ZaYa SS : Hospital Romance![Completed] - Page 13

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Posted: 11 years ago
Mindblowing SS Sumaiya Di!Thanks fr pm!Waiting fr next!Pls continue soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
awww so cute Sumaiya 🤗
Tnx 4 pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
No need to say how much I like it sumi...u knw it ..bt still saying it for formality its amazing...u penned down each n every scene so beautifully that I got lost in it...love u sumi 🤗n thank u for writing ths infamous paak saaf scene which is actually very much famous nw.😆
Love how zain make aliya eat medicine ...so cute wish I get the hubby lk him😆
N sorry for late reply I didn't check my pm's...n frm last two days so much prblskabhi yeh kabhi who I'm tired.
Anyways keep writing as ur SS n drabbles r our only sahara these days...as in episodes thy shw nothing.🤢
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Posted: 11 years ago
Aww Zain is such a sweetheart 😳
loved the update as always dear
beautifully written 👏
waiting for the next part
thanks for the PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow! Brilliant update, Sumaiya ⭐️ i esp loved that snake and ladder wala part 😉😃

Ahh, this was the second last part? Excited for next part 😊 and yeah i wont be sad when this SS ends because you write new things each day. 😛 Isliye we will get to read otger stories from you na when this ends 😛😃
Edited by -ZaYalicious- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Zain is so cute ❤️ He is being a perfect husband. Awesome update !!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey peeps!!
Late again?? Sorry!! I was busy voting For Harshika and spamming colors 😆
So yeah cumng back to m SS...
I luv u guys soo much*hugs everybody*
I dont quote and reply everybody because the thread luks messy... But trust me i read each n every cummnt n it just makes me feel lyk the queen of the world 😆 😳
Thanku all for itna saara Appreciation.. This is the last part to My SS.. Hope u all lyk it..
Hopefully soon.. I'll start with my Romance Series..
Till thn keep calm n vote For Harshika 😃

Morning


Zain : Aaliya.. Kahaan ho?? Kidhar chale gayyi.. Tum andar ho kya??*worried.. Gets up from the bed,goes to the washroom n asks*
Aaliya : haan...*opens the door .. She was drying her hair*
Zain : batakar nahi jaasakti??*picks her up in his arms n carries her to their bed*
Aaliya : zain.. Kya kar rahe ho??ab washroom jaane se pehle bhi tumhari permission leni padegi??*protests*
Zain : haan .. Pata hai kitna darr gaya tha mei..*makes her sit on the bed.. Takes the towel from her hand n dries her hair*
Aaliya : Zain abdullah.. Ab mei theek hogayyyi hoon... Aur yeh do mei karlungi*takes the towel from his hand*
Zain : Main Kar rahaan hoon*snatches the towel n dries her hair*
Aaliya : zain abdullah.. Itni khidmat karoge meri toh aadaat bugad jaayegi. ..*smiles*
Zain : jaise ki maine pehle kahaan MEZ.. In saari kidhmatoun ka chun chun ke badla lunga*smirks*
Aaliya : acha??kaisa badla*gets up n luks at him*
Zain : batado??*takes the towel ..wraps it arnd her waist n fulls her flush against his him*
Aaliya : zain...
Zain : mere armaano par paani pherdiya tumne*burries his face in her hair*
Aaliya : aarmaano par pani??matlab??*confused*
Zain : matlab yeh ki tumne mere saath nahaane ka sunehra mauka gawadiyaa*kisses her neck*
Aaliya : Allah tauba ..Allah Tauba...*pushes him away*
Zain : Arre.. Ismei Allah tauba Allah tauba ki kya baat hai??shauhar hoon tumhara*pulls her back*
Aaliya : bade hi besharam hogayye tum*hits his shoulder*
Zain : aur ab toh tum khudse apne kapde bhi pehnleti hoo..meri shirt bhi nahi pehnti*pouts*
Aaliya : awww mere pyaare shauhar.. Tumhari shirt sirf tumhare liye raat ko pehnungi*winks*
Zain : acha??*takes her n falls on the bed*
Aaliya : zain..tum yeh *knock knock*
Zain : lagta hai sab log agayye*gets up*
Aaliya : huh??sab aane waale the aaj??tumne bata kyun nahi ki sab aaj aane waale hai*gets up*
Zain : bhool gaya.. *goes n opens the door*
Asalam wa alaikum bhai..*hugs*
Aaliya : asalam wa alaikum fahad bhai..
Fahad : walikum salaam aaliya.. Kaisi tabyat hai ab tumhari??*comes in inside*
Aaliya : ab theek hai fahad bbhai.. Aapke bhai ne bahut ache se dhekbhaal ki meri*luks at zain lovingly*
Fahad : haan haan .. Sab pata hai mujhe.. Waise mei yeh bataane aaya tha ke brkfast ready hai.. Tum dono aajao ...
Aaliya : jee fahad bhai*fahad leaves*
Kya kar rahe ho zain*he pulls her towards him*
zain : pehle meri gudmrng kiss do uske baad jao*closes his eyes n waits for her kiss*
Has kyun rahi ho??*opens his eyes.. Irritated*
Aaliya : shakal dekho apni*laughs*
Zain : MEZ .. *pulls her close n kisses her passionately...*
Hogayyi meri gudmrng*luks at her intently..aaliya blushes*
Aaliya : chale??
Zain : chalo..*holds her hand*

DINING TABLE


ZaYa : Asalaam wa alaikum*come n sit side by side*
Everybody : walikum salaam
Usman : kaisi tabyat hai bete ab aapki??
Aaliya : ab mei theek hoon mamu.. Fikr ki koi baat nahi hai..*suraiyya passes the paratha plate to aaliya*
Usman : haan.. Zain ne khoob dekhbhaal ki hogi*zain takes the plate from suraiyya n serves aaliya.. Everybody stares at him..*
Zain bete office kaisa chal rahaan hai??*zain is busy serving aaliya.. He's making peices for her.. N is not listening to mamu*
Fahad : rehne dijiye dad.. Yeh sabah toh apni biwi ko khilaabe mei itne masroof hochuke hai ki inhe aas paas waalo ka koi khayal nahi*all of them burst out laughing.. Zain realises what happened n aaliya blushes*
Zain : nahi dad .. Bhai aisa kuch nahi hai*embarassed*
Fahad : rehne do zain.. Humne sab pata hai..*all of them laugh... Zain keeps feeding aaliya.. Aaliya glares at him n tells him to stop but he dosent.. Mamu n fahad bhai luk at them proudly*
Usman : allah tumdono ki mohabbat ko issi tarah kayam rakhe
Fahad : Ameen*winks at zain.. ZaYa embarassed*
Usman : chalo fahad.. Office chalte hai... Miya zain.. Aap apni biwi le saath rahe*gets up*
Zain : nahi dad mei bhi chalta hoon*tells half heartedly*
Usman : nahi miya.. Aaliya ki tabyat puri theek hojaane ke baad join karlena .. Waise bhi tumhara dil dimaag sab yaheen rahega..*laughs.. Zain embarassed... They leave for office n all the chudails go into their respective rooms*
Aaliya : zain .. Tum bhi nuhh..
Zain : main bhi nuh what??*picks her up in his arms*
Aaliya : zain .. Kya kar rahe ho koi dekh lega??*protests*
Zain : jab tak tum puri tarah theek nahi hojaati mei tumhara coolie bana rahunga aur tum mera saaman*smiles..aaliya blushes.. He carries her to their bedroom.. They sleep the entire afternoon..n get up for dinner..they have dinner with their family n come back to sleep again*


NIGHT - ZaYa Room


Zain : mujhe bore horahaan hai.. Movie dekhte hai??
Aaliya : theek hai.. Mei change karke aati hoon*takes her clothes n goes to change in the washroom*
Allah .. Yeh toh zain ki shirt hai.. *remembers what she said to him in the morning n wears his shirt instead of her clothes n comes out*
Zain : MEZ.. Kaunsi mov*stares at her.. She comes out in a see through white shirt .. With the 2 buttons open .. The shirt covers only her mid thighs...aaliya blushes n comes forward*
Aaliya : apna mooh band karo.. Machar chala jaayega*closes his mouth n starts laughing*
Zain : aaliya zain abdullah.. Iraade nekh nahi nazaar aarahe hai*pulls her close*
Aaliya : mere iraade bilkul nek hai..chalo movie dekhte hai*pushes him n gets into their bed..zain moves n sits beside her.. They r half lying.. Aaliya's head on his chest n his arm tightly wrapped arnd her shoulder with their blanket on*
Hum kaunsi movie dekh rahe hai??
Zain : Humpty Sharma Ki dulhannia*grins*
Aaliya : kyun??
Zain : kyun??kyunki usmei aalia bhatt hai*grins*
Aaliya : aalia bhatt ka bhukaar ab tak nahi utra tumhara??*gets up*
Zain : naheen..*pulls her back*
Aaliya : tum aalia bhatt ko dekhna mei handsome varun dhawan ko dekhungi*smirks*
Zain : "handsome varun dhawan"??ohh allah ki bandi.. Apne shauhar ke elava kisi aur mard ke baare sochna gunaah hai gunaah..
Aaliya : acha?? Tum karo toh chamatkaar aur mei karun toh baladkaar*angry*
Zain : acha jaanedo.. Movie dekhte hai*pulls her back*
Aaliya : zain abdullah.. I'm warning u.. Agar movie ke beech mei maine tumhe aalia bhatt ki ghoorte huwe pakda toh i swear ek hafte tak no kiss
Zain : what??*shocked*
Alaiya : haan*smiles victoriously*
Zain : acha toh theek hai.. Agar maine tumhr varun dhawan ko ghoorte huwe pakda toh pure ek hafte tak mei jab jab jahaan jahaan kiss karne ko kahunga tumhe karna padega*smirks*
Aaliya : kya??*shocked*
Zain : yeah baby.. What goes arnd comes arnd*smirks n pulls her back.. They eat popcorn n watch the movie happily..zain starts dancing to saturday saturday*
Has kyun rahi ho??*aaliya bursts out laughing*
Aaliya : kyunki tum bahut cute hai..*pulls him back into their bed*
zain : movie achi hai nuh??
Aaliya : hmm.. Haan ach*stops as some intimate scenes come onscreen.. Aaliya feels uncomfortable .. Zain takes advantage n flips over her so that she is beneath him*
Aaliya : zain...
Zain : sssh..*puts finger on her lips...*
Chup.. Bilkul chup..*kisses her neck.. While his hand traces the buttons of her shirt*
Aaliya : zain plzzz..*zain dosent listen n keeps kissing her face n neck... Suddenly aaliya pushes him n is on top of him*
Movie dekhna hai dekho.. Warna sojao*smirks*
Zain : what?? Tumhe yeh tym pe movie ki padi hai??*suprised n irriated*
Aaliya : yes .. *moves n sits beside him.. Zain pulls her into his arms n they start watching the movie again*
Zain : kitni hott lag rahi hai yeh*drools*
Aaliya : zain abdullah...*angry... Gets up n sits on him.. *
Kahaan tha nuh maine mat ghoorna usse*angry*
Zain : main kahaan ghoor rahaan hoon usse*innocently*
Aaliya : zain .. Jhooth mat bolo..
Zain : ab yakeen hogaya mujhe ki tum puri tarah se theek hochuki ho..
Aaliya : zain abdullah.. Topic mat badlo..*angry*
Zain : ab tumhe jalan ho rahi hain to mei kya karun..*smirks*
Aaliya : jalan??mujhe kyun hogi jalan*angry*
Zain : kyunki tum aalia bhatt jitni hot nahi ho isliye*smirks*
Aaliya : zain abdullah.. Tumhe abhi batati hoon ki mei kitni hot hoon*starts unbottoning her shirt .. N removes it.. Thn moves forward n removes his t -shirt n starts kissing his neck and chest*
Zain : aaliya zain abdullah...*flips over so that she is beneath him .. N kisses her everywhere.. Aaliya moans..*
Tum is duniya ki sabse hot ladki ho..
Aaliya : toh phir jab waise kyun kahaan??
Zain : tumhe bhooki sherni bananeke liye*laughs*
Aaliya : zain abdullah..*pulls him n kisses him passionately*
Zain : ek baar hospital mei admit huwi toh yeh haal huwa hai.. Ab doosri baar hogi toh kya hoga??*smirks*
Aaliya : doosri baar?? Tum phirse mera accident karvaana chahte ho*shocked*
Zain : accident nahi stupid.. Hospital ko kya sirf accident huwa toh jaate hai kya??pregamcy mei nahi jaate??*smirks..aaliya blushes*
Zain : Mujhe us tym without interference Full On Hospital Romance chahiye*with that he kisses her passionately and both of them sleep together peacefully in each others arm*

THE END


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Posted: 11 years ago
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HAHAHAA! Awesome update, Sumaiya ⭐️
That baladkaar line was amazing! and that breakfast was was brilliant 😛
Edited by -ZaYalicious- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Sumi u r really the queen of the world love u🤗

I really need ths after that heartbreaking news...today morning I was thinking ki kash sumi update kar de n u did it my guttery sis aur who bhi guttery update...dil khush kar diya tune so 🤗🤗nw I'm feeling better...as my guttery dose is done for today😆
Plzz start ur next romantic guttery series soon..
N ya I love ths dialogue of aliya
Aaliya : acha?? Tum karo toh chamatkaar aur mei karun toh baladkaar😆
Edited by Aneesha. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
wat an lovely update
very beautifull written
keep writting
Edited by -harshikazaya- - 11 years ago

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