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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: anj_taarey

Woww...nycc updt...Taanis dress ws vry nyc..

Tigresss...😆..rey calls hr tigress...too cute...

Whos dis natasha...i hope shez nt a negtv chrctr as i wud hate hr to cum in between taarey...

Beautiful Start...Waitng fr d nxt updtt...😊😊


Thanks dear
Yup she is his tigress
Natasha is -ive character as per CS
N yeah b ready to prepare for her to create troubles for tr
Will update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: princess1926

Awesome start... Both Rey and Taani's POV are nice... Beautifully written... Rey is an angry young man.. N Taani in police station...:( hate that Natasha... Update asap n pm me


Thank you dear
Yup who wouldnt hate natasha
Will update soon :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: priya1999

one more taarey awwwsome story.nice prologue .hmmm rey angry young man and taani in police station😒.aaahhh isme bhi villain .mere taarey ko koi akela kyu ni chodta😡anyways do continue soon.


Thanks a lot
Well villain k bina story mein maza nahi ata 😛
Will continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Visk_Taarey

Amazing update
Dress selection was good
Continue soon


Thanku
Will do soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Nikki_TaaRey

Omg ! This is awesome ...
The prologue is like so scary !
But still I love it !
No words to express .. so I'd end here ! :P
Update sooner than ever !! Please ?


Thank you dear
Its scary? 😲
Abhi toh kuch kiya b nahi hai maine 😛
Will try to update "sooner" 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
Am late as always! 😆
First of all I could visualise the entire scene, so beautifully written.. I love ua writing style!

So now coming to the update!!!!
Taani's POV! 😃
Amazing..! I love her! ❤️
She kinda reminding me of myself! 😳 Except for the fact that I don't top in exams forget being state topper 🤣
The way she was hoping to see Rey and the way she got upset in knowing he broke the only promise he gave!!!! And the way she wants to not think of him and so agrees to go to Goa! But she can't forget him...😭 poor baby! 😭 But she don't want to spoil her friends eve so she wipes away her troubles!!! Awe I love her!!! 😎
Though more need to come about her friends to exactly figure out their character.. so far i liked them all! Flirty Rohit.. am sure taani gets irritated by his flirting but as a friend she likes him and enjoys his company! Rohit beware of possessive Rey! 😈
While reading I was literally putting myself in their place and was imagining how would it be like getting caught by Police that too in raid! Taani's fears very well explained! 👏 and the sort of mixed emotions she gets in seeing Rey! The happiness in seeing him as a saviour from her trouble and at the same time the fear in her about his anger, on how he will be going to react to her!!! Uff.. poor gal!!!

So now coming to Rey!
First of all ua lead heros are irresistible 😎 Simply fell in love right from his dressing to his attitude!!! 😉
Aman n Natasha, two people he is close with! Well Aman seems to be like a gentleman n a good friend! 😃
Natasha am sure she purposefully made him stay back from going to taani! 😈 And I belive Aman knows about Natasha n thus they both cant stand each other! Or is it like Natasha doesn't even like Aman to be near Rey! 😈 Am so eager to know her POV! 😉
So back to Rey! He and his possessiveness! 😉 A little control of its is good for people around esp Rohit! 😆
How helpless he must have felt for not meeting taani as promised!
And when he saw her.. uff she was with Rohit.. 5 years of being away and then when saw..she with some unknown guy! Even a person who is not possessive will be possessive so Rey! Can't blame him! 😉
I loved the way how he followed her! He is very protective of her! ⭐️
And his anger in knowing Taani too got caught by the police! Uff! I love this Angry young business tycoon ❤️ I could visually imagine the scene between Rey n Aman when Aman tells about the raid!!!
Now seeing taani! he knows its not her fault yet he can't help but be angry... Am sure Taani very well knows what coming ahead as he took steps towards her! 😳
Since you stopped right there, my thoughts are going wild thinking of what is going to happen next! 😉 😉 😉
Awesome update!
loved it!
Will comment on AOMA 2 also 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ..dreamygatz..

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#666666">Am late as always!😆</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#666666">First of all I could visualise the entire scene, so beautifully written.. I love ua writing style!</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#666666">So now coming to the update!!!!</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#666666">Taani's POV!😃</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#666666">Amazing..! I love her!❤️</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#666666">She kinda reminding me of myself!😳Except for the fact that I don't top in exams forget being state topper🤣</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#666666">The way she was hoping to see Rey and the way she got upset in knowing he broke the only promise he gave!!!! And the way she wants to not think of him and so agrees to go to Goa! But she can't forget him...😭poor baby!😭But she don't want to spoil her friends eve so she wipes away her troubles!!! Awe I love her!!!😎</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#666666">Though more need to come about her friends to exactly figure out their character.. so far i liked them all! Flirty Rohit.. am sure taani gets irritated by his flirting but as a friend she likes him and enjoys his company! Rohit beware of possessive Rey!😈</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#666666">While reading I was literally putting myself in their place and was imagining how would it be like getting caught by Police that too in raid!Taani's fears very well explained!👏and the sort of mixed emotions she gets in seeing Rey! The happiness in seeing him as a saviour from her trouble and at the same time the fear in her about his anger, on how he will be going to react to her!!! Uff.. poor gal!!!</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#666666">So now coming to Rey!</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#666666">First of all ua lead heros are irresistible 😎 Simply fell in love right from his dressing to his attitude!!!😉</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#666666">Aman n Natasha, two people he is close with! Well Aman seems to be like a gentleman n a good friend!😃</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#666666">Natasha am sure she purposefully made him stay back from going to taani!😈And I belive Aman knows about Natasha n thus they both cant stand each other! Or is it like Natasha doesn't even like Aman to be near Rey! 😈Am so eager to know her POV!😉</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#666666">So back to Rey! He and his possessiveness! 😉A little control of its is good for people around esp Rohit!😆</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#666666">How helpless he must have felt for not meeting taani as promised!</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#666666">And when he saw her.. uff she was with Rohit.. 5 years of being away and then when saw..she with some unknown guy! Even a person who is not possessive will be possessive so Rey! Can't blame him!😉</font>
I loved the way how he followed her! He is very protective of her!⭐️
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#666666">And his anger in knowing Taani too got caught by the police! Uff! I love this Angry young business tycoon ❤️ I could visually imagine the scene between Rey n Aman when Aman tells about the raid!!!</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#666666">Now seeing taani! he knows its not her fault yet he can't help but be angry... Am sure Taani very well knows what coming ahead as he took steps towards her!😳</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#666666">Since you stopped right there, my thoughts are going wild thinking of what is going to happen next!😉😉😉</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#666666">Awesome update!</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#666666">loved it!</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#666666">Will comment on AOMA 2 also😳</font>


Yup late as always 😆
Thank you so much dear
Hehhehehehhe lol u r funny 🤣 or should i say not a topper like taani 😆
Yup she is caring :) n had to go goa for her friends
Lol will reveal more about her friends soon
Hehhehe yeah beware of possessive rey ;)
Yup poor girl had to face anger of rey
Lol i love the dressing too <3
Lets see y aman doesnt like her
Yup meeting after 5 yrs n that too wd another guy what a moment :P
Lol who would love angry young business tycoon
Yeah keep ur thoughts going
Until i update :P
Thanks once again
Will b waiting for aoma comment ;)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ahaaa
U update
Wow I am quite speechless ohk tht girl
She is b**** I hope she doesn't do anything
To TaaRey finger cross ohk rey jealous of rohit
I quite luv tht rey angry plus rani too oops but I
Luv hoe thr remove the angry on each other by
Kissing each other wah thr kisses was sexy I luv it
But wait taani is taking it in freaking wrong way she
Said too much I am with rey this time common he was
Jealous 1st but later it was his luv for her I hope taani
Realise her mistake coz she did a big mistake thanks for PM
And plzzz u update soon spl this story it's request update soon plzz
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