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Originally posted by: arsha_simran

yes babes!!! It felt sooo good after reading this!!!

randhir's POV was clearly shown...

sad tha but felt happy!!!

and ohh I never watched the show much...

Thank you meri Simran! *hugs*
I am not a sadist so no need to be sad!

Oh Dear. You'll truly kill me with your writing. But before dying, I would like to comment. Let's start. The song, amazing choice. Describing Randhir's feeling for Sanyukta. The story match a lot. The ending paragraph was like some sort of future feelings of Randhir. The total calculation of your story only have 5 words. G-R-E-A-T. You're like a philosopher

Originally posted by: krisrock

**RES**

**UNRES**

I am sooo sorryyy Ipti!!! Same here! xP Sowwy To be late! xP
Actually I forgot that I hadn't commented on it :P :P Silly of me!😆

As you had asked me to write my heart out! So now I am going to write whatever there is in my heart, without bothering about grammatical mistakes and language!

First of all, Congo, as it is your first individual OS!!! Indeed you have made it memorable! Thenks Babes! Memorable? All my Randhir Works are the most memorable ones for me! My siggy says the same! xD

Ipti, I must say, with every piece of your work, you are stealing each and every part of my heart! Kya likhti ho tum! Itna conphusing Likhte hai hum!?? Police shall arrest me if i steal your heart! xP

And yeah, I wanna scold you even😡, why the hell you always says that your works are crazy and it tortures us!!! Your works are not crazy, instead they make us Crazy, and definitely this piece of work gave our heart a complete soothe! 😳 Awie! Thenks You SO much!

You had played very well with words! Har line mein emtions jhalak rahe the! I JUST SALUTE YOU!!! Well I guess That's a minus point na? I mean It's like emotional Attyachaar? *Salutes Back for Sanju's incredible Support*

Randhir accepts that Sanyukta is a weed in his life but still he can't deny that she completes his life!Everything which belongs to Sanyukta starting from her passion to her tears, all are his! So sweet of him! The UNKNOWN emotion which you describe Ipti was beyond words, beyond love! How Many Thenkews Do I write?

The way you gave words to Randhir's emotions was actually commendable! I mean, kya koi OS iss se better ho sakta hai, NEVER, kyunki yeh OS best Hai! A biggg round of applause for you!👏👏 Best?! Oh em jee! *Faints*

The last para was soul-touching! The whole OS was spectacular! I mean, how you actually manage to write so good! I wanna give u a biggg hug!😳 *Hugs Back*
Lots of Muaaahhh :-* to you!!!!!!!!!! See, you know I love you a lottt☺️, but from now on I have started to Respect you a lottt as a writer! 👍🏼 Respect? Writer? These two were for me? I need to rush to the hospital! xD Fainting Has become A routine now! xP

Its actually the first time when I am feeling so content after typing a COMMENT!

I actually didn't bother about my language, but I just wrote whatever I felt! I just hope that I was able to convey my feeling to you!!!😊 I told Ya! It feels Alluring when You Write DIL se! xD Yes you conveyed my Sugary PULP!

Love

(YOUR) Sanju😳😳

Lou you MORE!

Originally posted by: krisrock

Hey I just saw that you didn't replied to me,😔 tum yeh toh nahi soch rahi ki mein ne ab tak UNRES nahi kiya, then you are mistaken my duhling, I had already UNRES at page 7!!! Reply soon!!!

Love

Sanju😳

I did see your comment long back and planned to comment but Forgot! Maaf kar do is bhulakkar ko! xP

Originally posted by: yatup

Oh Dear. You'll truly kill me with your writing. But before dying, I would like to comment. Let's start. The song, amazing choice. Describing Randhir's feeling for Sanyukta. The story match a lot. The ending paragraph was like some sort of future feelings of Randhir. The total calculation of your story only have 5 words. G-R-E-A-T. You're like a philosopher

Thenkew SO much Nako! Philosopher and Me are pretty Unlike, though I loved Being called that! xD

it's a beautiful os

Originally posted by: sandhir.candy

it's a beautiful os

all the emotions are penned down beautifully

Thanks a ton...for reading,reviewing! xD