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Yay and Congratulations wala RES ⭐️
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Did I mention how glad I am that my lady ASR finally decided to write a story for us. The only thing that was stopping me from pestering you to write was your crazy work-life balance and now for you to fit this in as well, Gosh you truly are a super woman!👏
What can I say about the prologue, it is just amazing. No one will be able to tell that this is your first writing venture and what a venture too! I Love, Love, Love a corporate setting for romance, it is just so exciting! On top of that you made Khushi so freaking relate-able it is not funny! I love her already!
The opening scene with Khushi running reminded me of Kal ho na ho with PZ running in the very first scene, it is then and there that I got intrigued and completely immersed in what you were describing. Props for the very vivid description of everything woman!
Your Khushi is confident, smart and independent. It is quite clear that something happened in the her past that she doesn't want to talk about. She loves her parents, wants to see them happy and at the same time seems to share a close bond with her father! ( I can so totally relate to that as well).
She joins Arnav's company, has an interview with them and Khushi being Khushi cannot help but fall in Arnavji's arms from the get go and we get ourselves the staring session. I was already imagining the great big pause as Arnav steadies Khushi and looks into her eyes while Khushi is too busy admiring her new boss!
I cannot cannot wait to see what transpires next, bring it on whenever you can Jigs!
PS. *sniff* where is the OS that didn't make it to the forum! Why don't I have the link?!💔
Anupamaa
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