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Posted: 11 years ago
#71
interesting starting...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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After all the dramatic sequence of events finally she got permission for her well desired trip...But some where she was unhappy coz everything was not according to her...One Nani was going to accompany her and she had to travel without Aanya... The ultimate condition Mohinder put in front of Geet...She was in totally spoiled mood seemed like her father had clipped her wings....Geet locked herself in the room...



" Inder dekha aapne...How she left..? She is not happy by heart...Just.. just to get permission..She accepted the condition you put in front..." Rano's motherly instinct judged Geet right.For her...her daughter was her whole world and it made her worry.


" Rano...just tell me one thing...Some how by hook or crook...if we might have stopped her to go...fir wo khush reh patti...? " He continued..."..Answer is no...wo situation bhi humko hurt karti...Now at least when Mom ( Mrs.Bajaj ) is going with her...We need not to worry...and her anger that is momentary ..She will be fine..." He consoled her.


Mrs. Bajaj till now who was silent also came forward to be part of this discussion " Rano...Inder is absolutely rite...Main hu na...no need to worry ...Cheer up baby.." She hugged Rano and petted her back.


" But Mom.."


" Just shut up baby...leave it on me...Ya I never been a part of your Dad's business in direct way...tum logon ki parvarish main he laggi rahi...Per Mr.Bajaj ka har decision mujhe patta hotta tha...Business is in my blood...u know..." Mrs. Bajaj still busy to prove her point


"..I will handle this so called Business trip too ..Geet ki ma ki ma hu...samjhi..." She laughed aloud..


Some where Mrs .Bajaj's words brought Rano in high spirits...Still she was worried about some thing.." Inder Mom will handle Geet...it is really true...more than me Geet is close to her Nani...but what about Aanya...hah..?" Confused Rano asked


" Rano please leave this topic here..every thing will be fine..." Mohinder tried to wind up " I was sure that it gonna be hard to stop Geet this time...that's why I made all arrangements in advance...I had phoned Mr. Sharma for Mom's visa formalities ...some one will come from his office to collect passport ...Geet ka visa already ho gaya hai..."...


" By the way Inder when we have to leave..?" Mrs Bajaj questioned..


" Mom according to trip Geet planned ...A day after tomorrow in the morning...Your visa is in wait..." He cleared...


" OMG ..certainly visa ll be there..but I have to make many arrangements in this short span...hurry up Rano.." Mrs.Bajaj almost dragged Rano from the hall.


Inder shook his head and sighed "These ladies are impossible.."


In Geet's room


Before leaving she had to hand over entire charge to her cousin Rohit (Rohit Bajaj her maternal cousin)...attorney to Handa Empire and the most efficient member in Geet's team..


She was trying to concentrate on the pile of papers / files in front...She had to complete everything till tomorrow.."My family still takes me as a child...Nani ko mere sath bhej rahe hai...Still dominate me but what about me...Why can't I take any decision of my own...and what about Aanya .?..Pa is ultimate decision maker for her life too...Whats my fault ...whats her fault...I want to c her fly ...she belongs to me..." She started to cry bitterly...


A sudden knock at door brought her back to senses...

" Who's there...?" she said aloud


" Aanya is here...humko andar aana hai...door kholo...jaldi..." A girlish voice answered her back ..still beating the door impatiently ...which brought a smile on her lips and She rushed to open the locked door...

Back in India

7 in the morning

KM


Maan was in a rush for early meeting.Runing downstairs...


" Chotey Saab breakfast is ready...Please aaea..." Nakul (head of housekeeping)...


" No Nakul I am in hurry..." He denied


" Maan without saying a single word...breakfast table per aa jaaea...nothing gonna turn upside down in this way...if you have your breakfast at proper time Aap Maan Singh Khuraana he rahegay.." Daddi scolded Maan for what he usually does...skipping meals almost ...for the sake of his work schedule..


" Daddi Maa please don pull my leg...lets go " He encirlecd arm around Daddi's shoulder and took her to breakfast table...


Just to spend some quality time with him Savitri Devi got up so early and was waiting on breakfast table...


Servant Deepak served Maan's favorite Pasta to him and Daddi Maa as usual sipping her tea.


" Maan betay Addi (Maan's PA) told me every thing..." She started the convo


" like...?" he tried to introspect what she knew...


" Like...like...? You are questioning me Maan...I know KC has filled a bid for the same prime site at Noida ...which has turned to be a matter of repute for top business houses...for their resorts... shopping complexes/malls...sports complexes...multiplexes...They want to get that at any cost...and you are one among them..but ur purpose to get that land is else..." She put her heart out at last


" If you know why u are asking me...I am damn sure I will get that and the cost it doesn't matter...Uske baad waha Charitable school ...hospital ..sports complex sab banega..." He steamed up ..


" Its really strange son..Kaisi zid hai yeh...Charitable trust k liye log remote places prefer karte hai ..where facilitates are out of the reach of common people and you selected the prime location ...I m not against ur venture but business ko alag rakho beta...Use this location to fulfill ur father's dream ...and run charitable society where it is needed more.." She almost begged but he was not ready to take her point...


" Daddi Maa..KC is whole Dad's dream and I am following it...But this is my dream for her...Diya k liye mujhe yeh karna hai...she ll be very happy..." Maan dug in his heels ..refused every bit of advice what she gave.



" Diya diya diya...who herself is an illusion...Whose whole identity is a big question mark even for you !... Jisne hamare haste gaate bache ko ek robot bana diya !!..." In her emotional outburst ...she started to scream and fell on floor...


" Daddi Maa..." Maan ran toward her " Nakul call the doc..."

Nakul dialed the doctor in hurry and Maan carried Daddi in his lap to her room..


To be continued...


Chapter 1 Page 6 Chapter 3 Page 19

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Sonia


PMs for just regular readers...After observing 2-3 updates will make a pm list..if some one needs or not



Note: Tense liberties always here..according to rules of contemporary writing

Edited by Sonia.KN - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74
nice update. Is Geet maan's Diya and who is Aanya? waiting to know more.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wowww awesome banner ...i loveee ittt ❤️
Love it graphics
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sonia 🤗...thank u for the awesome update and pm ...so finally Geet's family is letting her go ...with lot of restrictions...still wondering who Aanya is...Maan is bidding a prime location for charity work...again who is Diya?...what does Dadi mean illusion?...hoping she is ok...already waiting for the next update 😊
Thank you graphics
Edited by --Ratna-- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77
nice
update
so geet is angree bird not want to take nani with her
question again diya??
anya is kid ishe geet kid
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78
Nice part😊
Finally geet going with nani...who is aanya...waiting to know
Diya is an illusion😕
Eagerly waiting for the next update

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Posted: 11 years ago
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awsme update bt again who ir dia? Is geet maan's dia?and another who is anya? Geet is really stubborn to listen anyone..waiting for next
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Posted: 11 years ago
#80
Questions. ... questions. .. and questions!
So the stage is set for there meeting😃
Hope dadi is alright!

Waiting for the next!

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