# Asya FF- If she only knew ( CHAPTER 3-UPDATED 27/6)

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PrettYSmile

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Posted: 11 years ago

#171

Hii naushi...interesting concept!!... Loved both the parts...

I guess asad has come up with a marriage proposal for zoya... Don't know... Let's c...

Sorryyy couldn't read your other story's last parts...was kinda busy...jz saw this concept... N its really interesting...

Looking forward to the next happenings. ..do continue... Its nice. 👏 😊

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Naughty-Noshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#172

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sj_qh_kabhi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#173

Awsum update .. lovd it..!! :)
Lookin forward to nxt part..;)

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jas91

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Posted: 11 years ago

#174

finally res😆

unres

fantastic updt Noshi 👏

i thought u'll take another week 2 updt😆

it was really nicely penned⭐️

but ye car journey khatam hi nahi hone ko aa rahi😆

Humi is missing Zoya but Guffi makes her understand that they should start getting habitual of living widout her.😊

Asad is still in his admiring session but Zoya is getting bored😳

she surely is an adorable kid.

Allah miyan ye ladki kitna soti hai😲🥱

Asad was teasing Zoya about Humi😆

" humaira. My hummy darling."

Zoya is so childish 😆 hun! She twists her mouth to side with a soft growl.

Asad was singing Babuji dhire chalna song🤣

" What are you doing to me zoya?" he smiled inwardly as his heart replied to him "Inamorato Asad.."Iska kya meaning hai😳🤔

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jas91

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Posted: 11 years ago

#175

1 more😛

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Heena

@aarzoo50

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Posted: 11 years ago

#176

lovely update noshi...
gafoor is practicing to b away frm his elder daughter...
bcz one day she has to leave...
and their the journey is neva ending
a lil comfort level achieved between the two ...
fimally they reached the district but thn asad declared that the car broke down... jhoota kahi ka...
waiting for more

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Naughty-Noshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#177

Originally posted by: cutie15
Awsum update .. lovd it..!! :)
Lookin forward to nxt part..;)

hey thanks 😃
And congratz for being my first reader to comment. 😳
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jas91

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Posted: 11 years ago

#178

Originally posted by: Naughty-Noshi
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Originally posted by: Naughty-Noshi
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khud hi res kar rahi hai tu reader hai ke writer Noshi🤣

Pehle decide kar le😆

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jas91

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Posted: 11 years ago

#179

Originally posted by: Naughty-Noshi
i have wriiteen it but some one very kind told me that she found last update a little boring and i appreciate her truth and shayad this may be the reason why i have direct loss of 20 readees suddenly. Isliye i am keeping patient bwfore i post 😳

are yaar new story hai toh time toh lagega na popular hone main😉

aur last part bilkul boring nahi tha interesting tha Asad's admiring Zoya I loved that😃

but yeh part infact thoda thanda tha cuz journey katam hone ka naam hi nahi le rahi

its good story but don'tt stretch it where not necessary like this journey witch took 3 long parts😲😆

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aYASHIKA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#180

Awesome update..
Loved each and every bit of it...
So gaffur is trying to be away from his elder daughter
Asad is admiring zoya and she is getting hell bored...
Zoya is so cute and adorable...
Zoya is such a sleepyhead
They like each other company...
Song choice is nice...
Zoya complimented asad...
Beautifully written. .
Update soon