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Nandhakishore

@shiningstar77

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: Ramya05
Naan ketkuradhu Romba jaasthi dhaan... Eppo next update?

hihi...naanum itha ketkanumnu irunthen...eppo sis?😆😃

Edited by shiningstar77 - 11 years ago

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anithu

@amrithatec

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Episode 4

Present..

Place:Karthik's home..

Vishnu:Enna lachu...karthik dooraaae open panna matraaan..Oru velaaa nalla thoongitaano..

Lakshmi:No Vishnu..For the past two years..Karthik...5AMkae elundiruvaaan...Morning walking ellam mudichittu ready agitirupaaan..

Vishnu:Ennamo edikudhey...

Lakshmi:Seri..Karthik mobilekku call panen..

Vishnu:Time 8.30AM agiruchu...innum enna panraaan..Paaru lachu..Mobile switch off..

Lakshmi:Hey Vishnu..Door openaa dhaan iruku..

Vishnu:Seri vaaa...Karthik roomku poi enna panraanu papom..

Lakshmi:Hmm..Something fishy..

Vishnu and Lakshmi are shocked to see KR sleeping in same room and that too holding their hands..

Lakshmi:Dei vishnu ennadaa idhu..

Vishnu:Kedi indhaa Karthik naaa..adhavidaaa.jilaaa kediyaa irukaa indhaa raji..Seri vaaa elupalaaam..

Lakshmi:Chee podaaa..Ennaku vekaamaaa irruku..😃😃

Vishnu:Paraaa..lachukku kooda vekkam varudhu 😆😆..Seri Seri..edhuvum thappaaa nadandhirukadhu..Vaaa elupalam..Dei karthik...Elundirupaaa..Unaaapaakaaa..Unnoda nanbargal vishnu , lachu vandirukaaga...mattrum..mokaaa chami..vandirukangaa..elundhirupaaa..Raji...Elundirumaaa...😆😆😆

Karthik Starts to Murmer:Chaa..oru manusaan thoonga kooda nimadhi ilaaa..Indha loosunga...kanavulaaa kooda disturb panna vandirukku..

Vishnu:Lachu andhaaa romantic heroine aaa koncham eluppi paaru..

Lakshmi:Raji 8.45AM agudhu...office kku pogavendaam..eludhirudee..

Raji starts to Murmer:Chaaa..Thoongakoodaa...vidradhilaaa..Eppaparu..indha vishnukkum lakshmi veraa velayae ilaaa..Oruthi thoongaralae..disturb pannromenae ilaaa..Imsaaa..

Vishnu:Lachu..Poi andhaaa..Alarm box aa idu..Sevulu piyuraamadiri...avangaa kaadhulaa vekkalam..

Karthik wakes up after hearing alarm sound slowly..Eventually raji too wakes up...

Karthik:Dei...neeyum..lakshmiyum inga eppidi..

Vishnu:Dei...unna nanum lachuvum oru one houraaa elupittu irrukom..

Lakshmi:Enna raji nee..nee eppidi karthik veetlaaa..

Raji:Yen...naaan karthik veetuku varakoodadhaaa..edhu ennoda veedu..

Karthik:Ingaa paaru...olungaaa...ennoda bed roomlaa irundhu poo..Elaaa ingaaa oru kolaaavilum..

Raji:Enna karthik...Night fulaaa enna hug pannidhanae thoongunaaa..Yen morning laaa kovapadraaa..

Vishnu:Machaan..What a scene da..What a Perfect position you both in..

Karthik:Dei vishnu..venaaam..

Vishnu:Enna...Vennaam..valikudhu..adhanae..Dei..idhulaa ennada irruku..You both loved each other..You both...

Karthik:Stop it vishnu..Neenga ninaikuraa madiri edhuvum thappaa nadakkulaaa..

Raji:Amaaan vishnu...Eppidi irrukaamaaa kattipidichittu irundhom oru one hour..Appram...Dho..eppidi ooti naan karthikku food koduthaen..Apppram...Ayyoyo ennaku vekkamaaa varudhu

Lakshmi:Adapavagalaaa..Vishnu...lets get out from here...

Vishnu:Amaaa lakshmi...Rendu perum...office kku inimae inniku varuvaangaanu think panna namaa dhaan muttalungaa..

Karthik:Raji..yen ippidi kadaaakatti vidraaa..

Raji:appo namakulaa edhuvum nadakulaanu solriyaaa..

Karthik:Amaaan..

Raji:Engaa ennoda kannapaathu sollu..

Karthik:Dei vishnu...ivalaaa ingaa irundhu pogaaa solraaa..

Vishnu:Nadikadhaa daaa...Naangaa office kku kelamburoom..

Karthik:Appo naaan..

Lakshmi:Inimae nee kelambi onnum kelikaavendaam..

Karthik:Ennaku bore adikumae..

Vishnu:Mudiyalaaa Sami..

Raji:Ennakum bore adikkum..adhuvum..ennoda Manager..Gautham..enna lunchkku vara sonnarae..

Karthik:Enna sonaaa..

Vishnu whispers to lakshmi:Hey vaa lachu eguralaaam..Idhungalaaa nambaamudiyadhu...

Raji:Onnum illayae..Gauthamaaa pakaanum nu sonnaen..

Karthik:Yaraakettu andhaa gautham kitaaa nee lunchkku varaennu sonaaa..

Raji:Unnaku edhukku sollanum..

Karthik:Yennaaa naaan unnodaa...

Raji:Yeen neeruthitaaa..Sollu..Nee yeeen..

Karthik:Ingaa paaru...Nee andhaa gautham kooda lunchkku pogaa koodadhu...

Raji:Ponaaa enna pannuvaaa..

Karthik:Unna ennavenaalum pannuvaen..Ennaku ella rightsuum irruku..

Raji:Appidiyaaa..

Karthik:Ingaa vaaa..

Raji:Varamataen...Neee adipaaa..

Karthik:Ennaku unmelaaa kovamdhaaan..Anaaa..naan promise pannirukaen..unna endhaaa situationlaayum...ella problemslaaayum kapathuvennu..Ennoda kadamayae dhaan naan seiyaraen..So listen what i say..U got it..

Raji:Ingaavayae..Naan onnum pannamataen..

Suddenly Raji touch his cheeks with her silky hair and Karthik goes romantic by closing his eyes..Raji suddenly kiss him hardly..and whispers to karthik...Karthik first so mesmerized to hear and never replies and starts to touch her..but ina fraction of second comes back to normal..

Raji:karthik..You look so romantic..

Karthik:Loosaa neee..vekkamaa ilaaa..

Raji:edhukku vekkapadanum..nee yennoda iniyavanaa achaae..Seri i wont talk with gautham..but promise me..

Karthik:edhukku..

Raji:Promise pannu solraen..

Karthik:Nee sonnadhaan promise pannuvaen..

Raji:Nee eppavum..ennavittu pogamataennu..

Karthik's(Mindvoice):Raji how many times you make mistake..how many times you betray me..cheat me..Ennalaa..unnaa verukkaa mudiyalaa..Unnalaaa..i lost so many relationships..But ennodaa poruppunu unmelaa irruku..I just madly in love with you..There were days i was praying you to be lovable with me..But you were so ignorant..Enna achu unnaku..Why you came to me after two years..

Raji's(Mind Voice):Karthik neee ennadhaan ennaa verukuraa madiri act pannalum..Unakku elladhaaa urimaiyaaa..I wont leave you at any cast..Soon ennoda kadhal mannan karthikaa nee maruvaaa...I know this..Naaan nightfulaaa thoongalaa..nee en kaiaa pidichittu irundhadhu ennaku theriyum..

Karthik:Seri vaa kelambalaaam..

Raji:engaaa..

Karthik:unaaa veetlaa drop panraen..

Raji:Naaan endhaa veetlaayum ilaaa..

Karthik:Pinaaa..lakshmi kooda irukiyaaa..

Raji:Ippadhaan unnaku kekanumnu thonichaaa..

Karthik:Seri where are you staying..

Raji:PG laa karthik..

Karthik:PG laa yae yen...

Raji:Ennakudhaan yarumae illayae karthik...

Raji starts crying..

Karthik:Raji...inga paaru...naan oruthaan dhaan irukaen laaa..

Raji:Unnaku dhaan enna pidikalae..

Karthik:adhukaagaaa..Nee onnum PGlaa ellam irukaa vendaaam..

Raji:Appram veraa engaaa thanguradhu..

Karthik:Yaarum thappaaa pesaamataangaaa..enkoodavae irruku..

Raji is so excited...

Raji:Nejamaaa..

Karthik:Amaaa..anaaa..thani thani room laaa..

Raji:Yen orae room laa irundhaa enaaa..

Karthik:Thappu illanalum..venaaam..

Raji:Seri..naaan kelamburaen..

Karthik:Iru naaanum varen..Unnoda luggagesaa pack panni..ingaa kondu vandiru...vaaa polaaam..

Raji:Seri karthik..

While KR in bike...Karthik starts remembering the past..

It is finally the award winning function in Ciber Tech after 1.5yrs KR and VL joined..

Keshav(HR Global Head):Hi Friends..I am so happy to announce that..Karthik..Raji has got the rocking team members award and Individual Contribution award of the entire Department..We are so happy to welcome them..Vishnu and Lakshmi you have been awarded as the best active team members of the Department..Please come to the stage..Karthik and Raji...Speak something about your journey in Ciber Tech..Please..

Karthik:First of all..I am so thankful and Grateful to my Reporting Manager..Vikram who motivated me and brought me here..Each day was pleasent and joyful like my college days and i was excited to be hear which is because of my two friends..vishnu and lakshmi..Next..Each day was lovable and meaningful to my special friend...Raji...Alias Raja Lakshmi..Next..I am so grateful to HR Team members who made me comfortable everytime..

Keshav:Raji..Please..It is your turn now..

Raji:I am the happiest person in the world..I am actually born in a small village and when i entered this office..i never though i would survive even for a day..I thank each and every collegue of mine who was helpful in making me successful and responsible to get this award..My Reporting Manager..Kalyan..He is like my father..Whatever mistakes i do..blunder i commit..he is my rolemodel of how to move forward in life..Especially my friends..Vishnu and Lakshmi..they are more than my friends..Whatever frustration..happy moments..they are my shoulders..

Karthik..I become so emotional telling about him..In our life some people stays till our school days..Some till college days..Some till office hours ends in evening..But My Karthik..He will be with me...life long..My Life..He has seen all my days..Worries..Sadness..Happiness.much more...He is more than everything to me..Ennaku...vazhakayaa..eppidithaan vazhanumnu sollikodthuthadhu..ennoda karthik..Thank you karthik..For everything..I dedicate this award to my Karthik..

Karthik:Raji..Please..Dont be emotional..Thank you and friends..Raji is my special..She is everything to me..Thanks for bringing her in office..Love you all..

Vishnu:I dont have words to tell anything..Like Karthik , Raji...I am blessed to be here...Even though i am not good at studies..My friends..KRL taught me to be serious..dedicated and mainly my Project Manager..Menaka..She is like my sister..Akkaaa..I dedicate this award to you...

Lakshmi:Ennakum enna solradhunae theriyalaa..After my mother..My three friends are my everything..This office is more than anything to me..This is like my home..I am blessed..proud to be a part of this office..I dedicate this award to all my friends..K, R,L..

Keshav:Ok friends..Lets enjoy the party we have arranged..Be comfortable and enjoy..

Vishnu:Machaan..eppidi daaa..

Karthik:edhaaa solraaa..

Vishnu:nee yum rajiyum edho..special special nnu chorus paadneengalae..adhaa sonnae..udanae act pannuviyae..

Lakshmi:Karthik Stop your acting man..Come on..Propose raji..This is the perfect time..

Keshav:Come on friends..Lets have the lunch with cocktail party..

Lakshmi:Vishnu...Ennaa appidi paakuraaa..

Vishnu:Your eyes says many things Lakshmi..

Lakshmi:You are also more than a friend to me vishnu..

Vishnu:Lakshmieee...

Lakshmi:Vazhiyadhaaa..Vaadaa polaaam...

Precap:

Karthik propose raji by giving her a ring in a romantic place..Stay tuned of what raji response is...Will Karthik love cross all the hurdles and join?What really happened to raji and her family..Why karthik feels so betrayed to his lady love..Stay tuned until monday..

Edited by anithu - 11 years ago

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veda

@sizzling78

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#43

haiyaa me the first 😛 😆

i just luved ur update anithu ur plot of story is so different 👏👏

KR pavom pasanga avangalaliye avangala control pannika mudiyala 😆😳

VL pahh semma timing entry 🤣 adhuvum andha alarm semma comedy dhaan 😆

wow waiting for ur next part eagerly this weekend i will stay happy by ur updates thnks 😉

Edited by sizzling78 - 11 years ago

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muthucheenu

@muthucheenu

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Chanceless, nice build up about the past. What happened? did Raji walk out of the marriage on the day of their wedding or something? Looking forward to the next.

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anithu

@amrithatec

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#45

@All:I am so overwhelmed by your comments..

This is ultimately different KR , VL and small spoiler for you People..

Susan arrival and Gautham Arrival on the way..

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ammukuty

@ammukuty

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Nice part ani oh oh Susan abs gowtham 😭

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Nandhakishore

@shiningstar77

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Ani sis,sema supera iruku update...

VL pavam,one houra elupikittu irukanga KRa😆...

but enaku pidichathe,when raji said,naan gauthamoda lunchuku poganumnu.,karthikoda kovam en munnadi vanthu ninuchu.😳..

karthik..parra...pogakudthunu bayangara orderlam panran...so sweet😛...

karthiku rajimela avalavu anbu iruke,appuram raji en appadi pannu theriyala...

precap sounds very interseting sis😛...

thanks for the pm...i am very happy with this different story...thank u😃

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Nandhakishore

@shiningstar77

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: anithu

Susan arrival and Gautham Arrival on the way..

appadiya,varatum,varatum...but enaku oru problemum illai...becoz u r moving the story in a very nice way👏...KRku enna nadanthalum,neenga irukeengala...then why to worry😉

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Lily Padawattar

@plily

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#49

Nice update anithu sis. Sema comedy with Karthik & Raji. I think we wont know the reason for Karthik behavior for time being. Moreover the villain and villis are on the way with twist and turn of the story. But love the care and concern Karthik have for Raji. Thanks for pm dear.