Sutron-Ki-Dhaar - Hasya matrabhasha soot

twisted_beenz

@twisted_beenz

Rocker

26

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: Kaushitaki
Beenz hum aapke subhnaam janne ke bade hi tamanna rakhte hain... Parantu is shan aapka ye bhajan sunkr hume ye prateet hota hai ki chuki aapka dimag kucch teda chalta hai aapne apne nam me bhi tedehepan ka anubhav karwaya hai... Aur bhi adhik hume iss baat ka bhay hai ki yahaan aate aate humara mansik santulan itna na bigadh jaye ki hume raanchi bhejna pade aur wahan k rehne wale saare pagal humari sthiti se bhaybhit hokar khud ba khud thik huye hume akele chorkr chale jaye...

Humara subh naam beena hai. Pyaar se log hume Beenz kehte hain. Humara dimag poornatah tedha hai. Aur ghabraiye mat. Aap akeli kabhie nahi hongi. Hum himesha aapke har pagalpan mein saath denge.

1

Reply

Quote

ImJia29

@ImJia29

Navigator

11

Posted: 11 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: twisted_beenz
Namaskaar

Hum sab chahte the ki humara ek aisa soot (thread) ho jisme hum sirf sudh matrabhasha mein likhe, vaad vivaad karein, dharawahik ke har prakaran (episode) par charcha karein... is soot ke do sootradhaar hain... Hum beenz aur humari sakhi Shruti...

Is soot mein likhne ke thode niyam hain

1) rachnaye keval hindi mein ho sakti hain, kintu sajjan yadi chahe to angrezi mein tippanni kar sakte hain... Parantu agar hindi mein karein to uska mazaa hi anya hoga...

2) shudh hindi mein kavita/nibandh ityadi swikrit hain; kuch urdu shabd bhi vyavhaar kiye ja sakte hain...kuch paristhiti-sandarbh hindi film sanvad aur ek- pankti- chutkulon ka bhi ullekh ho sakta hai... Jitna hasya ho utna mazaa aye...

3) Apni hasya ranchnayen prastut ki jaa sakti hai... swayam banaye huye bure rachnaon ka hum hardik swagat karenge...

Hum yeh soot ko hasya roopi rakhna chahte hain... ghambir ko gulli dande ke adhunik khel ke maidaan mein chod de...

Bahot khoob..!!
Hamein aapka ye andaz pasand aaya..!!!
Hum nisandeh (undoubtedly) aake ye vichar ka abhivadan karte h..!!
Hume aise varta-lap karne me bahot aanand aa raha h..!!
Hahaha..!!

2

Reply

Quote

twisted_beenz

@twisted_beenz

Rocker

26

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#53

Bahot khoob..!!
Hamein aapka ye andaz pasand aaya..!!!
Hum nisandeh (undoubtedly) aake ye vichar ka abhivadan karte h..!!
Hume aise varta-lap karne me bahot aanand aa raha h..!!
Hahaha..!!


Bohot bohot abhaar aapko yeh soot pasand aa raha hai. Aapka swagat hai aur aasha kartein hain ki aap apne two sabdo ka yahaan yogdaan karenge.

Aapne hume Apna parichay nahi diya. Humara naam Beenz hai. Yahaan sabse sundar kavitayen likhni waali ka naam shruti hai.

1

Reply

Quote

ImJia29

@ImJia29

Navigator

11

Posted: 11 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: twisted_beenz

Bahot khoob..!!
Hamein aapka ye andaz pasand aaya..!!!
Hum nisandeh (undoubtedly) aake ye vichar ka abhivadan karte h..!!
Hume aise varta-lap karne me bahot aanand aa raha h..!!
Hahaha..!!


Bohot bohot abhaar aapko yeh soot pasand aa raha hai. Aapka swagat hai aur aasha kartein hain ki aap apne two sabdo ka yahaan yogdaan karenge.

Aapne hume Apna parichay nahi diya. Humara naam Beenz hai. Yahaan sabse sundar kavitayen likhni waali ka naam shruti hai.

Ji hamara naam Jigna hai..
Aur Shama kijiega..
Hum kavita to kya do shabd bhi nahi likh paege..
Hume kavita banana nahi aata..
vo to yeh soot pasand aati isilie aapki tarif ki..
Firse Shama chahte hai..!!

2

Reply

Quote

shrutijest.

@shrutijest.

Dazzler

20

Posted: 11 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: lovejia29

Aapne hume Apna parichay nahi diya. Humara naam Beenz hai. Yahaan sabse sundar kavitayen likhni waali ka naam shruti hai 😳 BEENZIE 🤗

Ji hamara naam Jigna hai..
Aur Shama kijiega..
Hum kavita to kya do shabd bhi nahi likh paege..
Hume kavita banana nahi aata..
vo to yeh soot pasand aati isilie aapki tarif ki..
Firse Shama chahte hai..!!

Jigna😊

Kavita likhna zaroori nahi hai

jo man ko bhaaye wohi sahi hai...

humare is hasya abhiyaan mein

keval hindi sarvshresth rahi hai!

Edited by shrutijest. - 11 years ago

1

Reply

Quote