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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sohara


beautiful Durga.
wonderful depiction of their pain when the most bitter revelation happened.
this lines are amazing

Magar aur gehri ho gayi nafrat ki deewar

Mahaul hua sangeen, badhta gaya takraar


Hi Sohara. Thank you so much. That fight was so painful, for them and for us too. But it had to take place for good things to come.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: MehreenB


Durga.👏

A ray of pain of through their hearts during this painful revelation of the facts of their lives is entering right into their souls.Agonizing reality is merging and penetrating with exorbitant love.
Lovely


Hi Mehr. How have you been? Thanks for liking the poem. Loved what you wrote above. Yes, agonizing reality making way for their exorbitant love to come out and shine. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: DurgaS

Disclaimer: Please do not copy my work anywhere. If you do, please give credit.

Episodes 247 - 248


Takraar




Rooh se nikalti hai aah, ye takraar dekhkar

Tadapte dilon ki dastaan se donon hai bekhabar

Khulasa hogaya hai ek gehri baat ka

Talash thi, ek muddat se, jis vajah ka

Kyun rachayi thi byaah dhamki dekar

Baandhli thi zabardasti bewafa jaankar

Khamosh hogayi zubaan, safaai na kuch diya

Yun chubh gaye ilzaam, jaise khanjar se cheer diya

Itni gir chuki nazaron mein unke, tooti ye jaankar

Jab kahi asli baat, toh suna jhooth samajhkar

Nafrat itni thi badh chuki uss kali raat se

Chap gayi wo tasveer jab thi wo uski baahon mein

Galti samjha uss maasoom se chehre ko chaahkar

Uski har baat ko taal diya ek kahani bataakar

Takraar ke mahaul mein donon bhool gaye wo pal

Jab jaana ke saath dhadakte hain unke do dil

Ek ne chaha, jo suna jo dekha sab jhooth hojaye

Dooje ne chaha, uski baaton par unko yakeen hojaye

Magar aur gehri ho gayi nafrat ki deewar

Mahaul hua sangeen, badhta gaya takraar

Translation:

From the soul comes out a sigh on viewing this fight

Both are unknown to the tale of the distressed hearts

Revelation of a deep matter has taken place

The reason for which a search was on since a long time

Why he had threatened and married

Had tied forcibly thinking she was a fraudster

She went silent, did not say anything in defence

The accusations hurt so much, as if ripped off with a dagger

Broken down she was, when she realized how much she fell in his eyes

When she told the truth, he heard it as a lie

So much hatred had grown in him since that black night

The sight of her in his arms got printed on his mind

He thought it was a mistake loving this innocent like face

He put off her every word saying that it was just a story

In this air of dipute they forgot those moments

When they realized that their hearts beat together

One felt, that whatever he had heard and seen would all become a lie

Another felt, that he would believe whatever she told him

But the wall of hate grew deeper

The mood became tense, the clash kept growing




beautiful moment you choose, durga... they are passing through the worst point in the takraar. soon we shall have release from this...but this was as much mohabbat as anything else. the emotions and the mayhem memorably captured., what a moment in one's life..

a poem after a long time. i love this.

wish we had away to compile the different works from blast in some easy to use sort of deck or something...



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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: DurgaS

Disclaimer: Please do not copy my work anywhere. If you do, please give credit.

Episodes 247 - 248


Takraar




Rooh se nikalti hai aah, ye takraar dekhkar

Tadapte dilon ki dastaan se donon hai bekhabar

Khulasa hogaya hai ek gehri baat ka

Talash thi, ek muddat se, jis vajah ka

Kyun rachayi thi byaah dhamki dekar

Baandhli thi zabardasti bewafa jaankar

Khamosh hogayi zubaan, safaai na kuch diya

Yun chubh gaye ilzaam, jaise khanjar se cheer diya

Itni gir chuki nazaron mein unke, tooti ye jaankar

Jab kahi asli baat, toh suna jhooth samajhkar

Nafrat itni thi badh chuki uss kali raat se

Chap gayi wo tasveer jab thi wo uski baahon mein

Galti samjha uss maasoom se chehre ko chaahkar

Uski har baat ko taal diya ek kahani bataakar

Takraar ke mahaul mein donon bhool gaye wo pal

Jab jaana ke saath dhadakte hain unke do dil

Ek ne chaha, jo suna jo dekha sab jhooth hojaye

Dooje ne chaha, uski baaton par unko yakeen hojaye

Magar aur gehri ho gayi nafrat ki deewar

Mahaul hua sangeen, badhta gaya takraar

Translation:

From the soul comes out a sigh on viewing this fight

Both are unknown to the tale of the distressed hearts

Revelation of a deep matter has taken place

The reason for which a search was on since a long time

Why he had threatened and married

Had tied forcibly thinking she was a fraudster

She went silent, did not say anything in defence

The accusations hurt so much, as if ripped off with a dagger

Broken down she was, when she realized how much she fell in his eyes

When she told the truth, he heard it as a lie

So much hatred had grown in him since that black night

The sight of her in his arms got printed on his mind

He thought it was a mistake loving this innocent like face

He put off her every word saying that it was just a story

In this air of dipute they forgot those moments

When they realized that their hearts beat together

One felt, that whatever he had heard and seen would all become a lie

Another felt, that he would believe whatever she told him

But the wall of hate grew deeper

The mood became tense, the clash kept growing



nice di👏
superb❤️

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: indi52



beautiful moment you choose, durga... they are passing through the worst point in the takraar. soon we shall have release from this...but this was as much mohabbat as anything else. the emotions and the mayhem memorably captured., what a moment in one's life..

a poem after a long time. i love this.

wish we had away to compile the different works from blast in some easy to use sort of deck or something...




Indi 🤗

Thanks for loving it. Felt good after writing after a long time. As their emotions reach a pinnacle, it is becoming more tough to describe them in a few words. But, this is a challenge I am enjoying.

Yes, as our works increase and diversify, accessing them is becoming a task. Maybe, we should create a different platform.


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: divsarunfan


nice di👏
superb❤️


Thanks Div. How are you? 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: DurgaS

Disclaimer: Please do not copy my work anywhere. If you do, please give credit.

Episodes 247 - 248


Takraar




Rooh se nikalti hai aah, ye takraar dekhkar

Tadapte dilon ki dastaan se donon hai bekhabar

Khulasa hogaya hai ek gehri baat ka

Talash thi, ek muddat se, jis vajah ka

Kyun rachayi thi byaah dhamki dekar

Baandhli thi zabardasti bewafa jaankar

Khamosh hogayi zubaan, safaai na kuch diya

Yun chubh gaye ilzaam, jaise khanjar se cheer diya

Itni gir chuki nazaron mein unke, tooti ye jaankar

Jab kahi asli baat, toh suna jhooth samajhkar

Nafrat itni thi badh chuki uss kali raat se

Chap gayi wo tasveer jab thi wo uski baahon mein

Galti samjha uss maasoom se chehre ko chaahkar

Uski har baat ko taal diya ek kahani bataakar

Takraar ke mahaul mein donon bhool gaye wo pal

Jab jaana ke saath dhadakte hain unke do dil

Ek ne chaha, jo suna jo dekha sab jhooth hojaye

Dooje ne chaha, uski baaton par unko yakeen hojaye

Magar aur gehri ho gayi nafrat ki deewar

Mahaul hua sangeen, badhta gaya takraar

Translation:

From the soul comes out a sigh on viewing this fight

Both are unknown to the tale of the distressed hearts

Revelation of a deep matter has taken place

The reason for which a search was on since a long time

Why he had threatened and married

Had tied forcibly thinking she was a fraudster

She went silent, did not say anything in defence

The accusations hurt so much, as if ripped off with a dagger

Broken down she was, when she realized how much she fell in his eyes

When she told the truth, he heard it as a lie

So much hatred had grown in him since that black night

The sight of her in his arms got printed on his mind

He thought it was a mistake loving this innocent like face

He put off her every word saying that it was just a story

In this air of dipute they forgot those moments

When they realized that their hearts beat together

One felt, that whatever he had heard and seen would all become a lie

Another felt, that he would believe whatever she told him

But the wall of hate grew deeper

The mood became tense, the clash kept growing



NICE DURGA 👏

Their relation started with Takrar from the very first day and remained in Takrar for most of the time.
Their tense moods and moments were what making this relation strong.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: DurgaS

Disclaimer: Please do not copy my work anywhere. If you do, please give credit.

Episodes 247 - 248


Takraar




Rooh se nikalti hai aah, ye takraar dekhkar

Tadapte dilon ki dastaan se donon hai bekhabar

Khulasa hogaya hai ek gehri baat ka

Talash thi, ek muddat se, jis vajah ka

Kyun rachayi thi byaah dhamki dekar

Baandhli thi zabardasti bewafa jaankar

Khamosh hogayi zubaan, safaai na kuch diya

Yun chubh gaye ilzaam, jaise khanjar se cheer diya

Itni gir chuki nazaron mein unke, tooti ye jaankar

Jab kahi asli baat, toh suna jhooth samajhkar

Nafrat itni thi badh chuki uss kali raat se

Chap gayi wo tasveer jab thi wo uski baahon mein

Galti samjha uss maasoom se chehre ko chaahkar

Uski har baat ko taal diya ek kahani bataakar

Takraar ke mahaul mein donon bhool gaye wo pal

Jab jaana ke saath dhadakte hain unke do dil

Ek ne chaha, jo suna jo dekha sab jhooth hojaye

Dooje ne chaha, uski baaton par unko yakeen hojaye

Magar aur gehri ho gayi nafrat ki deewar

Mahaul hua sangeen, badhta gaya takraar

Translation:

From the soul comes out a sigh on viewing this fight

Both are unknown to the tale of the distressed hearts

Revelation of a deep matter has taken place

The reason for which a search was on since a long time

Why he had threatened and married

Had tied forcibly thinking she was a fraudster

She went silent, did not say anything in defence

The accusations hurt so much, as if ripped off with a dagger

Broken down she was, when she realized how much she fell in his eyes

When she told the truth, he heard it as a lie

So much hatred had grown in him since that black night

The sight of her in his arms got printed on his mind

He thought it was a mistake loving this innocent like face

He put off her every word saying that it was just a story

In this air of dipute they forgot those moments

When they realized that their hearts beat together

One felt, that whatever he had heard and seen would all become a lie

Another felt, that he would believe whatever she told him

But the wall of hate grew deeper

The mood became tense, the clash kept growing




This is a masterpiece of a Takrar D! The gazal style is just perfect for the flow of emotions of a love hate tremor, of anger and quiet, of shattering glass thats pierces noiselessly. Splendid expression of ek dooje ki chahat! 👏 I will remember this one hamesha🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ArshiHamesha


NICE DURGA 👏

Their relation started with Takrar from the very first day and remained in Takrar for most of the time.
Their tense moods and moments were what making this relation strong.

Thanks Faiqa. Totally agree with the above. Now it is time for the takraar of all takraars, which leaves them in pain, restless till they sense each other across a wall. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: wiwy



This is a masterpiece of a Takrar D! The gazal style is just perfect for the flow of emotions of a love hate tremor, of anger and quiet, of shattering glass thats pierces noiselessly. Splendid expression of ek dooje ki chahat! 👏 I will remember this one hamesha🤗

Uff, masterpiece! Thanks Wiwy. Loved what you wrote above in bold. Might use it sometime. 😃

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