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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: DurgaS

Disclaimer: Please do not copy my work anywhere. If you do, please give credit. 

Episodes 247 - 248  


Takraar 




 

Rooh se nikalti hai aah, ye takraar dekhkar

Tadapte dilon ki dastaan se donon hai bekhabar

 

Khulasa hogaya hai ek gehri baat ka

Talash thi, ek muddat se, jis vajah ka

Kyun rachayi thi byaah dhamki dekar

Baandhli thi zabardasti bewafa jaankar

 

Khamosh hogayi zubaan, safaai na kuch diya

Yun chubh gaye ilzaam, jaise khanjar se cheer diya

Itni gir chuki nazaron mein unke, tooti ye jaankar

Jab kahi asli baat, toh suna jhooth samajhkar

 

Nafrat itni thi badh chuki uss kali raat se

Chap gayi wo tasveer jab thi wo uski baahon mein

Galti samjha uss maasoom se chehre ko chaahkar

Uski har baat ko taal diya ek kahani bataakar

 

Takraar ke mahaul mein donon bhool gaye wo pal

Jab jaana ke saath dhadakte hain unke do dil

Ek ne chaha, jo suna jo dekha sab jhooth hojaye

Dooje ne chaha, uski baaton par unko yakeen hojaye 

 

Magar aur gehri ho gayi nafrat ki deewar

Mahaul hua sangeen, badhta gaya takraar

 

Translation:

 

From the soul comes out a sigh on viewing this fight

Both are unknown to the tale of the distressed hearts

 

Revelation of a deep matter has taken place  

The reason for which a search was on since a long time 

Why he had threatened and married

Had tied forcibly thinking she was a fraudster  

 

She went silent, did not say anything in defence

The accusations hurt so much, as if ripped off with a dagger  

Broken down she was, when she realized how much she fell in his eyes  

When she told the truth, he heard it as a lie  

 

So much hatred had grown in him since that black night  

The sight of her in his arms got printed on his mind

He thought it was a mistake loving this innocent like face  

He put off her every word saying that it was just a story 

 

In this air of dipute they forgot those moments  

When they realized that their hearts beat together  

One felt, that whatever he had heard and seen would all become a lie 

Another felt, that he would believe whatever she told him

 

But the wall of hate grew deeper

The mood became tense, the clash kept growing  



nice di๐Ÿ‘
superbโค๏ธ

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: indi52



beautiful moment you choose, durga... they are passing through the worst point in the takraar. soon we shall have release from this...but this was as much mohabbat as anything else. the emotions and the mayhem memorably captured., what a moment in one's life..

a poem after a long time. i love this.

wish we had away to compile the different works from blast in some easy to use sort of deck or something...



 
Indi ๐Ÿค— 

Thanks for loving it. Felt good after writing after a long time. As their emotions reach a pinnacle, it is becoming more tough to describe them in a few words. But, this is a challenge I am enjoying. 

Yes, as our works increase and diversify, accessing them is becoming a task. Maybe, we should create a different platform. 


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: divsarunfan


nice di๐Ÿ‘
superbโค๏ธ

 
Thanks Div. How are you? ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: DurgaS

Disclaimer: Please do not copy my work anywhere. If you do, please give credit. 

Episodes 247 - 248  


Takraar 




 

Rooh se nikalti hai aah, ye takraar dekhkar

Tadapte dilon ki dastaan se donon hai bekhabar

 

Khulasa hogaya hai ek gehri baat ka

Talash thi, ek muddat se, jis vajah ka

Kyun rachayi thi byaah dhamki dekar

Baandhli thi zabardasti bewafa jaankar

 

Khamosh hogayi zubaan, safaai na kuch diya

Yun chubh gaye ilzaam, jaise khanjar se cheer diya

Itni gir chuki nazaron mein unke, tooti ye jaankar

Jab kahi asli baat, toh suna jhooth samajhkar

 

Nafrat itni thi badh chuki uss kali raat se

Chap gayi wo tasveer jab thi wo uski baahon mein

Galti samjha uss maasoom se chehre ko chaahkar

Uski har baat ko taal diya ek kahani bataakar

 

Takraar ke mahaul mein donon bhool gaye wo pal

Jab jaana ke saath dhadakte hain unke do dil

Ek ne chaha, jo suna jo dekha sab jhooth hojaye

Dooje ne chaha, uski baaton par unko yakeen hojaye 

 

Magar aur gehri ho gayi nafrat ki deewar

Mahaul hua sangeen, badhta gaya takraar

 

Translation:

 

From the soul comes out a sigh on viewing this fight

Both are unknown to the tale of the distressed hearts

 

Revelation of a deep matter has taken place  

The reason for which a search was on since a long time 

Why he had threatened and married

Had tied forcibly thinking she was a fraudster  

 

She went silent, did not say anything in defence

The accusations hurt so much, as if ripped off with a dagger  

Broken down she was, when she realized how much she fell in his eyes  

When she told the truth, he heard it as a lie  

 

So much hatred had grown in him since that black night  

The sight of her in his arms got printed on his mind

He thought it was a mistake loving this innocent like face  

He put off her every word saying that it was just a story 

 

In this air of dipute they forgot those moments  

When they realized that their hearts beat together  

One felt, that whatever he had heard and seen would all become a lie 

Another felt, that he would believe whatever she told him

 

But the wall of hate grew deeper

The mood became tense, the clash kept growing  



NICE DURGA ๐Ÿ‘

Their relation started with Takrar from the very first day and remained in Takrar for most of the time.
Their tense moods and moments were what making this relation strong.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: DurgaS

Disclaimer: Please do not copy my work anywhere. If you do, please give credit. 

Episodes 247 - 248  


Takraar 




 

Rooh se nikalti hai aah, ye takraar dekhkar

Tadapte dilon ki dastaan se donon hai bekhabar

 

Khulasa hogaya hai ek gehri baat ka

Talash thi, ek muddat se, jis vajah ka

Kyun rachayi thi byaah dhamki dekar

Baandhli thi zabardasti bewafa jaankar

 

Khamosh hogayi zubaan, safaai na kuch diya

Yun chubh gaye ilzaam, jaise khanjar se cheer diya

Itni gir chuki nazaron mein unke, tooti ye jaankar

Jab kahi asli baat, toh suna jhooth samajhkar

 

Nafrat itni thi badh chuki uss kali raat se

Chap gayi wo tasveer jab thi wo uski baahon mein

Galti samjha uss maasoom se chehre ko chaahkar

Uski har baat ko taal diya ek kahani bataakar

 

Takraar ke mahaul mein donon bhool gaye wo pal

Jab jaana ke saath dhadakte hain unke do dil

Ek ne chaha, jo suna jo dekha sab jhooth hojaye

Dooje ne chaha, uski baaton par unko yakeen hojaye 

 

Magar aur gehri ho gayi nafrat ki deewar

Mahaul hua sangeen, badhta gaya takraar

 

Translation:

 

From the soul comes out a sigh on viewing this fight

Both are unknown to the tale of the distressed hearts

 

Revelation of a deep matter has taken place  

The reason for which a search was on since a long time 

Why he had threatened and married

Had tied forcibly thinking she was a fraudster  

 

She went silent, did not say anything in defence

The accusations hurt so much, as if ripped off with a dagger  

Broken down she was, when she realized how much she fell in his eyes  

When she told the truth, he heard it as a lie  

 

So much hatred had grown in him since that black night  

The sight of her in his arms got printed on his mind

He thought it was a mistake loving this innocent like face  

He put off her every word saying that it was just a story 

 

In this air of dipute they forgot those moments  

When they realized that their hearts beat together  

One felt, that whatever he had heard and seen would all become a lie 

Another felt, that he would believe whatever she told him

 

But the wall of hate grew deeper

The mood became tense, the clash kept growing  




This is a masterpiece of a Takrar D! The gazal style is just perfect for the flow of emotions of a love hate tremor, of anger and quiet, of shattering glass thats pierces noiselessly. Splendid expression of ek  dooje ki chahat! ๐Ÿ‘ I will remember this one hamesha๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ArshiHamesha


NICE DURGA ๐Ÿ‘

Their relation started with Takrar from the very first day and remained in Takrar for most of the time.
Their tense moods and moments were what making this relation strong.

 
Thanks Faiqa. Totally agree with the above. Now it is time for the takraar of all takraars, which leaves them in pain, restless till they sense each other across a wall. ๐Ÿ˜Š 
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: wiwy



This is a masterpiece of a Takrar D! The gazal style is just perfect for the flow of emotions of a love hate tremor, of anger and quiet, of shattering glass thats pierces noiselessly. Splendid expression of ek  dooje ki chahat! ๐Ÿ‘ I will remember this one hamesha๐Ÿค—

 
 
Uff, masterpiece! Thanks Wiwy. Loved what you wrote above in bold. Might use it sometime. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ 
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ArshiHamesha

                                           

DISCLAIMER:DON'T COPY MY WORKS AND CONCEPTS WITHOUT GIVING ME CREDIT 

YOU HAVE SEEN MY HUMBLE SIDE. TRUST ME YOU WON'T LIKE THE OTHER...

Arshi's Index  

EPISODE 256-257

Chimera...

[Chimera : a monster from Greek mythology that breathes fire and has a lion's head, a goat's body, and a snake's tail...something that exists only in the imagination and is not possible in reality meaning a hope or dream that is extremely unlikely ever to come true]



gorgeous edit


Khushi who was going through phantasmagoria state of mind where her real and imaginary world is making her to meet the facts about Arnav and Shyam, two men who over shadowed her life since from the beginning."kya sach hai kya sapna hai..kuch samjh nahin aa raha hai...: She has a clear state of mind about Arnav that her Shaitan and Rajkumar is one and both sides love her just one is angry because of her mistrusting him...but in Shyam's case she still needs some home work to do.On the other hand Shyam's state of mind is like running after a mirage.He wants honey and money and even thinks of himself one step ahead...but as "behind every smile ,there is a cunning face"...He can't even see his own steps while flying in the air that he is losing his own ground.He is just like a Chimera...a person without a personality..."hoshiyar hi moon keh bal girte hain.." 

These two epis also hinting that Arnav is going to realize soon that he was running after Mirage for not believing in Khushi and how she is an asset of his life who he always mistreated and misunderstood by not paying attention to the purity and righteousness of her actions rather than believing what he saw and hear.It will be sheer in pain when he will realize it in the captivity. "jab woh tumse dur chali jayengi toh tumhaare saansein ruk jayangi".and that is where he will be  reaching soon.

PONDERING CONNECTED DOTS:In Episode 156, new year eve...When Anjali tells Akash  "Shyam used to come from window by using pipes to meet her..." and Shyam said"laws r meant to be broken..."...It ignited me then why this unnecessary piece of info was given...and today I found the answer...Sham said "Rani Saheba, shower main kuch kharabi hai kya???, paani dhang se nahin aa raha hai... Pata nahin lagta hai shyaid shower pipe main kuch problem ho gayi hai ".

I loved this ..Shower pipe meaning a source of flow,either water, oil, gas anything...but he is telling water...meaning flow of money...๐Ÿ˜† creep

In episode 219, when first time this will papers got Shyam's attention..he was in Arnav's room looking for it and Anjali comes in...he said "those papers from which your all property will be mine..."and he added "Aap aur humari honewali rajkumari hi tou humari puri jaaydad hain"..he confirms that Anjali is his property ...and he will use this child for getting that...and this money and property is keeping him close to Anjali and Arnav also made that will for the same purpose as he knew that Shyam is only after money...and he will leave Anjali when he will get that and here comes ...""Shower main kharaabi and paani nahin aa raha"...yes, it is.

He got the pipe, will papers which were on Anjali's name..meaning he doesn't need her any more...he got what he aspired for since from the beginning...money and Anjali was his source and now pipe is not working for him as he doesn't need her for that ...at least he thinks he got it..and now he is after honey...meaning Khushi...and what he says to her"Rani sahiba gave this suggestion to take shower in here...

 

 Today Naani and Anjali have witnessed a different angle of Khushi. The have seen this Khushi who is zest of life in RM and in Arnav's life with her smile and antics but today there is nothing in her... This is why Anjali witnessed when Khushi said in the beginning - "wohi toh di, hum hasna bhi nahin chahte". Khushi is not even been able to be true to her name, she forgot smiling and living life cheerfully about everything.But Anjali opened the door of her room while she was erasing the memories by cleaning Arnav's table..."aaap Chote se bohat pyar karti hain.."meaning  don't erase that as this feeling is way precious to keep...here comes her own words"ek mauqa to do"

 

Now when she entered in her own world which is the only source of her lifeline is ,Arnavji's room , her room, their room and faced the devil there. shyam was utterly egregios, unbearable, insanely creepy here. 'He tells her.."waise kami bhi kaise Khushiji??? Woh ho ya naa ho, naa aap ko farak padhta hain aur naa hi aap ki shaadi shuda zindagi main koi gehra badlao aa sakta hain". Biggest fool he is as he has no clue of Arnav and Khushi's equation...that is why he is "Chimera"...He thinks he is the Lion of this den just by entering Arnav's room ,coward like goat as he thinks relationships only formed by physical means,and venomous like serpent because he did poison Arnav's brain and now thinks can do the same with Khushi... He  shamelessly  chases another man's wife and just when  she reminds him tat he has  crossed the limits, he switches tacks and reminds her about the papers, keeping her confused, her brain addled and preventing her from thinking straight or correct, wants her to chase the mirage...!!


Night time, Khushi is fast asleep when something awakens her, She  jerks up with Her racing and frenzy heart when she sees the silhouette of Arnav on the recliner, "aap aa gaye" in the dark and he turned his face with eyes having a rim of tears in em , a remorse in his eyes which she couldn't see yet as she doesn't know he's been abducted ...his heart is calling her out constantly with full of remorse...which is realizing now being away from her.. delighted she switches on the light  and the image of Arnav disappears leaving  her alone, distressed .. The growing feelings of Khushi  is beginning to shape itself and has begun to feel the pulse  of this burgeoning feeling. She has understood that these  sensations are caused due to Arnav   but she still is unable to withstand the light of truth because Khushi is under the impression that her instincts , her feelings are not reciprocated .When she will embrace the whole truth only then she will comes out of this delusional mistrust. so enjoyed reading this portion, feelings flow through a girl and a man, he in a vision, she here, so pristine, and you wrote with such belief in the moment. lovely.


Symbolism and coonection: 11o'clock and 4o'clock time as 11 represent prisoner ,4 represents Lust and realization

Arnav's call comes to Khushi at 9:27 as in Hebrews 9:27 means God's "judgment." Man does not return to die a second time." Meaning Arnav will never misjudge  Khushi again , God is showing the pearl of wisdoms to Khushi to find the path to him..also Upright Iron which Mamji did...meaning rational truth is rising up and yes who holds the rational truth...it is Arnav and he has to get up against Shyam...as his hands were tied off because of Anjali but Shyam will provide him enough to rise against him to save Anjali...and Khushi

 

Akash's  "batain chupana" is intriguing the point that when He will find out about how Payal has hidden Shyam's truth from him , he will burst out as this was the promise he took near the poolside...after reconciliation ,during Havan..."They will never hide anything"..and that exactly happened alter after Shyam's revelation because this is one value Akash holds the most in their relationship.

 

 

Everyone bids bye to Bubbli and turnd around towards home when Khushi as usual thinking about something trips and about to fall when the hand of Shyam tries to prevent that , Khushi balances herself before he can come closer ...nice move , she has to be alert to regain her balance in time and yes she was one step ahead of Shyam ...he was behind her...excellent CVs...She was saved by Arnav from fire [meaning Shyam] in GH and today Anjali is sending Khushi away from Shyam... Both pillars try to bring a smile on Khushi's face .Anjali and Nani lead Khushi to the couch while Shyam begins to go to his room when the bomb shell is dropped , Khushi has got a ticket to London ..to see Arnav ..A twitching Shyam tries to stop  the process but in vain.

Pause here"Anjali gave London Ticket to Arnav and now to Khushi

My grabber is Anjali's words... "This is the path which will lead you directly to Arnav , To your happiness  ...Yes, the goal is not London ..but the London ticket will  open the path to the truth that had remained undetected, obscured .. and  that truth is enveloped in happiness.Other grabber Shyam is  climbing up on the stairs and  his progress was stopped by some obstacles ..He is moving confident that his ambition has been accomplished but one hurdle comes out of nowhere and shortens his stride of victory as  He turns and immediately climbs down ..and that hurdle is "Yeh seedhe aapko chotte tak le jaayega" .. Arnav...Yes Shyam  will be not only be stopped by Arnav but also will be brought to knees by Arnav  and his other  obsession of  getting Khushi by hook or crook will be shattered by Anjali who is sending Khushi near to Arnav...Yes Shyam's mirage is getting closer to be ended...again three women who are head of this house...yes Naniji, Anjali and Khushi...Always three..#of success


Anjali has got the tickets and hands it over to Khushi, Shyam makes a phone call while Anjali hands over the ticket.., forcefully instructing something to the caller,...Hmmm[nothing happened after that]

Pause here:Mrs.Arnav Singh Raizada & Formality ...These were the two words that resonated  that Khushi will always be Mrs.ASR and this time the relationship will be solemnized a.. So we see Khushi who is being sent before bring brought back as the wife of ASR with the full approval, acceptance of the family and above all from Arnav himself...

 Mami s advice "Khushi not to SLEEP !! meaning remain alert... we see the words of Payal which acts as a talisman which will  protect her "think of parents and ur fear will vanish !! " yes.. Khushi will come back to Devi Maiya... and she will become the power of her through which she will shred the shroud of deception !!

 Khushi returns back, offering the excuse that her parents did not want her to leave  the shores  and to wait out for seven days , Anjali buys the story even though Nani remains suspicious of Khushi's statement.. Nani and Anjali resolve to send Khushi next week

Yes The battle between the heart and mind - the battle between love and hate - the battle between right and wrong - The battle between good and evil- The battle between the shaitaan and the rajkumar and the final - and the  battle between the "nafrat" and the "mohabbat"- is what Khushi's heart and mind is going through now but her search for her happiness is not running after mirage but to face the reality and that's where she is heading now...a battle of her life...

 

 

 



faiqa,

you read that ticket from anjali so interestingly... yeah she did give him the ticket and to her and in its own way it did take both to their destination... which was love.

your use of chimera, really fascinating.

and the pipe story... writers constantly added nuance and really sharp you are in reading them.. true why all this talk of pipes unless it means something...

i am dulling out inside as we go through the episodes that are not touching me in kidnap... so reading the older ones somehow makes me happier... these two episodes were hard for me to watch, but yeah there was a lot of story telling i guess.

thanks for the very interesting take.



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Posted: 9 years ago
THNX INDI ๐Ÿ˜Š
CHIMERA...HE SEEMED TO ME FOR DIGESTING HIS DISGUSTING ACTS AND FIGURE...SERIOUSLY...HE HAS CROSSED LIMITS IN HIS CHEAPNESS.

I AM BEHIND THESE ELEMENTS SINCE FROM THE BEGINNING AS NOW THESE HAVE BECOME MY ROUTINE...SO WHEN IPK WRITERS REMEMBER OH...WE HAVE TO CONNECT THAT...THEN IT MAKES SENSE...BUT IF YOU ASK ME AS WE ALL KNOW..A LOT OF THINGS HAVE BEEN LEFT ...MY POOR AND FAV IPK HAS THESE MERCILESS MORANS TO DESTRY IT COMPLETELY...BUT LOOK THEY DIDN'T FORGET FOR A SECOND TO MAKE MONEY OUT OF IT...

TICKET TO LOVE...AND ANJALI IS BEING GIVING THEM SINCE FROM THE BEGINNING..

THNX 


faiqa, 

you read that ticket from anjali so interestingly... yeah she did give him the ticket and to her and in its own way it did take both to their destination... which was love.

your use of chimera, really fascinating.

and the pipe story... writers constantly added nuance and really sharp you are in reading them.. true why all this talk of pipes unless it means something...

i am dulling out inside as we go through the episodes that are not touching me in kidnap... so reading the older ones somehow makes me happier... these two episodes were hard for me to watch, but yeah there was a lot of story telling i guess.

thanks for the very interesting take.
Edited by ArshiHamesha - 9 years ago