

Thank you so much

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Posted: 11 years ago
#18

Loved it ,what a lovely way to start, it was intense. Please update soon.👍🏼 👏

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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
excellent prologue
please pm me when u update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
amazing start please continue soon.

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