Thank you for all ur comments..
Part 1 :
PAST :
Aahil and sanam were best friends from childhood. They played together , shared every single thing with each other. Every other ppl were jealous of them of their deep friendship btwn them. But something changed everything...
PRESENT :
Aahil - Sanam tumhari tabyat kaisi hai? ab teek hai na.??
Sanam - no answer.. was about to go was caught by aahil's powerful hands. Something happened to sanam..she felt as if her whole body had gained new power..she liked this connection with aahil but does not want to admit it!! stubborn girl..
Aahil - main tumse kuch pooch raha hoon sanam..jawab kyun nahi dete ho??
Sanam - agar mein tumhe jawab nahi deh rahi hoon..zhair si baat hai..i dont want to talk to u..
Aahil - magar kyun? mein jaanti hoon ki hum dono ki beech mein kuch badla hai..lekin tum mujhse baat toh kar sakti ti..
Sanam - nahi..kabhi bhi nahi..tumne mujhe bahut hurt kiya..which can never be healed..with this she started crying and ran out of the room...
How is it guys?? pl give me suggestions so that i can improvise it!!
Ps - next time..pakka a long chapter!
Edited by nila_music - 11 years ago