ArHi SS: Storm Within *COMPLETE*

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incarnadine

@incarnadine

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Posted: 11 years ago

#211

Omg! Tinaaa! This is utterly brilliant! 👏

I have read so many similar short stories/OSs on Khushi's complicated pregnancy, but they were nothing like this. They didn't move me as much this one did! You write so beautifully! Arnav and Khushi's pain and agony, their emotions; everything was so palpable!

There was so much suspense till chapter 3! The sash and tiara in the first chapter made me think that Khushi had left Arnav after winning the Mrs. India title which made Arnav hate her. My mind goes into overdrive sometimes 😛

Chapters 3-5 have been so heart-wrenching! Of course, I had the gut feeling that this has to be a story with a happy ending, but that didn't stop me from getting tensed.

I absolutely loved it!! Thank you so much for writing it and posting it!

Loved it! 😊

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Chanyaforever

@Chanyaforever

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Posted: 11 years ago

#212

This is the most hearttouching and heartwrenching story I have ever read. I cried and cried. My husband came in and looked at me and was shocked. I couldn't answer him so he just took a seat next to me, hughed me and began to read the story with me and sighed happily at the end.. then stood up and told me that you are an amazing writer TINA. Never thought that he would read a SS with me about IPK.. but he did! That means a lot! .. I really hope I would never have to take such a decision; this might be very hard but I think my decision would be the same as Khushi's. An expectant mother would always protect her unborn child even if that would probably mean to loose her own life!.. You are simply great TINA. Kudos. Chanya.

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mbbsrocks

@mbbsrocks

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Posted: 11 years ago

#213

Too touching...

Loved readin every bit of it...

Btw wat problem khushi had??

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Tina

@TinaEskay

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#214

Thank you for all the wonderful comments on Storm Within everyone.😳 I'm short on time so I couldn't reply individually, but I really enjoyed reading them all. There were a lot of tears--some sad and other joy-filled from what I read. Which is just like real life, isn't it? Now you see why i posted this SS all at once. 😉

Glad you liked this surprise! Happy Reading!

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foreversarun3

@foreversarun3

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#215

just read the summary 😊

sounds interesting 😊😊

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foreversarun3

@foreversarun3

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#216

OMG just read part 1!!!

Thud...that was sooo intense!!!

Made me cry!!!

Crap...what happened???

Arshi still love each other but something happened...

OMG...!!!!!!

Ahhh loving this SS so far...very intense!!!

Runs to read more!!! 😊😊😊

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foreversarun3

@foreversarun3

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#217

OMG!!!!!!!!

Yaar!!!!!!!!

Just read part 2!!!

Literally crying now!!!

What happened to Khushi???

She's pregnant??

Why is Arnav sooo angry??

And in pain??

He doesnt want the baby??

Why???

Is something wrong with Khushi & the baby????

OMG...is Khushi ok?????

Thud...im gonna run to read part 3 now!!!

Amazing part!!!

Loved it!!!

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foreversarun3

@foreversarun3

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#218

OMG...I was right!!!

Just read part 3!!!

Khushi's pregnancy has many complications!!

OMG...I really really hope Khushi will be ok!!!

OMGGG

wht will happen now???

I can understand Arnav's pain & Khushi's pain!!

OMG...sooo emotional & intense!!!

Love this SS...very touching!!!

You are truly an amazing writer yaar!!!

Running to read part 4!!

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foreversarun3

@foreversarun3

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#219

Just read part 4

OMG...

That was sooo emotional!!!!

It was sooo touching!!!

Poor Arshi...feeling sooo bad for them!!!

They are going thru sooo much pain!!!

I really hope a miracle happens!!!

Beautiful part yaar...cant stop crying!!!

Love this SS even more with each part!!!

Runs to read final part 😊😊

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foreversarun3

@foreversarun3

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#220

OMG!!!!!!!!

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Yaar the ending was simply beautiful!!!

Loved it!!!

I was crying & almost screaming for Khushi to hold on longer!!!!

And the way Arnav was there for Khushi!!! Ahhh!!!!

Very intense, emotional & touching!!!

This is one of the most beautiful SS's I have ever read yaar!!!

It's amazing & beautiful!!!!

Loved it!!!

Thank you sooo much for writing it & sharing it with us!!! 😊😊😊

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