IF ONLY I COULD TELL...( A HARSHIKA SS)S3

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Discliamer: This is purely a work of fiction created by people who have no ulteroir motive .It was created for fun nd frolic by my best buddy on twitter-Kung Fu(real name withheld) and i'am just posting this on IF bcoz she does'nt have an A/C. Both of us are aware that whether they want to nor they don't want 2 be together is solely their choice and if this work hurts the sentiments of the readers then we are extremely sorry...😊
Acknowledgement:Though this ida sprang out of our daily covos on twitter ,but the credit goes to Kung Fu..because she gave shape 2 our ideas,nd took the effort 2 pen them down..luv u sweetie !😃

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CHAPTER 1...

The sets of Colors Flagship and Young Love story Beintehaa was focused; busy and chaotic with a cacophony of the collective sounds of people drowning director Maan Singh's voice as he was setting up our beloved ZAYA (acronym for Zain and Aliya).

The past few days had been problematic as the ensuing fight between the labour force and trade unions indirectly offered all the artists some blessing in disguise in the form of a week's holiday which is certainly a blessing when you are daily soap actor and work like maniacs 20 hours a day for 7 days a week

The shoot had resumed today and many canned scenes had to be shot as the channel needed fresh telecasts, fans too were Super excited to watch a new episodic of Beintehaa after a LONG wait.

The scene was in the Blue painted, love paradise of ZAYA Their beloved bedroom and literally their territory where the fight, make up, break up, make plans, romance and give the audiences a healthy dosage of what we call ZAYA scenes to go berserk over.

Harshad (Zain) is sitting on his bed in a red tshirt and dark blue track pants waiting for his costar/friend Preetika to come. The director explains him that the scene is where Zain is convincing Aliya to stay back in Barkat villa and ignore Suraiyya begum's piercing words about Aliya and her parents.

Though Aliya has immense amount of respect and reverence for Suraiyya , she has reached her point of saturation and cannot tolerate Suraiyya's hatred towards "bhopalis" anymore and asks her to leave the house

Aliya , though Deeply and truly loves her husband Zain, Loves her self-pride and respect in equal measure. She cannot forget How Suraiyya had unabashedly slandered and slaughtered her character infront of the entire family and accused her of having an extra marital affair with Zubair her childhood friend/cousin and today she had done it again but this time she crossed all the limits accusing her of being partners with Zubair in attempting to murder her beloved Mamu Osman Saab

Harshad had the script in his hand, learning his lines he asked Spot boy for Preetika "Madam baal set karke aa rahi hai" he replied as he served him his favourite cup of green tea

He sipped some warm green tea as he was memorizing his lines, but his mind was wandering elsewhere. His Heart was constantly battling with his mind and causing an emotional tumoil within him the heat caused by the constant friction reflected in his hot cup of green tea J

He had actually been sad when the channel informed him that all the artists would be getting a few days owing to the labour force strike. Ideally he should have been happy as a holiday is rare for actors as they work round the clock. Normally he would have planned a trip to his home in Delhi, spending some time with his family and friends but he denied his mother's invitation and quickly came up with a puerile excuse.

In the few days of his holiday he had actually missed Preetika immensely! Her Benign smile, her LadyLike demeanor, her laughing at his asinine jokes and sharing her coconut curry and rice with him. He had missed her, he really had J

In the few days of his "mini holiday" he mostly hung out with his onscreen mother Suchitra pillai occasionally hanging out with her and gunjan (Nafisa Bhabhi) over dinners and house parties. Suchi Mam is deeply fond of Harshad and has actually graduated from playinh his onscreen mother to his real life counselor/advisor/wellwisher/confidante and God mother.

She sensed the raging turmoil in his heart and was quick to realize that he nurtures some romantic feelings for Preeitka and playing onscreen lovers, he has actually fallen for her J she was elated thinking about it, for she knew Preetika is a wonderful person and they will make for a beautiful couple she discussed this with Gunjan who was happy to know her onscreen brother inlaw has developed feelings for his reel wife for real and they secretly planned to pitch them together. Harshad being blissfully unaware of his "mom's" plans J

He had NEVER been in love, except for Fancy cars and exciting Video Games which every guy is :P he had never been in love. He was not the Casanova kind of a guy, inspite of being blessed with Drop dead Gorgeous Looks, sharp features, a tall stature, a sexy and husky baritone and a charming Smile to complete his "Greek God Looks" status. Women had unabashedly flirted with him, hit on him and some even proposed Marriage and he politely refuted all advances made towards him

"I need my kind of a Girl" he had always thought and funnily he himself had no clue of his "type" till he met Preetika when they had jointly auditioned for Beintehaa.

He fondly remembered seeing her for the first time, A fairly tall girl with Brownish hair cascading over her delicate frame and a pleasant smile to complete it J she looked no less than a Barbie doll in her orange coloured top and Loose maroon colored harem pants with just a hash of rose coloured tint on her creamy skin J she looked Cute and Beautiful J

He liked her and her good nature and intelligent self-complimented her exterior beauty J he smiled to himself as he fondly recollected her when his train of thoughts broke off by a sudden interruption, it was director Maan "Zain Zain" he called out in quick succession and Harshad got up on his toes, the director needed to change the camera settings and so he had to vacate his spot.

Preetika arrived in the next 20 Minutes profusely apologizing everyone for being late "The blow dryer had stopped working" she cited and quickly grabbed her script to rehearse her lines. Harshad pretended as if he dint see her coming but he checked her from the corner of his eye. She wore a long sea blue colored Anarkali with some exquisite embroidery on the borders and a white colored dupatta perfectly accessoring her look. Her Hair, a shade of chocolate brown caressing her porcelain skin delicately, the liner highlighted her doe eyes as she struggled to memorize her lines. They have a certain undefinable sparkle to them. Alluring and sensual, with a touch of mischief. He found himself smiling again

"Don't harshad" He rebuked himself, their love nest was ready, and they occupied their positions ready to shoot.

"Zain main tumse bohot Pyaar karti hu par kabhi kabhi sirf beintehaa mohabbat kaafi nahi hoti kisi Rishte ko mukkamal karne ke liye aur main kitni bhi koshish karlu mami mujhse aura ammi-abbu se hamesha nafrat karti hai. Pehle unhe mujhpe aur Zubbu pe shak hua ki hamara koi affair hai aaj uhone mujh par mamu ko maarne ki koshish karne ka ilzaam lagaya hai. Tume bataou main kaise bardasht karoon. Main yahan nahi reh sakti, mera yahn se chale jana hi behtar hoga" Aliya said as she looked at Zain her eyes welled up with tears threatening to flow after a pregnant pause she held his face in her palms are touched her forehead with his, their lips inches away and breathing into each other she continued "Maine sirf tumse Pyaar kiya hai aur kisi se nahi aur naa hi main kabhi kisi aur se karu paungi, tum meri ibaadat ho mera jahaan" she said as tears streamed down her eyes mildy washing away some kajal off her eyes.

A Sudden sensation surged through his body as if someone slapped him hard on his face, he felt something different, something strange, his knees went jelly and his heart was pounding against his ribs the oscillations of which could be heard inches away too.

He backed a bit and looked deep into her eyes again and said "I LOVE YOU" and after a moment "Aliya". He gently took her tiny palms into his his hand and kissed it and went down on his knees and said

"Aliya maine bhi sirf aur sirf tumse pyaar kiya hai, sacchhi mohabbat. Tumse hi din hai aur raatein subah aur sham tumse hi toh Zain hai varna mera koi Vajood nahi hai, tumhare bina mere koi mayne nahi main tumhare bina nahi jee sakta" he spoke and halted to realize he too has been crying as if competing with her tears J they hugged each other as if they would never let each other go "Mat jao Aliya Yahan Accha lag raha hai" he mildly pleaded as his chin rested on her shoulders "Isliye jaana padega" She whispered in his ears and they Hugged tighter and the scene was cut!

"Brilliant! Superb! Awesome!" The director used up all the possible adjectives from his word bank :p "this is fantastic and audiences will love it <3" he declared and the shoot halted for a break.

Suchi Mam was standing behind the camera watching the scene, she made a quick eye contact with gunjan who gave a "I Know what you are talking about" kind of a smile back J They knew it was Not Zain speaking But Harshad professing of his feelings for Preetika J Preetika got up to have some snacks "Harshad lets go" she asked him to join her, he sat there motionless with tears flowing down his cheeks continually. She was quick to realize something was wrong "are u okay?" she asked in a concerned voice putting her hand on his shoulder "Ya Iam Good" he hastily replied without making any eye contact with her. He wiped his tears and scolded himself saying that she was his co actor and friend and nothing more and he needs to focus on his work and put a full stop to these irrelevant feelings. He perhaps feared losing her friendship if he crossed the limit!

He realized he needs to keep away from her he decided to ignore her!!

-Kung Fu

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ALL THE CHAPTER HAVE BEEN UPDATED(1 - 5 )😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aww Harshu 's inner turmoil makes me want to reach out to him. Just a few days ago I was dying to read something on HarshIka and you fulfilled my wish so thank you for that. I just love the special bond that Suchi mam and Harshad share and I am glad she understand his feelings for Preetika. The best part was that she and Gunjan teamed up to help them confess. Can't wait to read what Pree feels about him, does she feel the same way for him and she is also afraid about ruining their friendship. I so wish this happens in real some time because they seem so perfect for each although the ultimate choice is in their hands but I can hope na. Well all I know is that try as hard as he can Harshad can't stay away from Preetika at least not with Suchitra mam and Gunjan in the picture. Please pm me when you continue (which I hope is soon) and thank you so much again😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank u so much for writing something harshIka ...
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pls continue it seems so real nd true ur wrds r so naturak nd realistic
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Hey guys...thanks a lot for all your lovely comments and support..So here is the new chapter of IF ONLY I COULD TELL..love u all❤️

He decided to ignore her...he didn't want to risk his friendship with her and ofcourse Beintehaa, which was their HEART <3 for he knew if things get awkward between them then it will ruin the show and eventually its viewership

He rushed to his make up room like a lightning, quickly opened thr tab and splashed some cool water over his face repeatedly to wash down his salty tears and eventually the friction causing between his head and heart. Suchi mam had seen him rush to the make up room and followed him quickly she called out to him "Harsh, Harsh U Okay?" she enquired. There was No Response for a few minutes, crease lines of worry appeared on her tanned skin she was about to call out to him again when he opened the door with a brave smile across his face

"Hi Maa" he said trying to sound his jovial best J "she caressed his face gently and asked "are u okay Harshu" she loved to call him Harsh, Harshu or Harshey . She called him "Harshad", by his full name only when she was angry/upset with him :P

"Ya Maa, am all cool" he replied and said "literally" and burst out laughing as he pointed towards his wet tshirt. She didn't smile in response for she knew the emotive mayhem he was going through, she felt helpless almost sorry and promised herself to get them together no matter what.

"Maa" he called out as he realized she was lost in the sea of her own thoughts. "yes Harsh am there" she put up a hasty smile as the exited the make up room and headed to the shoot.

Pree was talking to Vivek and Naved sir and the 3 were chatting away to glory as they shared some snacks amongst themselves.

He watched her and wondered to himself as to how can someone look so stunning while munching on snacks he wanted to grab her and plant a kiss but he reminded himself about "Mission Ignore Mamu ki bhanji MKB:p"

"Lets go Preetika, we need to complete our scenes" he said strictly without looking at her, for the first time since his one sided love he had called her by her full name usually he called her "Pree" or "Aliya/Preetikaji" but she didn't notice that at all and left with him to complete their scenes

The next hour, the shot their scenes without any disturbances. He was trying his best to bring his wandering heart back on track. She too failed to notice anything about him.

In the next hour they had the fans and the media waiting for them J the fans( Mostly teenaged girls) had come to meet their venerated ZAYA and the media was curious to know about the future track of the show.

"Preetika and Harshad ek byte please" one female reporter called out to them for a joint interview. He quickly rushed to meet his fans leaving Preetika alone to deal with the swarm of press and photographers. He felt terrible, he had never done this to her. He had always accompanied her for all their interviews and recollected all the fun leg pulling they indulged in...but he had to stay true to "Mission Ignore MKB". He spotted a few girls who were going gaga over him confessing how much theylove him, find him hot and sexy and would love to marry him. He smiled sheepishly but obliged each girl with photographs and autographs and involuntary sessions of hugs and "selfies" :P

While Preetika finished her interviews. She was disappointed. "How could Harshad do this to me" she said to herself, she was angry but consoled herself thinking its too trivial a matter to ponder upon. In the next 30 minutes the fans and the Paparazzi left!

They resumed shoot, it was a long day and a long night too. Though the idea of being with her made him happy he couldn't blab his "mission".

The rest of the time they had scenes with the entire cast, with a good dose of drama, tears and dialouges.

They next took a break only to have their dinner at 9.30. Suchi mam had got Harshad his favorite pasta which he savored a lot "Maa, thank you I love you" as he extended both his arms forward to give her a big tight bear hug. Pree smiled at this camaraderie for she knew the amazing rapport Harshey shared with his maa and how he LOVED the food made by her.

"That is not all, Harshad" she said "I have got you your favourite chocolate brownies too" she added grinning for she knew he LOVED brownies and would gorge onto them shamelessly bothering least about his chiseled physique for once.

"Ummm No thanks Preetika" he said with a straight face and immediately felt penitent for his words. Pree was shocked!!!!! Her jaws dropped as she exclaimed a "WHAAAT" she was astounded for she knew that he could never reject Pasta and Brownies. Gunjan , made a feeble attempt and hastily said "He is on a diet. He needs to maintain his physique. What if he has to go shirtless tomorrow and doesn't have a desirable body. Girls wont watch Beintehaa then" she said and everyone laughed. Pree smiled back but she sensed that something was fishy for sure.

The rest of the evening was eventless; they completed their shoots by 5am and left for home only to report back on the sets by noon the same day! She drove all the way home, she was restless and agitated. Her friend/costar had behaved so bizarrely at the dinner table. He had refused Brownies. She couldn't digest this. She stopped the car by the sea, her favourite place, her companion guide friend and philosopher in times of jollity and distress. The sea waves tossed her hair in all directions as she occupied a flat stone and let the salt waters trickle between her toes.

"Why Why?" was the only question that was running across her mind. She felt weird and heavy in her heart. She quickly recollected the events of the day. It came back in lightning speed as to how he left her in a lurch in front of the media, how he had refused his favorite brownies when normally he would nudge her to bring him more and how he had been calling her "Preetika" the full day as he always called her various names but never her full name.

Her eyebrows knit close to one another as the sea waves banged hard against the granite rocks like how her feelings against her heart. The orange-golden colored sun rose in the sky as the birds chirruped away to merry. It was 7am. She got up to leave. She drove away quietly.

She decided to seek an explanation from him for his sudden "irresponsible and cold behavior" . She barged onto the sets and held his hand and dragged him away a little further, away from the spotlight.

"What is the matter with you"? She asked in a dogmatic tone in a nononsense way. He looked at her puzzled and replied nonchalantly "Nothing" "No" she almost screamed at him." I Demand an explanation Harshad, Why have You Been behaving so immaturely. Have I done something wrong to you ?" her voice almost breaking away. He felt culpable. He would have embraced her delicate frame into his sturdy arms and kissed away her tears but he held back.

"Preetika" he said calmly "Iam Okay" he made a conscious effort to have a eyecontact with her and aslo put up a rather unconvincing smile.

"Listen You are an actor on camera not in real life" she shot back angrily "and if you don't wish to tell then upto you". She said and left the spot. She jostled towards her make up room without speaking to anyone.

She sat on the chair with a thud, her eyes red due to the tears and her nostrils flared in rage "I Will never speak to him again. Who is he? Costar? I Don't care about him" she soliloquized to herself and suddenly realized something was wrong. Why was she feeling so bad? He had always been a costar J a cooperative and thoroughly professional actor; he had always been a fantastic person to work with. Always at his wittiest best cracking jokes and entertaining the cast and crew with his monkey antics.

She recalled how he had always made her comfortable everytime she was anxious about any closeup romantic scenes like a doctor convincing a child to take an injection, she smiles J her million dollar smile lit up the room and the emptiness of her heart J

But why was he affecting her so much? Was she harbouring any romantic feelings for him? Did she feel anything for him? She sat there dumbfounded a film of all their onffscreen moments playing on the mirror adjacent to hers.

"Preetika madam" a gruff voice called out to her and the film of moments stopped abruptly. "Aap ready ho kya? Maan sir bula rahe hai" he spoke.

"Haan bas 5 minute mein aayi" she let out a muffled scream from across the room as she realized she bad been sitting there for almost 20 minutes. She put a break to her thoughts and decided to quickly wear some make up and her outfit and rush out when...

-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Sorry 2 leave u guys with a cliffhanger...but stay tuned tosee what happens next...something is going to happen n dats gonna be the turning point f their relationship😉

Luv u all❤️

- Kung Fu

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Posted: 11 years ago
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I read rhe first part and it was amazing continue dear.update soon
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Loved the 2nd chaptr amazinhly written.loved suchi harsh bond and how pree felt harsh's change.continue
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Brilliant again no words to describe how you expressed their turmoil. But then you had to leave it at a cliffhanger which is really hard for me. You don't know how many times I have stalked your post to see if you updated. I am glad that Pree could notice the changes in Harsh, and Suchi Mam is so sweet how she treats Harsh like her own son. Please continue, I don't know how long I can wait!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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U'll get the next chapter ...as soon as my frnd who is the author f this ss will mail it 2 me...I'm glad that u all r loving it...nd There r many more surprises out there fr u all 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Read both the chapters it was awesome👏
Update the next part soon😛
U r an awesome writer😃
Eagerly waiting for their confession😳

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