Retake of temple scene, an analysis or a FF? Maybe both!

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Syama Akshara Luna

@Syama_Luna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Loved your version so much more Treasure 👏

Your dialogues expresses their emotions better

I like how you explained the fistful sindoor...

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Treasure

@Treasures

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: Syama_Luna
Loved your version so much more Treasure 👏
Your dialogues expresses their emotions better

I like how you explained the fistful sindoor...

Thank you!

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Minnie

@Illuminatus.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

You have to keep writing.. u can not stop.

I am craving for your POVs.. your form of writing is closest to my heart.. go back 2 watching EMA(or not).. and bring out the best version for us... plz do.

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ashwinikailash

@ashwinikailash

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Thankyou dear ,have lived the entire episode while reading ...just mesmerized with all that was happening ...

Raghna forever

Ashwini

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Treasure

@Treasures

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: spontaneousmini
You have to keep writing.. u can not stop.
I am craving for your POVs.. your form of writing is closest to my heart.. go back 2 watching EMA(or not).. and bring out the best version for us... plz do.

That is so sweet of you! I love to write, am a romantic at heart! But when the story gets messy, I drop it before it makes me upset! 😆 If the story ever becomes good and Ragna are back to their glory, I will start writing again!

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Treasure

@Treasures

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: aarushc
Thankyou dear ,have lived the entire episode while reading ...just mesmerized with all that was happening ...
Raghna forever

Ashwini

So sweet! I just wish the crap was done better!

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Shona_Mayur

@Shona_Mayur

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

I haven't really watched the episode and don't ever intend on watching it either! But I did read your mini-scenario. It was nice! I liked the detail and the thought-process that you showed them going through and I could honestly visualize it in my head. Though, here Kalpi may have accepted him but I wouldn't ever forgive him for doing that to Kalpi. The scene was beautifully portrayed by you but the fact that Raghav told her to wait for a year while he goes off doing whatever just doesn't sit well with me. Makes Kalpi seem - I don't know - like a commodity? I just can't seem to digest that about him =(

Sorry for taking time and commenting but I barely come on I-F and trying to slowly message everyone back when I can!