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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aww..it's a lovely start. .
Continue soon dear😊
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congrats for the new story 😊very interesting start👏and nice title 😊eagerly waiting for more...continue soon😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Handa House😛

Around 6 in the evening


She was teetering here and there in the hall...Still waiting for Geet from last 4-5 hours...But no body knew about her whereabouts..She was non other than Geet's Maternal Grand Ma (Nani) Leela Bajaj...Whole Bajaj Family was in Birmingham but she prefer to stay with Handas coz she really loves her only granddaughter Geet more than any one else. An lady with aristocratic mind set... for whom her social circle..her reputation matter more ..


Randeep Handa or as usually family call her Rano...Geet's mom she was at her wit's end...also much worried due to all the happening during day...


Suddenly Geet enters in the sitting area...She had prepared herself for the emotional outburst in front by her Nani and Mom...


" From last four hours...We are ringing you...But no answer...Its okey if u were not in mood to talk...at least ek message send ker deti ki aap theek ho..." Mrs. Bajaj jerked her from shoulder...


" You really feel satisfied beta by doing all this...Mom ko preshan karna this is ur favorite time pass from the childhood...Hai na Geet..." Wiping her own eyes Rano came close to her...


" Mom ...Nani this is the reason..this is the reason..Why I was out and was not taking ur calls...I hired Mr. Sharma but instead of his loyalty towards me...he directly reports to you or Pa...Quite sure even today ..." Geet had been frustrated due to her staff and family's same behavior. No one was ready to understand her.Even she didn't want to clear her point now...


"You are such a stubborn child !!...why baby ?...look at your mom's condition...take little pity on her...She can't stay away from you..." Mrs. Bajaj tired to make her understand...


" Ma ( Mrs. Bajaj ) she is much grown up now...Me needs you even now...But for Geet we matters nothing for her ..." Rano reduced to tears which some where hit Geet deep inside ...


" Mom whats this ...why you always emotionally black mail me...in front of the world I m the MD to this Handa Empire...I can take decisions but can't step out of even this city without your permission...Isn't it strange !! and when in comes to travel abroad you always turn whole house upside down..." Irritated she answered ...


" From years I m planning trip to India but you and Pa never allow me but not this time...Now you get to know...its good...I had planned to inform you after I landing over there...But I can go without any worry now..." She sighed...

" Oh so this is your final decision.."Stepping inside Mohinder questioned Geet...


" Yes Pa...I have decided...I gonna handle whole project by myself...Also don worry about me Pa...just come out of harsh memories..I beg you Pa ...I want to move ahead..." She hugged her father tightly.Mohinder he was a father so put his weapons down


" Theek hai beta main apko nahi rokuga...But you are not going alone ..Your Nani gonna accompany you .." When Mohinder gave his verdict every one started to gaze at him in surprise.


" Nani !!..But why Pa...its more like a formal tour not a family affair...main wahan official meeting attend karugi ja fir Nani k sath shopping...which she likes most..." Geet made silly face on this .But she had no other option.. Mohinder was on his words .It was also a fact that Geet was much closeer to her Nani

" Pa what I m thinking ...if you hav made mind to send Nani with me...why not main Aanya ko bhi saath le jaau..what u say Pa...? " these few sudden words from Geet put such an impact on every one that every one rooted to spot.But why ?(I can't explain at this point 😆) Every one's jaw dropped...


"Geet ...just shut up...Don't judge my patience...Without letting me know you made whole plan...and now when I hav permitted you...why you are dragging Aanya here..." Mohinder steamed up.


" Pa whats wrong I said ? ...Maine sirf permission mangi thi Pa...at least aapne mujhe permit kar diya it's a big thing.." She had a lump in her throat ...without saying else she left the place

In India

New Delhi

Around 11 in the night

This city which ran in its own pace.Never care about what had left behind...Like every night he drifted off to sleep in his study chair .Where he usually spend his long nights digging head in files...so to keep sleep away from him .


This big palace like building was the residential place for Khuraanas..." Khuraana Mansion"..Khuraanas run the top most construction house in India " Khuraana Constructions"..Savitri Devi Khuraana the Chairperson of this huge empire and her 27 years old grand son Maan Singh Khuraans was the youngest MD ever in history of top business houses...


One of the most eligible becholars in the country.But he always kept a distance from girls. After completing his BE and then Masters in Management he took over charge three years back .A handsome..well built young man who had every thing from looks to brain and power .Why he always remains in search of loneliness..? Why he wander aloof...? For him just his works is priority nothing else matter.

Even till now he was working on the same presentation he was going to give early morning.But after heavy work load brain also demands rest so when sleep got a grip on him he was not aware.


" Diya...Diya...where are you ?" He mumbles in sleep ..." Where r you Diya...Diya...diya..no...!!! this can't happen...it is not true...no no...Diyaaa?.." He scrammed aloud..He was in sleep but this dream (or thoughts) not just broke his spell but also disturbed whole mansion too.


Savitri Devi for whom her grandson was everything .Maan's disturbed nights were not new to her.But made her blood run cold . She ran toward study where Maan was also awake now breathing heavily and drenched in sweet even when AC was on.


" Maan ...maan hamara bacha .." She cried out almost and rushed near to him...Grabbed him in her arms tightly like wanted to hide her grandson in her arms from the whole world.


" Daddi Maa...u r not in good health...fir kyo aap aayi yahan..?? " Maan questioned


"You are my whole world beta...I can't c you in pain..I can't .." She cried out her inner grief...


" Its my destiny Daddi Maa now...no one can change it ...no one.." He tired to smile .


" Destiny ... wo aapke haath main hai Maan ...usko kaise badlnaa hai...it is up to you...and now I have to take some hard steps..." There was a determination in the way she answered back Maan..


What decision she gonna take.What was there Maan's past ? 😲



To be continued...


Sonia


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Please please plz its Aanya not Aliya...she is not third person or third angel...keep in mind readers...


Note :😳Tense Liberties always there ...according to rules and situation in contemporary writing

Edited by Sonia.KN - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Is it gng to b a periodic past
who s anaya
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: divydecember

Is it gng to b a periodic past
who s anaya


its Aanya...😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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😉 aanya 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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who is this Anaya and why all family members were stunned hearing her name...are u gonna include Aliya Bhatt also in this story...aajkal sab yahi kar rahe hain...

maan is also disturbed and who is Diya...where she is gone...

let's see where Geet and Maan destiny will meet...

very interesting update...

thanx for pm...


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6



who is this Anaya and why all family members were stunned hearing her name...are u gonna include Aliya Bhatt also in this story...aajkal sab yahi kar rahe hain...

maan is also disturbed and who is Diya...where she is gone...

let's see where Geet and Maan destiny will meet...

very interesting update...

thanx for pm...



Di I don wanna drag any one here...third person kya aaega yahan jab in dono ki life kahi ki kahi hai...don worry no one is here...no torture ..no third angel...no re birth and no brij...its a strange sweet love story...😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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very nice
what is the past that geet's parent's dint want her to visit india
who is diya , maaning dreaming which disturbs him most like nightmare

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Posted: 11 years ago
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it's really interesting concept. why mohinder is not allowing geet to go in india. who is .aliya. geet is handling handa construction amazingly. she wants to handle india's project personally. waiting for next dear

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