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Mrinalini

@minakrish

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

The story is definately beautiful... and surely not a disaster

A smile played on my lips as I read it

Perfect title to perfect shot

Flawlessly written

Completely loved it!

I loved how Anjali helped Armaan realise what Ridhima meant

He really was being so stupid

He just couldn't see the obvious 😆

The scene where Ridhima enters and agrees with Anjy was superb

Loved their confession and of course the last lines were the best

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❤️

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Mishti

@.LilGreenRobot.

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

Firstly thank you for dedicating this to me 😳 .. The title sounded perfect for these two 😳 And only you can understand my overly disastrous mind 😆

The beginning is so Armaan 😆 .. 'No I'm not here leave me alone' 😆

Anjy's character in this is beautiful.. I see you chose why you chose her over everyone to play the 'supporting role' in this OS 😃

Their conversation 🤣 .. 'Armaan Mallikkk' 'Anjy stop shouting' I could vividly picture them talking like this 😆 Your choice of words is perfect!

Armaan so unaware of the picture and what Anjy is trying to show him 🤣 .. Love him

And finally the two love birds 😳

Their conversation is so cute especially the 'miracles happen once in a while' so serene 😳

You used the title at the end of the OS 😲 .. Wasn't expecting this.. Beautiful concept and you've penned down each and every thought beautifully.. This whole OS can be pictured through your way of writing and description of the setting.. Your choice of words is marvelous.. Totally an OS worth reading over and over again

Love you ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

Annie x

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Oindrila B.

@OindrilaVirgoan

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Awwwleee..this was sooo adorably done!!!.

Armaan really can be such a dumbass, at times!! Stooped fella!! 😆

And the best part..two best friends being in love with each other and the Armaan has no clue that the guy Ridzy loves is him..hehe..and she planned on confessing first lekin Armaan ne pura chaupat kar diya..But finally they both confessed and it wasss sooo mussshhyyy and cutesyyy..all's well that ends well!! ❤️

And I loooved Anjy!! She was bloody fantastic here..I dont think I have ever loved her in DMG as much as I have loved her here...hahahahahaha 🤣

All in all..I loved the oneshot, Mriii...do write more on KaSh!! ❤️

Now be a goodie girl and start work on CW 😉😆

Edited by OindrilaVirgoan - 11 years ago