*evanescence* SanDhir OS

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hola peeps 😃
its ben a long time since I wrote something on this forums
n I have pending birthday dedications to deliver
so going one at a time
Partner ( - ScaredAngel-)
This one's for u
scroll down for d OS
ps : have patience I'll unres soon 😃
love
Rads
( hope u all remember me 😛 )
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Posted: 11 years ago
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EVANESCENCE
The sun rose taking pride in its vast glory ,beautifying the already spectacular view. She stood by the railing admiring the view ,while I wasn't sure what was more breathtaking the river reflecting the various colors of nature or her smooth fair petite body pressed against mine,or those eyes that sparkled in joy at the sheer site of it all,I just stood,sinking it all in,taking in account the minutest of the details, her infectious smile,those dimpled cheeks ,those doe eyes,the way she held onto me,the way the gentle breeze played with her hair, I captured it all in my mind's canvas , I couldn't just believe she was the same Sanyukta Agarwal who was once my sworn enemy ,I chuckled at the mere thought and her attention got diverted towards me, she raised her right brow
" memories Farzi" I whispered and she returned a hearty laugh..
." Those were the days " she patted my head playfully and ran away...
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Every single morning I wake up and find you smiling at me, we greet each other and head towards the breakfast table , I still cant have enough of you, I still can't stop admiring you, the way you look in those wet tresses , the way you handle the entire company,its always fun to tease you ,to still call you farzi when you do the silliest mistake, I still can't get over your pouted face as you run after me. And when its the end of the day, and its time to wind up, I love to scoop you in my arms and take you to our bedroom..
Mom and Dad were so wrong about marriage, about love,...
"Its beautiful"
Its spring time again, the sun is shone brightly, the river still reflects nature's beauty...
as I stand pressed to you, I feel at peace, its home sweet home...
yet why is everything a blur...
as the days pass...I try remembering everything inch of it ...
the details are slowly blurring...
your face , your smile, your laughter...
is all I have ...please dont Evanasce away so soon from my life...
as that is all I have left
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Randhir Singh Shekhaawat,stood by the riverside,where he'd gone on a honeymoon with his beloved wife Sanyukta Agarwal,as he stood still on the spot they proudly called " their own" reminiscing those times...a paper flew from his hand, a newspaper cutting
" a fatal accident kills one,others in serious condition"
the sun 's still shone brightly,
the birds still chirp around,
the view's still breathtaking...
yet I can't feel you"



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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey dear
Love the update
Written beautifully
Plz keep writing
Take care

Geet
Edited by sweetdesire - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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updated😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ress
Haireee
Tubelight so much loved it
Ittu se mein itta sara jhalak pada
Loved it to the core re tubelight...!
Aapke andar aaj aisa laga jaise
Munshi pyarelal ki aatmaa agyi ho...XD
zyada ho gya right hehehe..!

Love,
Bandar
Edited by Sheron13rokerz - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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My birthday dedication is finally here...and mite I as well add its a tragedy... I luv that genre!! And to think of the one to many OSes I have read on the sadistic genre...I can knw the difference...very few OS touches my heart and eva fewer many me cry...!!!
This one touched my heart...you wrote it without letting go of the optimism that can always been found in your writing...so eva this tragedy was one such that gave u the aching feeling of reading more but also didn't hurt so much...coz of the beautiful memories written in dem!!!
Rads you keep growing as a writer...day by day...eva though they continue to remain short...the quality keeps increases and It holds true for you... Its not the quantity but the quality that matters!
This OS was so remarkably written..it will be one of you best written OSes...!!
The way you started wid randhir think of sanyukta...the description of his memories...perfect...the feeling of in luv was so justified throughout your OS...that it makes me for a change in this OS also see the beauty of it n not the tragedy!!!
Thanku so much for this dedication...one of the best I must say...!!! Luv u for this...!!
Keep writing...now I realize hw much I miss it...!!
Regards
Safrena
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res
Haila safi tu ek he bari mein Kitta likhti hai xD
I'll read once n then unres di.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: angel_anisha

Res

Haila safi tu ek he bari mein Kitta likhti hai xD
I'll read once n then unres di.


Hahahahha its usually my commenting style!!:P
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nd i go speechless
*m on d verge to cry*
rads di dis ws magical
i ws so imagining d beautiful view with him in white-black her in a slight pink

bracing d view n serenity around
bt dat ws just memories wid hr no more
oh dear
i feel sad wen i read a tale wid one of them gone...
Dis ws beautiful yet painful
amazing wrk
lv n hugs
seerat
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -ScaredAngel-

My birthday dedication is finally here.
ya ..finally😃😆😆
..and mite I as well add its a tragedy... I luv that genre!! And to think of the one to many OSes I have read on the sadistic genre...I can knw the difference...very few OS touches my heart and eva fewer make me cry...!!!
I never intended to make to cry😭

This one touched my heart...you wrote it without letting go of the optimism that can always befound in your writing...so eva this tragedy was one such that gave u the aching feeling of reading more but also didn't hurt so much...coz of the beautiful memories written in dem!!!
well u know me..I just cant make anyone cry..
Rads you keep growing as a writer...day by day...eva though they continue to remain short...the quality keeps increases and It holds true for you... Its not the quantity but the quality that matters!
This OS was so remarkably written..it will be one of you best written OSes...!!
OMG!!! thats a huge complement ..thank u so mch😳😳😳
The way you started wid randhir think of sanyukta...the description of his memories...perfect...the feeling of in luv was so justified throughout your OS...that it makes me for a change in this OS also see the beauty of it n not the tragedy!!!
ya..that was the idea..thank God it came out well
Thanku so much for this dedication...one of the best I must say...!!! Luv u for this...!!
Keep writing...now I realize hw much I miss it...!!
trust me girl I miss writing a lot!!!
Regards
Safrena

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