ZaYa SS : Hospital Romance![Completed]

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey peeps!!
Since the cvs have decided to make rehan save aaliya n not hurt aaliya .. i've decided to hurt aaliya in my SS 😆
I always wanted zain to go crazy n take care of his MkB
Par dil ke armaa aasounmo mei beh gayye 🤢
Maine already ek wishlist banadi thi abt what i want during the hospital track.. Jo ki ab nahi hone waala!!
So basically this SS will be abt that only..
It's abt Zain's pain and his love n care towards aaliya!!
Hope u guyz lyk it.. 😃

Ps: All my guttery minded ppl.. This one wont be as guttery as the previous ones 😆
Check the next post for index!


HOSPITAL
Zain : Fahad Bhai.. kya huwa aaliya ko??*worried n has tears in his eyes*
Fahad : zain woh aaliya kitchen mei thi aur achanak se cylinder burst hogaya.. Hum usse turant hospital le aaye*tensed*
Zain: cylinder burst hogaya? Wht do u mean bhai?? Aise kaise hosakta hai?? Aaliya kahaan hai bhai??
Fahad : woh us waale room me hai*points towards a room in front ..zain runs n goes n sees her through the window*
Zain sambhalo apne aapko*zain has tears in his eyes after seeing aaliya lying lifeless on the hospital bed with soo many machines arnd her.. She was given oxygen therapy n had a drip attached to her hand.. Her entire body covered under a sheet.. She luked lifeless*
Zain : Bhai yeh sab kaise??*his eyes r red with tears*
Fahad : Pata Nahi zain.. Yeh sab kaise
Suraiiya : sabr rakho zain.. Aaliya ko kuch nahi hoga...*doctor cumes*
Zain : doctor woh kaisi hai??
Doctor : abhi kehna bahut mushkil hai Mr. Abdullah.. Unhe kaafi chot aayi hai.. She has burns on her back n upper arm.. Unko breathing problem bhi hi rahi hai.. She's very weak*
Zain : Matlab kya hai aapka doctor?? I swear agar usse kuch hogaya toh aap logo ko chodunga nahi*holds his collar n us angry*
Doctor : we're trying our best Sir.. Aapko sabr rakhna hoga aur Allah pe yakeen rakhna hoga.. Hum unke operation ki preparation kar rahe hai.. Abhi 15 mins mei hum unka operation start kardenge.. Yeh aapko yahaan sign karna hoga*gives papers*
Zain : yeh kya hai?
Doctor : Yeh woh paper hai jisme aap agree karte hai ki pateint ko jo bhi hoga uske liye hospital responsible nahi hoga
Zain : but
Fahad : zain sign karo.. Zyaada der mat karo plzz*zain nods n takes the pen.. His hand shivers n he remembers all his moments with aaliya n has tears in his eyes.. Finally after great difficulty he signs the papers*
Zain : Bhai usse kuch nahi hoga nuh??*crying*
Fahad : hausla rakho zain.. Allah se dua maango ..*aaliya is being taken on the stretcher to the operation theater.. Zain goes n hold her hand and keeps walking along with the stretcher*
Zain : kuch nahi hoga tumhe MEZ ... Mein kuch nahi jone dunga tumhe.. Itni aasaani se peecha nahi chudaasakti tum mujhse... Tumne vaada kiya tha nuh ki tum mujhe khabhi chodkar nahi jaogi.. Plzzz aaliya aankhein kholo.. Main nahi jee sakta tumhare bina *crying*
Doctor : sir hatiye plzz .. -aap andar nahi aaskate.. Plz wait outside*the operation starts.. Zain keeps walking to n fro n is tensed.. He remembers the moment whn aaliya had helped with praying for his dad .. Tears keep rolling down his eyes as he remembers all the moments spent with her... He remembers that moment whn aaliya git scared bcoz of his accident .. He walks away*
Zain : Ya allah .. Aaliya toh tumhari bandi hai.. Kitna maanti hai tumhe.. Mujhe dua padhni sikhaayi..din ka raasta bataya toh phir yeh uske saath kyun??
Main nahi jee sakta uske bina*has tears in his eyes .. Removes the cap from his pocket which they had bought from MOhammad Ali road .. N starts reading Namaz.. .. He kneels down n prays to Allah to save his MKB..
Allah meri unr usko dedo par plzz usse bacha lo.. Main marjaunga uske bina..woh meri zindagi hai.. Meri pakeezgi,meri ibadat meri humkadam meri mohabbat mera pehla pyaar aur Meri Humsafar..plzz usko bacha le.. *cries miserably while praying*
Fahad : zain zain..*comes running*
Zain : Kya Huwa Bhai??*get up..tensed*
Fahad : woh operation hogaya hai...
Zain : operation hogaya?*runs outside*


To be continued
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res for index!

Part 1

Part 2

Part 3

Part 4

Part 5

Part 6
Edited by ZayaHarshika - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res ___________
Unres!
First comment 😆
Aaliya is injured! 🥳
I know that I'm quite evil and sadistic but I really wanted her to get hurt so that Zain get's to spend more time with her.. 😳
It's lovely..
You've written it beautifully..
My poor poor Zainu... 😭
I don't like seeing him with tears in his eyes.. 😕 (Or in this case imagining 😛)
Please update soon and PM me... 😳
Edited by Ammu1369 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res...!!
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unres...!!
I am second...😭
Awesome update👏 but I expected something guttery when I saw the title...😆
Becoz ur each and every update is a guttery one...😉 and poor zain...😭
I wish kaash aisa kch show mein bhi hota...😭 par it's okk after reading your first chapter achaa lag rha hai...😃 thanks for the pm...and update the next chapter soon...😊 and next chapter se gutter expect karte hue main yaahan se jaa rhi hun...😛
Edited by craziness05 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res..!! Did i just see the word guttery?😲to gutter queen m in right place...😃
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Unres...!!
Sumi..!! You have to add a bit guttery yaar..!!! 😭😭Me gutter queen..i want besharmi,get that? Kaise..vo tum jaano..!!😡 But thoda sa to gutter daalo!
And anywayyysss...
Awesome start thi..zain baby is crying..😭...but aliya to ko jaldi theek kar..!!
And then lots of zaya scenes daalna..zain as a caring person..!!😳
Mujhe ye hi o chahiye tha...!!
Will be waiting for next chapter..jaldi update karna...!!😃
Edited by ZayaShiz - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow that was so good..
Can't wait for the next part..
Update soon please..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It's simply beautiful n really amazing :) pls continue
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome👏
Continue soon
Do PM me😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ZayaShiz

Res..!! Did i just see the word guttery?😲to gutter queen m in right place...😃

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Unres...!!
Sumi..!! You have to add a bit guttery yaar..!!!😭😭Me gutter queen..i want besharmi,get that? Kaise..vo tum jaano..!!😡But thoda sa to gutter daalo!
And anywayyysss...
Awesome start thi..zain baby is crying..😭...but aliya to ko jaldi theek kar..!!
And then lots of zaya scenes daalna..zain as a caring person..!!😳
Mujhe ye hi o chahiye tha...!!
Will be waiting for next chapter..jaldi update karna...!!😃



Dayan.. Gutter ke bina meri kahani adhuri hai 😆
Maine kahaan "it wont be as guttery as the previous ones"
Iska yeh matlab thodi hai ke no gutter 😆
Chill babe.. Mei gutter ki dukaan hoon...BR]Miljaayega tujhe gutter waala update!
I'll updt soon!! 😃
Edited by ZayaHarshika - 11 years ago

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