FF~AwaiTed PropoSal

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Here I m wid my first Zaya FF.. Please give ur feedbaks.. 😊


Characters : Zain Aaliya Rizwan - Zain's best friend Aayat - Aaliya's best friend Gauhar - Zain's girl friend

Aayat - Tu sach me jana chahti hai?? Dekh agr tu chahe to cancl v kar sakti hai..
Aaliya - Karna to mai v chahti hu par kya karu...mamu ko main a nehi keh sakti...
Aayat - okk par tu apna kheyal rakhna thik hai!! And mujhe msg krte rehna. I wl b always hre fr u
Aaliya - thnxx
Aaliya logged off.

Zain - issey achha hota agar mai tere sath chala jatah...
Rizwan - to mat ja nah.. waise bhi we wl mis u here!
Zain - tujhe kya lagta mai shok je jar aha hu is mamu ki bhanji k sath honeymoon banana!! Dad ka order hai. Bhej to wo mujhe kisi office k kam k lie rahe hai but yeh kamsirf ek bahana hai. Or to or is Aliya ko bhi bhej rahe hai mere sath.
Rizwan - to tu ek kam kyu nehi karte, Aliya ko bol ki who mamu ko ja kar bole ki who nhi jana chahti.
Zain - wohi to problem hai na.. yeh MKB apni mamu ko na nhi keh sakti.
Rizwan - yaar tereko aandaza bhi hai ki Gauhar jab Sydney se wapas ayegi to tera kya haal hoga!! Mujhe to abhi se hi tujhpe taras aa raha hai.
Zain - Chal ab jana hoga. Aliya bula rahi hai. Lagta hai kuch topic mil gayi hogi usse kitkit karne k lie.
Zain logged off.

Z -
kya bags pack ho gaye?
A - ha more or less. Tumhara kuch madad kar du?
Z- mere kapre chuna v maat
A- bhalai ka koi zamana hi nhi rahah.
Z - kuch kaha tumhe?
A - waise ek baat tumhe batah deti hu... yeh mast sochna ki mai shok se jaa rahi hu is so called honeymoon trip pe.
Z - oh really?? Mujhe to laga ki sayad tumhe mujhse pyar ho gaya h or mere bholepan ka faeda uthana chahti ho tum.
A - nehi or mai sirf mamu...
Z - mamu ko na nhi keh sakti isilie ja rahi ho.
A - haa. Or zyada khush maat hona. (leaves the room)
Z - (to himself) nehi mere dil pe to gubbare phut rahe hai kit um jaisi hot beautiful larki k sath mai apni honeymoon manane jar aha hu. Patah nhi kya sochti hai apnea p ko.. mujhe pagal kutte ne kata hai..


Hows it??? Shud I continue?!??

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Posted: 11 years ago
#2
nice concept.gauhar is zain gf kya?update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#3
Awsm concept
Love the cs
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#4
Its too good please continue..
Do pm me when you update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#5
such a lovely update
pls cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#6
Lovely concept
Continue soon
Pm me plz

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