ArHi FF:11:The BEASTS and the BLEEDING ROSES

First Previous

Page

102

Next Last

Frequent Posters

nadiafarjana

@nadiafarjana

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#421

eagerly waiting for next update

Quote

aparnav

@aparnav

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#422

what was that linnie...an emotional chapter,ending with our very own LADY! hmmm...i don't know...i want to read the next asap!!!

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Sutapa Sarbabhom

@sutapasarbabhom

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#423

Lovly updt ling geting imotionam aftr qdading arnav nani convo nw arnav heal by lady lov poor shadow lk faling for lighning god save anjali baby waiting for next part

Quote

Aquiline

@Aquiline

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#424

Originally posted by: Uttara.
awesome yaar.. really liked how arnav is healed and again getting close to his loved ones.. it was such a heart touching moment. And lighting and shadow..wow it was so cute.. Lady Anjali..i'm feeling bad for her someting very bad is going to happen..n lady in hood confirmed my doubt.. n idk why i think ram is going to witness something bad happening to lady anjali.. N i think maybe he'll get his voice back..i really hope it happens.. n lastly thankyou lin to give this update provided the circumstances.. updt soon dear... tc.stay beautiful..!

Dear Uttara, it cheers my heart to see how excited you are about the chapter you read and about those that are about to come...Keep to your seat dear, the story is on its way for you!

Originally posted by: sneharjun92
when arnav n khushi are gonna confess their love for each other. who is that hooded person. when khushis real identity is gonna reveal. it was good update. thanks

Sneha. You are so full of questions, dearie!

Originally posted by: dpriyad
hmm
a lot of things in this narration
let me think over it

😕

*chuckle* Priya! I can see the fumes coming out of your lovely head!!

Originally posted by: sheshnag1952
Wonderful update. Even shadow and lightening are sworn enemies just like their masters. But liked the fact that shadow felt hurt when lightening was wincing with pain. And loved the heart felt talk between lady mother and the first Lord. It's good to see that the first Lord is healing finally because of his live for khushi. Am still scared for anjali. I have a feeling something really bad is going to happen to her. Hope everything goes fine with her. And all of them. Waiting to read more. And thanks for your comments for my last comment. Enjoyed reading it too.

Sheshnag! How are you, dear? Such a sweet reaction to the events in the last chapter...Thank you for always being there, dear.

Originally posted by: lovedrops
Lin...
That is an awesome update... Finally Lord Mother and First Lord talked like Nani and Chotey.. as a grandmother and grandson. OK, so it is Nani's wish to go back to India... And Arnav is fulfilling all the wishes of the family one after the other. And he is taking care of their needs one after the other. And I am so glad that he came to know that he is getting cured by his lady love Khushi. Do he believe now that she is indeed cure.

Green Heart and honeybee... and how well they deserved those names... Fortune is intellegent bird indeed..

Wow... Shadow and Lightening.. their equation is changing,..

Now what is that General planning. Oh my poor Anjali... and the baby in her womb...

Guard the silence as you would your soul. And Ram is going to guard the baby in Anjali's womb... or is it time for baby to come on to the earth.

Very nice chapter Lin... awesome and wonderful..👏

K, I want to first thank you for "liking" and appreciating the comments of the other readers. In a way, you are a better host than me and take care of the Inn even in my absence (which used to be someone else's hobby! *frowns at Cottage door*) But it does always delight me to have you about.

And I so love to see your screws turning to make sense of everything. Loved your appreciation of Lordy full fulling every one's little wishes...

Originally posted by: anusada
HELLO!!!!! A big shout out to LIN and everyone 😊😊
I Know I KNOW it is really very long time that i visited the INN!!!!!
Due to some issues i was not able to get my account and though i was not regular i did follow some updates and what more i can say than they are as usual beautiful!!!!😊
You have the power to capture our hearts and make them flutter with your writings LIN!!!
I am grateful for finding this story and will never leave without reading it no matter what!!!
From now i hope i will be regular when you are narrating the story!!!
I so want to sit beside you in the cozy inn with a chocolate drink and listen to you narrating this beautiful tale😉
Kudos to you for writing such an amazing piece!!!!!👏👏
I am eagerly waiting to read all the parts from the start again!! Now i will start reading and make sure will reach till present by the next narration!!!!!
I really did miss our very own General Jha's chapters!!! I hope i get to read them now 😊
And not to forget the depth each character has and also is connected to every other character!!!!
It is possible only to you to get these small things in such a right way👏
Will read and wait for the next chapter😊
P.S: Did i ever mention that i love the name 'AQUILINE"😉

ANUSADA!!! GASP!!!
You're in the Inn??!!! At last!!

How are you dear? Ofcourse, everyone;s waiting to give you a piece of their mind for vanishing without a warning. (But not as much as wanting to handle Sammykins.)

Hope you are well, dear. Its okay if you cant' always make it to the Inn... you must be busy and involved in matters of great importance. But a peep once in a while would cheer this young Storyteller heart, I confess. Tell me when you are going to come next time, so I can as lovedrops to catch a place for you too, by the fireplace. *wink*

Quote

Aquiline

@Aquiline

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#425

Originally posted by: -Farwa_Ibrahim-
I was grinning ear to ear at Shadow. Our big boy has developed feelings for lightening though he appeared to have no idea about it.

Lightning looked up just then, her
expression passive and disinterested
with regard to the black horse.
Huffing, Shadow looked away, Who
does she think she is!

AWWW so this is the problem. He wasn't angry because of who she is he is angry coz she is not giving him any attention. Awee poor boy

Shadow watched her dis-trustingly

Point to be noted not dis-interestedly but dis-trustingly. Like master like horse lol

This time he was not angry at the
white horse but at himself.
Because he had betrayed his
masculine pride:
When she had winced, he had flinched
too.

A thousand kisses for u Shadow muaah

"Nani, for this moment, let me be your
grandson alone."

omg Khushi ka jadu chal gya... hai I just loved this part loved it so much. It was so pure and beautiful. I am unable to find words it actually is like impossible for Lordy to bend down for others the only ppl he ever changed his rules were his sister and his Khushi and now he came to Nani and asked for her forgiveness for her hand and everything else. I am so so sooo happy yepiii Honey bee green indeed.

Oh no no no nonono u can't let Gen. do any harm to the baby. pls don't do it. Oh my I m now feeling dread enveloping my heart. pls let the child be safe

loved the update lin eagerly waiting.

Farwa darling!!! How is life, my dear green heart? I loved your excitement for the Shadow-Lightning part. Always a lover of the little things, you have been. Happpy HUGS my dear, for what you are!

Originally posted by: loves_aishu
Ok,
this time,
the cells are not tingling,
At all,
what is happening,
slightly confused,

looks like have to wait for the past to come forward,
before the cells start working again!!😆

As always was a nice update,
your statements are always so good!!
"By loving her, you have learnt to love like her"
so true for the First Lord,
loving the change in him,
he has become,
Green Honeybee!!

Scared what will happen with Anjali,
also how did Ram become involved??
Again, have to wait for the past to come forward!!

Waiting for it!!😊
Take Care!!😊

Aishu. I think we need to develop a system where each chapter will provide a pricky instrument that could trigger your famous grey cells to spark. I would so love to try them for they do have the potential to manpower the missing parts of the mystery...

Originally posted by: sutapasarbabhom
Lovly updt ling geting imotionam aftr qdading arnav nani convo nw arnav heal by lady lov poor shadow lk faling for lighning god save anjali baby waiting for next part

Eesh! My dear, my guess may be wrong but it seems you were in a haste and could barely find your "alphabets" and your cellphone (if it is) was a blur as you attempted to read and reply to the chapter while being crammed in a crowded bus! But fear not, I could decipher thy script and have understood thy message!

Originally posted by: aparnav
what was that linnie...an emotional chapter,ending with our very own LADY! hmmm...i don't know...i want to read the next asap!!!

Aparna! At least there was ONE person who missed the Lady enough to exclaim her presence in the chapter in the comment! Our Very Own, Indeed, my dear!

Quote

Aquiline

@Aquiline

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#426

I lost the last set of comments I had readied with the reply and I am typing them again but not all. Any names I have missed, be assured that each "like" I have given to your comments is a hug of gratitude for your love...

Originally posted by: shipra.aqua
Oh I m in tears again...
Such a lovely chapter...

A motherly love can never be portrayed in words, but u my dear were upto d mark...😛

Shipra! You cried? Really? I never thought the chapter could be that emotional... thank you, dear.

Originally posted by: lilakumariacnw
wow...i am loving this more n more day by day...esp by the way u include each and every character...
great job dear...

i missed this ff for a long time due to my busy real life..

Lila dear!! Long time no see! How are you? Hope you are well in your wonderful. Thank you for loving this tale all this time, my dear, and for recognizing the value of each character...

Originally posted by: peepli
hi lin.. do you remember me?? I am the ungrateful girl from your past who has always stalked your thread and read each and every one of your updates and not commented..
Yours is the only FF I still follow and I think you should get it published someday..its captivating and the depth each of your characters have is so deep.. I love how there is an element of suspense at the each of every chapter

You are doing a great job !! The gradual falling in love of Arnav and Khushi was beautiful !!

Et tu, peepli? It feels like comeback week. After anusada, its you! Ofcourse, I remember you! How are you, my dear? And NO, you are NOT ungrateful. Just busy with life. Even if you can't comment, its okay. Your love lingers always in the Thread and I am grateful for it. As to the publishing...maybe. Maybe not. Maybe. Maybe not. (That sounded like I was plucking the petals of a daffodil!)

Quote

Aquiline

@Aquiline

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#427

THIS IS A "MEMBERS ONLY" POST
The Author of this post have chosen to restrict the content of this Post to members only.

136

Quote

Farwa

@-Farwa_Ibrahim-

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#428

I AM FIRST I AM FIRST I AM FIRST

YAHOOO I AM FIRST I CAN'T BELIEVE WHAT FELT LIKE ETERNITY I M FIRST

~~EDITED~~

This was again THE UPDATE. Lady Anjali loves Ram and no doubt he is adorable. Felt happy to see Lightening is getting healed. I guess if khushi had known Gen was out therr she wouldn't have come but this doesn't matter. Ok description of how Gen looked on horse was really good I ALMOST swooned there ALMOST then I remember its not my part its our Shassy's part to swoon on him but truly I liked Gen in this update. he appeared less evil or shld I say not an evil at all though he still has the same needs and his hate for the child but still. When he dismounted lightening I expected Khushi to leave gardens but when she didn't I got it why because it may have arisen suspicions in Lady Anjali's eyes plus she wasn't alone with him. Ah such a gentleman u r! Loved how Khushi denied it. But Gen didn't. Omg in his anger he put Lightening in danger n what was that a symbol to alert or something the red wine on Anjali's gown. So much like a typical Khushi she was worried for Lightening so much that she didn't leave the gardens to just make sure she is fine. Now the place where I felt Gen is not evil he saw Khushi's genuine want to know the reasons why only she can help and how n he first asked to leave. I totally understand Khushi here she is so innocent n pure heart she must b thinking to help Gen just for lady Anjali and also for him. Her goodness is not allowing her to leave him in such pain I just love her. Lin can't tell u how much I loved the update lots n lots of love for u my sweetie

@Ur reply no doubt n I love u for giving hight lights to these beautiful little events coz they help in making a big beautiful change.

Edited by -Farwa_Ibrahim- - 11 years ago

Quote

Jay

@jduke

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#429

Kushi is getting confused to trust or not to trust General and puzzled what is that need his wife can't fulfill but she. In her curiousity to know what help is needed by Genereal from her she is falling into General's words. Glad that Rahim Chacha disturbed thier conversation and I hope Anjali and her baby will be fine. It will be good if she shares her conversation with General to Arnav. Arnav may know what General is trying to do and find a solution and keep Kushi safe.

Edited by jduke - 11 years ago

Quote

anjs

@anjs

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#430

i didnt like khushi's behaviour in this update...firstly she went and purposely stayed in the presence of the General, without lord arnav being around...then she refused to move even though the lady, which she so honorably mentioned as her reason to sit there, had left... here it looked like she liked watching the General on the horse, almost infatuated by him...and deliberately stayed around to spend more time with him...i really disapprove of her this behaviour...

upon this, she deliberately started conversing with him, knowing very well that he cannot be trusted...whatever he wants, he need not ask it from another woman...esp one who is the wife of his bro-in-law...

this update really made me very disappointed with khushi...now m dreading reading further, as i feel, in her need to be miss goody two shoes, she is gonna hurt the first lord, so much, esp since he has fallen in love with her, n warned her to stay away from the General...