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Posted: 9 years ago
@ Rhea😊
Thnx for reading and commenting on 254-255

Now I know which collage you were talking about...I made it like back more than 2 years ago when we celebrated the 100th episode.My special episode.
My fav too as it has all of their moments...till now..how far they have come .

sad yes because she has to make Jalaibis...I was missing that sonce Epi 201...Chot ..unhon ney aisa kyuon kaha keh humari wajha se...She couldn't bear that one accusation from him...do you think she could bear the hate in his eyes or Be rukhi...nop ...aap aise chale janyegey to hum sana hi nahi...yes she found that reason of what he told that day...She will do whatever to clear that and that is what she is doing since then...ek mauqa...
She wants to give him and herself too...dhaga bandh liya hai to...and thnx for liking the edits😊



Faiqa di very poignant description of how Khushi finally had accepted her love for Arnavji and is ready to accept him as is. He too has come a long way. And we have all been witness to their magical journey so far. very sad yet soothing take from you. I love the collage β­οΈ
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Episodes 247 - 248  


Takraar 




 

Rooh se nikalti hai aah, ye takraar dekhkar

Tadapte dilon ki dastaan se donon hai bekhabar

 

Khulasa hogaya hai ek gehri baat ka

Talash thi, ek muddat se, jis vajah ka

Kyun rachayi thi byaah dhamki dekar

Baandhli thi zabardasti bewafa jaankar

 

Khamosh hogayi zubaan, safaai na kuch diya

Yun chubh gaye ilzaam, jaise khanjar se cheer diya

Itni gir chuki nazaron mein unke, tooti ye jaankar

Jab kahi asli baat, toh suna jhooth samajhkar

 

Nafrat itni thi badh chuki uss kali raat se

Chap gayi wo tasveer jab thi wo uski baahon mein

Galti samjha uss maasoom se chehre ko chaahkar

Uski har baat ko taal diya ek kahani bataakar

 

Takraar ke mahaul mein donon bhool gaye wo pal

Jab jaana ke saath dhadakte hain unke do dil

Ek ne chaha, jo suna jo dekha sab jhooth hojaye

Dooje ne chaha, uski baaton par unko yakeen hojaye 

 

Magar aur gehri ho gayi nafrat ki deewar

Mahaul hua sangeen, badhta gaya takraar

 

Translation:

 

From the soul comes out a sigh on viewing this fight

Both are unknown to the tale of the distressed hearts

 

Revelation of a deep matter has taken place  

The reason for which a search was on since a long time 

Why he had threatened and married

Had tied forcibly thinking she was a fraudster  

 

She went silent, did not say anything in defence

The accusations hurt so much, as if ripped off with a dagger  

Broken down she was, when she realized how much she fell in his eyes  

When she told the truth, he heard it as a lie  

 

So much hatred had grown in him since that black night  

The sight of her in his arms got printed on his mind

He thought it was a mistake loving this innocent like face  

He put off her every word saying that it was just a story 

 

In this air of dipute they forgot those moments  

When they realized that their hearts beat together  

One felt, that whatever he had heard and seen would all become a lie 

Another felt, that he would believe whatever she told him

 

But the wall of hate grew deeper

The mood became tense, the clash kept growing  


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Episodes 247 - 248  


Takraar 



Rooh se nikalti hai aah, ye takraar dekhkar

Tadapte dilon ki dastaan se donon hai bekhabar

 

Khulasa hogaya hai ek gehri baat ka

Talash thi, ek muddat se, jis vajah ka

Kyun rachayi thi byaah dhamki dekar

Baandhli thi zabardasti bewafa jaankar

 

Khamosh hogayi zubaan, safaai na kuch diya

Yun chubh gaye ilzaam, jaise khanjar se cheer diya

Itni gir chuki nazaron mein unke, tooti ye jaankar

Jab kahi asli baat, toh suna jhooth samajhkar

 

Nafrat itni thi badh chuki uss kali raat se

Chap gayi wo tasveer jab thi wo uski baahon mein

Galti samjha uss maasoom se chehre ko chaahkar

Uski har baat ko taal diya ek kahani bataakar

 

Takraar ke mahaul mein donon bhool gaye wo pal

Jab jaana ke saath dhadakte hain unke do dil

Ek ne chaha, jo suna jo dekha sab jhooth hojaye

Dooje ne chaha, uski baaton par unko yakeen hojaye 

 

Magar aur gehri ho gayi nafrat ki deewar

Mahaul hua sangeen, badhta gaya takraar

 

 
Durga, Ghazal like takraar.. interesting indeed. Lovely use of words.. muddat, one of most favs.  Loved your mention of the Holi confession between the takraar.. a deliberate refusal to accept. The language has a flow, music in it that is greatly enhanced by your style.
Khanjar, I didn't know that word.
Thank you durga. Beautiful piece.
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Episodes 247 - 248  


Takraar 




 

Rooh se nikalti hai aah, ye takraar dekhkar

Tadapte dilon ki dastaan se donon hai bekhabar

 

Khulasa hogaya hai ek gehri baat ka

Talash thi, ek muddat se, jis vajah ka

Kyun rachayi thi byaah dhamki dekar

Baandhli thi zabardasti bewafa jaankar

 

Khamosh hogayi zubaan, safaai na kuch diya

Yun chubh gaye ilzaam, jaise khanjar se cheer diya

Itni gir chuki nazaron mein unke, tooti ye jaankar

Jab kahi asli baat, toh suna jhooth samajhkar

 

Nafrat itni thi badh chuki uss kali raat se

Chap gayi wo tasveer jab thi wo uski baahon mein

Galti samjha uss maasoom se chehre ko chaahkar

Uski har baat ko taal diya ek kahani bataakar

 

Takraar ke mahaul mein donon bhool gaye wo pal

Jab jaana ke saath dhadakte hain unke do dil

Ek ne chaha, jo suna jo dekha sab jhooth hojaye

Dooje ne chaha, uski baaton par unko yakeen hojaye 

 

Magar aur gehri ho gayi nafrat ki deewar

Mahaul hua sangeen, badhta gaya takraar

 

Translation:

 

From the soul comes out a sigh on viewing this fight

Both are unknown to the tale of the distressed hearts

 

Revelation of a deep matter has taken place  

The reason for which a search was on since a long time 

Why he had threatened and married

Had tied forcibly thinking she was a fraudster  

 

She went silent, did not say anything in defence

The accusations hurt so much, as if ripped off with a dagger  

Broken down she was, when she realized how much she fell in his eyes  

When she told the truth, he heard it as a lie  

 

So much hatred had grown in him since that black night  

The sight of her in his arms got printed on his mind

He thought it was a mistake loving this innocent like face  

He put off her every word saying that it was just a story 

 

In this air of dipute they forgot those moments  

When they realized that their hearts beat together  

One felt, that whatever he had heard and seen would all become a lie 

Another felt, that he would believe whatever she told him

 

But the wall of hate grew deeper

The mood became tense, the clash kept growing  



beautiful Durga.
wonderful depiction of  their pain when the most bitter revelation happened.
this lines are amazing

Magar aur gehri ho gayi nafrat ki deewar

Mahaul hua sangeen, badhta gaya takraar

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Originally posted by: DurgaS

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Episodes 247 - 248  


Takraar 




 

Rooh se nikalti hai aah, ye takraar dekhkar

Tadapte dilon ki dastaan se donon hai bekhabar

 

Khulasa hogaya hai ek gehri baat ka

Talash thi, ek muddat se, jis vajah ka

Kyun rachayi thi byaah dhamki dekar

Baandhli thi zabardasti bewafa jaankar

 

Khamosh hogayi zubaan, safaai na kuch diya

Yun chubh gaye ilzaam, jaise khanjar se cheer diya

Itni gir chuki nazaron mein unke, tooti ye jaankar

Jab kahi asli baat, toh suna jhooth samajhkar

 

Nafrat itni thi badh chuki uss kali raat se

Chap gayi wo tasveer jab thi wo uski baahon mein

Galti samjha uss maasoom se chehre ko chaahkar

Uski har baat ko taal diya ek kahani bataakar

 

Takraar ke mahaul mein donon bhool gaye wo pal

Jab jaana ke saath dhadakte hain unke do dil

Ek ne chaha, jo suna jo dekha sab jhooth hojaye

Dooje ne chaha, uski baaton par unko yakeen hojaye 

 

Magar aur gehri ho gayi nafrat ki deewar

Mahaul hua sangeen, badhta gaya takraar

 

Translation:

 

From the soul comes out a sigh on viewing this fight

Both are unknown to the tale of the distressed hearts

 

Revelation of a deep matter has taken place  

The reason for which a search was on since a long time 

Why he had threatened and married

Had tied forcibly thinking she was a fraudster  

 

She went silent, did not say anything in defence

The accusations hurt so much, as if ripped off with a dagger  

Broken down she was, when she realized how much she fell in his eyes  

When she told the truth, he heard it as a lie  

 

So much hatred had grown in him since that black night  

The sight of her in his arms got printed on his mind

He thought it was a mistake loving this innocent like face  

He put off her every word saying that it was just a story 

 

In this air of dipute they forgot those moments  

When they realized that their hearts beat together  

One felt, that whatever he had heard and seen would all become a lie 

Another felt, that he would believe whatever she told him

 

But the wall of hate grew deeper

The mood became tense, the clash kept growing  



Durga.πŸ‘

A ray of pain of through their hearts during this painful revelation of the facts of their lives is entering right into their souls.Agonizing reality is merging and penetrating with exorbitant love.
Lovely 

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Originally posted by: Horizon

 
Durga, Ghazal like takraar.. interesting indeed. Lovely use of words.. muddat, one of most favs.  Loved your mention of the Holi confession between the takraar.. a deliberate refusal to accept. The language has a flow, music in it that is greatly enhanced by your style.
Khanjar, I didn't know that word.
Thank you durga. Beautiful piece.

 
Thanks Indu. I had been thinking for long how to write on this tiff between them. Had written too much heart wrenching stuff for the marriage episodes. So, when the gazal idea striked, thought of giving it a try. I am glad you liked it. Holi scene, I added that because Arnav remembered it after the terrace scene and he couldn't make out anything out of that thought. A war was on between his heart and brain. He so badly wanted to believe his heart, a wish that whatever he had seen would be proved as false. But, not yet. 

Thanks Indu. πŸ˜³
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beautiful Durga.
wonderful depiction of  their pain when the most bitter revelation happened.
this lines are amazing

Magar aur gehri ho gayi nafrat ki deewar

Mahaul hua sangeen, badhta gaya takraar

 
Hi Sohara. Thank you so much. That fight was so painful, for them and for us too. But it had to take place for good things to come. 
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Durga.πŸ‘

A ray of pain of through their hearts during this painful revelation of the facts of their lives is entering right into their souls.Agonizing reality is merging and penetrating with exorbitant love.
Lovely 

 
Hi Mehr. How have you been? Thanks for liking the poem. Loved what you wrote above. Yes, agonizing reality making way for their exorbitant love to come out and shine. 😊 
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Episodes 247 - 248  


Takraar 




 

Rooh se nikalti hai aah, ye takraar dekhkar

Tadapte dilon ki dastaan se donon hai bekhabar

 

Khulasa hogaya hai ek gehri baat ka

Talash thi, ek muddat se, jis vajah ka

Kyun rachayi thi byaah dhamki dekar

Baandhli thi zabardasti bewafa jaankar

 

Khamosh hogayi zubaan, safaai na kuch diya

Yun chubh gaye ilzaam, jaise khanjar se cheer diya

Itni gir chuki nazaron mein unke, tooti ye jaankar

Jab kahi asli baat, toh suna jhooth samajhkar

 

Nafrat itni thi badh chuki uss kali raat se

Chap gayi wo tasveer jab thi wo uski baahon mein

Galti samjha uss maasoom se chehre ko chaahkar

Uski har baat ko taal diya ek kahani bataakar

 

Takraar ke mahaul mein donon bhool gaye wo pal

Jab jaana ke saath dhadakte hain unke do dil

Ek ne chaha, jo suna jo dekha sab jhooth hojaye

Dooje ne chaha, uski baaton par unko yakeen hojaye 

 

Magar aur gehri ho gayi nafrat ki deewar

Mahaul hua sangeen, badhta gaya takraar

 

Translation:

 

From the soul comes out a sigh on viewing this fight

Both are unknown to the tale of the distressed hearts

 

Revelation of a deep matter has taken place  

The reason for which a search was on since a long time 

Why he had threatened and married

Had tied forcibly thinking she was a fraudster  

 

She went silent, did not say anything in defence

The accusations hurt so much, as if ripped off with a dagger  

Broken down she was, when she realized how much she fell in his eyes  

When she told the truth, he heard it as a lie  

 

So much hatred had grown in him since that black night  

The sight of her in his arms got printed on his mind

He thought it was a mistake loving this innocent like face  

He put off her every word saying that it was just a story 

 

In this air of dipute they forgot those moments  

When they realized that their hearts beat together  

One felt, that whatever he had heard and seen would all become a lie 

Another felt, that he would believe whatever she told him

 

But the wall of hate grew deeper

The mood became tense, the clash kept growing  




beautiful moment you choose, durga... they are passing through the worst point in the takraar. soon we shall have release from this...but this was as much mohabbat as anything else. the emotions and the mayhem memorably captured., what a moment in one's life..

a poem after a long time. i love this.

wish we had away to compile the different works from blast in some easy to use sort of deck or something...