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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -indu-





Aah what a relief...i was struggling with my thoughts ...i was thinking somewhere i may be wrong...but thank you for umderstanding my POV...



And a different update...


Loved to se this geet...bold😉And beautiful...and for once she had answers for Maan😆...


I like girls who are strong...😉


DO CONTINUE SOON...



You need not think you may be wrong. I believe right and wrong and mainly perceptions. What is right for you may not be right for everyone but it does not mean you are entirely wrong. 😊

I am glad you enjoyed this update. And Geet sure is going to climb the strength ladder from now. 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: CrazyMaaneetFan

Maan flirting with Geet. Wow. Why this change...?

Last stance was great.
Geet too trying his method.
What next..

Continue soon



Why this change? Well, we will have to ask Maan about it. 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet scorpio

awesome

just read all of it in a go

loved it

cont soon

pls add me in ur pm list


Welcome to the story. I am glad you're liking it. 😊

Have added you to the list.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: KittuPratzz

just now had a discussion with Picchi aka Jaan...

Maan and Geet - are not different.. they are same.. infact they are mirror images of themselves!!!!😃

Oh! That's a new perspective!
i dont know y i feel and think that they think alike (*most of the times) and almost react the same way...

😆😆

they have fallen for each other ... u know y ..coz they see themselves in them...😳

i dont know about others.. but for me ... we fall for other person coz we see ourselves in them... a part of us in them .. or atleast one thing u will love to explore or something u wanna badly experience...

Opposites attract ... but still... we fall for opposites coz we wanna experience...

Interesting! You had once posted a quotation on the same lines that one falls for the person who is the mirror image of oneself. I had not really gotten the point then but I think I do now. 😃
i know ..ignore all my talks.. coz its not making sense😆

i can keep on say a lot about this ... Mayyo makes me blabber😆ishhh blame her for my rambles...

And Mayyo will not tell you to stop blabbering. Keep it coming. 😃
Avi ...Maggie.. Mayyoo.. and Onir have no idea what they have done on all the readers with their spectacular words spell !!!!!

Nisha ji..🤣hahahah anything about her is Unique... she is whole and SOLE(🤣🤣SOUL???)

see ... seee... a mere thought about her itself... im in splits🤣🤣

*bow u my ladies*

These Fabulous Five (FF) write Amazing FF's ---

and the readers - all they could do is🤗and ask

"yeh dil maange more"😆i know its sooo cliche..😆 Touchy!

😆Thanks, Kittu! I am a fan of all the writers you mentioned except myself.
ishh this Mayyo is really dangerous to gals like me... all the silent ppl will come here and blabber like me..😡😆

Tell me how I have done it so I can tell the trick to writers who wish readers would not remain silent. 😆
okay coming back to MG -🤗there is a lot about your characters... u just cant analyze and decide on your char with one sit...

cause in general Humans are not like that.. u are just molding their char in a very beautiful way!!!

Actually, that is how humans are. Just when you think you know them completely, they reveal a side of then which makes you think there's a lot you need to know about them. I am just trying to make these characters real. 😊
im just loving these discussion ...😳

oh btw.. My jaan's version of MG is "Ishaan and Pranavi"

Ishaan and Pranavi?
😆there you go your characters... i just love my anomaly!!!!


there is unplugged version of this song.. but the feel of this song.. Ahaana!!! its just beautifull...

something for both the anomalies!!!😃

Ahh! I love this song! The feel makes me cry most of the times!

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: spvd

part 32
awesome dear...
excellent...
Geet wore the bracelet Maan gave her...
and Maan did recognize it...
what was he trying...
Geet was shocked and surprised and amused...
but the terrace scene was excellent...
wow Geet could be this bold is something so new...
interesting...
Maan is damn shocked...
hahaha deserves him right...
would he ever get J over Vyan and Geet's friendship?
Raunaq was so funny...
a beautiful get together this was...
cont soon dear...



Thank you!
Would he get J over Vyan and Geet's relationship? That is something to look forward to. 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Susegad

CH 31

You know this chapter made me think a lot and I wrote and re wrote the comment many times. My first reaction was that I was mad at Geet.
I can't blame you for being mad at her.
I was thinking to myself, look what she did to our TJ.
I wrote a complete comment about that and deleted it. Then after a lot of thinking I reassessed my opinion. I went back to IOYSM to get a look at the old Geet and Maan and suddenly I had a whole different outlook.

You really went back to IOYSM? Wow!
Standing here as readers outside the story and looking at the whole picture it is very easy for us to judge Geet and dislike her for her rejection of Maan. We had a clear insight into the mind and thought process of Maan in IOYSM. We as readers tend to put ourselves into the shoes of the characters and judge them accordingly. We forget that with each character, what they see is the only part that hey know or understand.

Exactly! As readers, we tend to make quick judgements without thinking deeper from each perspective.
"The next morning, I pace around in my room, looking at my watch every few minutes and wondering why time is passing so slowly. After some time, I calm myself down and think for a moment. I know I am going to say it today but how? Making sure the door to my room is tightly shut, I walk to stand in front of the mirror and begin practising. Pasting a smile on my face, I use a happy voice. 'Geet, I love you.' My smile turns to a grimace. Maan, you aren't telling her a good news or something! Make it a little more natural! I take a deep breath and begin again, schooling my features in a serene expression. 'Geet, I really love you. I always have.' Shaking my head, I decide this isn't right too. A few more attempts make me feel like I'm going to make a fool of myself in front of her. Looking into the mirror one final time, I close my eyes and imagine Geet is in front of me as I begin again. 'Geet... I don't know what you will think about me after this but I do want you to know what I think about you, what I have been thinking about you for the past three years. I love you, Geet! I have loved you from the moment I saw you...' The sharp raps on the door breaks the moment making the image of Geet disappear from in front of me and I am left to stare at my own reflection in the mirror. I grin and give myself a thumbs up before going to answer the door."

You see, we were privy to this thought process of Maan, whereas Geet is absolutely clueless about this. We are mad at her for rejecting the whole Maan that we have in front of our eyes. The shy, adorable Maan, who gathered all his courage to confess to her. But to her he is a boy she knows fairly well, but not completely like we do.
Am I making sense here?
Yes, you are. And you have pointed something basic of IOYSM which majority of the readers have either not noticed or have chosen to overlook it.
Yes Maan confessed to her and she rejected him. She was confused, unsure of herself and I feel that perhaps if they had still been in college together that they might have been that Geet might have been able to come to terms with her actual feelings and fears.
Yes. Perhaps if she had more time with him, perhaps if she had more time to explore herself, her feelings and her fears, things would have been different.
Also, if we had not known Maan's POV from IOYSM and if you had written WH first, I do believe all of us would have considered Maan a major ass.
I do believe you know why I am grinning as I read this.
Yes Maan has changed. Yes Geet has been a major catalyst for that change. It was a part of his growing up though. Adversity brings out the best in people who have an inherent strength.
I do believe that was the case with Maan. He has grown into a confident and successful person. If she was the catalyst for his turning into a flirt then likewise, she was the person who brought out the confident side in him.
The catalyst is back in his life and he is reacting.
Now just waiting to see how she is going to change.
For this time around, I do believe that he is as much a catalyst for her.
Ahh! How I love this different and positive outlook! 😃
Now just waiting for this chemical reaction to explode.
😆Sooner or later, the reaction is going to take place.
I love where this story is headed Mayyo.😳
Thanks again for this superb piece of story telling and sorry for the delay in replying.
Thank you so much, Apa! Your words have come to me as refreshing and encouraging while I was not very high about this. 🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

part 32 - lovely part...again loved the title...how his behaver changes with person to person...he was all gentleman with other except her...he just comes back to his flirtyness just to show her that she is nothing more to him...

Liked how she gave back to him and tested his own medicine...it was worth watching his expression...yes it was not easy to get her...
Loved this funfull part

Thank you! I am glad you liked the title as well as the chapter.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: _BlackPearl_

This woman tends to make her own assumption, but glad she is seeing reality too though its takes time for her, and she accepts it too than running away !!!

Still she is confused with the pull she feels.



Awe .. Maan .. ❤️
Is it possible to resist the man,? HELL NO !!!

She takes time, that is exactly what it is and why she is more confused.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

For someone in Maan's position to play with her curl; that was a very telling moment.

I don't know if it is so easy to approach someone in that way once you have been spurned by them.

He is still waiting for her consciously or subconsciously; that's why he is breaching the barriers that should be there.

It is a safety mechanism to surround himself with others while he waits for his internal debate queen to be sure.
Safety mechanism, exactly. Until she is sure of herself, until she either pulls him close with the intention of keeping him there, or pushes him away to not let him near, he needs his safety mechanisms. Perhaps he is testing the waters for now.
It is doubly hard for her now. She has to fight her own doubts regarding him and he won't make it a cakewalk like it was before.
Certainly not. Earlier, he used to keep her before him. Now, he likes to take things the way he wants them to be.
Even this approaching him and teasing him that she did, I am sure she will pakao her own dimaagi khichdi of that.😆 Good. I want that to happen. That's the only way she will be good at this. Can't conquer anyone else if you are not sure of yourself.
Like Shika had mentioned it in the OS she wrote for this story, Geet needs instability, confusion, insecurity to be pulled out of the maze of indecisiveness she has built around herself. Only then will she emerge stronger and firmer.
I love your writing. It takes me to a place where characters and their every movement is meaningful. The journey is as enriching and enticing as the destination.

Sorry for late reply..
Don't say sorry. I am more glad that you are here and enjoying it! 🤗

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33. Do I Know?


"Hello?" I panted as I took quick steps into the building.

"Where are you, Geet?" Vyan asked exasperatedly. "We're waiting."

"I know. I'm just on my way up. See you in five minutes." I got into the empty lift and pressed the button for the eighth floor.

Our work with ARK was officially beginning today at the ARK office. I was late just because I missed the bus and I could not find a taxi soon enough. Vyan had called thrice on my way here since Mr. Smith was apparently wanting us to be present when Mr. Khurana arrived. I had discovered Maan was already in the office. Vyan had told me Maan had once come for the meeting and then left due to my absence. I looked at my watch. I was only fifteen minutes late but it seemed like a big deal already. The lift paused at the fourth floor and the doors dinged open, allowing two people to enter. I raised my eyes to see the tall, broad frame of Maan step in followed by a seemingly nervous bespectacled young man.

I shifted to a corner to make room even as Maan looked at his watch and then at me. "You're late."

"I know. Sorry." His curt voice only elicited the same curtness from me.

"Sir, this evening, Mr. and Mrs. Rai are wanting to meet you." The man who had entered the lift with Maan spoke up. "Should I set the meeting?"

Maan turned a page of the file he was holding in his hand and replied to the man without looking up. "No, I'm not free today. Besides, I'm just here for a meeting which was delayed for some reason, and then I'm leaving."

He had not looked up or taken my name but I could sense that his words were meant for me as much as for this guy. I also understood that the reason he was talking about was me and he was not happy about it. His tone of voice bothered me a bit and I frowned slightly as Maan started giving some instructions to the man. The lift dinged and the doors opened to the eighth floor where I immediately saw Vyan waiting in the lobby.

I kept staring at Maan's back as he stepped out of the lift and made a beeline to his cabin which was just past the lobby. When he disappeared, I questioned myself about why I was even bothering about his attitude. Deciding against feeling bad about it, I shook my head and let go of the frown as I stepped out too. The man who had come with Maan stayed in the lift as the doors dinged close.

"Thank goodness, you're here!" Vyan came forward in two long steps. "Khurana is not too pleased with the delay."

"I found that out." I whispered to him as I jerked a thumb towards the direction Maan had went to. "Let's go."

I walked with Vyan to a room where Mr. Smith was present along with Jess, who had her head bent over some papers.

"Ms. Handa!" Smith exclaimed and asked us to sit while he informed his boss about my arrival.

Vyan and I had only had to wait for about five minutes before Maan entered the room in all his authority.

Unlike the conference room we had been taken to on our last visit, this room had a huge, rectangular glass-topped table with one seat at the head and two seats opposite to it. Maan took his place and looked straight at us. "So."

With his one word, I noticed a visible change in the postures of Smith as well as Jess. Their backs erected and they inconspicuously moved aside so as to make themselves unnoticeable in the room.

"Show me the plan." Maan extended his hand for the file I was holding, which I passed to him without a word. He started sifting through the pages of plans and graphical images of the rooms we had been assigned to design.

He had not turned the fifth page when he began to raise objections. "I do not like such light colours to be painted in the main hall... Why is the conference room planned on such dark colours? What about the lights in my cabin? They're not enough according to the space."

Vyan and I had to patiently address all his concerns.

"Mr. Khurana, this main hall is of an average size. According to the information Mr. Smith provided us, there will be about fifteen to twenty cubicles placed in this hall so it needs to have colours which give an open look to the room so it does not appear congested."

Maan listened in silence as Vyan answered his first query.

"But I do not appreciate my staff lagging in their work, and light colours in a room tend to have that effect -"

"That is exactly why," I interrupted him, "we have mentioned here in the file that this front wall can be painted in a dark shade too, as a contrast, you know." I put my finger to the place in the file I was referring to. "Besides, this room does not have a window as well, which means that if the room is not painted in lighter shades, with the exception of the front wall, chances of your staff slackening in their work due to claustrophobia are higher than chances of them relaxing due to lighter shades."

"We can always light up the room with extra lights to fight their claustrophobia." Maan suggested after I finished talking.

"We can, but do not be mistaken that it can be a complete solution to this problem. Lights are only as effective as the colour of the walls."

"Hmm." He pressed his lips together and looked into the file before raising his eyes back to me. "What about the conference room?"

"That room needs to have dark walls for the sole reason of it being a conference room." Maan raised an eyebrow as I continued. "For the presentations and projections to be crisp, the rest of the room needs to be faded into darkness, hence the dark shades are preferred."

"My cabin?" Maan interlaced his fingers.

"It has to be a combination of light and dark."

"Any specific reason about that?"

"It has to be a representation of the personality of its owner, don't you agree?"

At my words, I saw Maan's lips curl slightly upwards. "Light and dark, huh?" There was a very apparent ease in his manner. He seemed to have gotten over the bad mood he was in earlier.

"What solution do you have for the insufficient lighting?"

"I think we can alter it to the way you like it." I smiled formally while Maan blinked and leaned back against his seat, toying with the paperweight on his table.

"How long have you been in the designing industry, Ms. Handa?"

I leaned against my seat too. "Almost five years."

He smiled slightly, which, for some odd reason, made me let out a small smile too.

"So Mr. Khurana," Vyan spoke after a long time, making us both look at him, "are your concerns satisfied? Or do you have any more questions? I am sure we can work out any glitches togeth-"

"No, Mr. Raheja." Maan, in a calm voice, cut him off before he could complete. "Geet knows her work very well, I must say. She has satisfied me."

I saw Vyan's gaze flicker to me for a second before looking back at Maan. I did not miss the differentiated way Maan had addressed Vyan and me. It made me realise I had gone with the flow of conversation with Maan and somehow neglected Vyan, which was not right. "Actually, Mr. Khurana, these designs have a lot of thought and effort from Mr. Raheja. It is the result of our partnership that you're satisfied."

I passed a smile to Vyan, who returned it as Maan's cell phone rang. "Of course!" He answered me airily before excusing himself and walking to the far corner of the room where there was a large window overlooking the front of the building.

"Why was he being so difficult?" Vyan whispered to me as Maan talked over his phone.

"He was unhappy about the meeting being postponed due to me which resulted in wasting his precious time." I shrugged.

"It's good you're his friend and you know him, or we might not have been able to pacify him at all."

"Uhh.." I did not know what to say. Of course, I did not know Maan as well as Vyan thought I did... or did I?

"Mr. Raheja, Ms. Handa." Maan walked back to us. "I will take your leave now. Vyan and I stood up and shook hands with him. "It's been a pleasure," he exclaimed as he took my hand, "and I look forward to working with you."

"Thank God!" Vyan said once we were in the lift on our way out after Maan had left. "For once, I had thought we lost this deal."

"Nonsense." I brushed his fear away. "He wouldn't call off the deal just because of a delay of fifteen minutes."

"No, really, Geet. When he was informed of the delay, I saw him scold Smith in a way that scared the poor guy. He even shouted at his secretary, uhh, what was her name?"

"Jess." I offered carelessly. "So?"

"And the whole office was so silent afterwards that I'm sure you would hear a pin drop."

"Really?"

"Yes." He said as we stepped out of the lift and began walking towards the parking lot. "He is your friend and I don't mean to offend you but seriously, the guy thinks he owns the world."

"He sure does own two of the most successful businesses in the city." I reminded him as we sat in his car. We were heading to the office together.

As Vyan drove through the streets, I looked out the window. After today's meeting, one thing was confirmed. Maan may be a difficult businessman, an arrogant man or a hot-tempered boss, but he was not illogical when it came to his work. Working with him might not be as hard as I had thought it to be.

"What are you doing tomorrow evening?" We had just stopped at the signal as Vyan spoke.

"No plans so far. Why?"

"I was wondering if you remember your promise of coming to meet my family?"

"Sure, I do." It occurred to me then. "You want me to meet them tomorrow evening?"

Vyan nodded.

"On a weekday?"

"Actually, my sister is going to be there tomorrow so I thought I'll just grab the chance." He grinned. "What say?"

"Umm... Okay."

That evening, I was on call with Raya and we talked about how our day went.

"Really? Maan and so hot-tempered?" Raya stated incredulously. "It is hard for me to believe. He must have been upset over something already. Vyan told you about his tantrums?"

"Yes. I didn't see him act like that. In fact, if Vyan hadn't been so wide-eyed and relieved while telling me all this, I wouldn't have believed this about Maan."

I chuckled along with Raya. "You know, Di, Raunaq bought me new high heels, and they're awesome! You have to see them!"

In a blink, Raya turned all excited about her shoes. "Send a picture and I'll see them."

"No, no, no! You have to come and see them!" I laughed slightly.

"Chhoti, you want me to come over to your place to see a pair of "shoes"? Seriously?"

"Don't be so mean, Di!" Her voice sounded like she was pouting. "They're such a lovely gift and you're calling them "just" a pair of shoes. Ouch."

I laughed. My Chhoti, always melodramatic! "Alright! I'll come by soon."

"When?" She was all excited again. "Today? Tomorrow? After work?"

"The day after tomorrow, okay?"

"Why not today? Or tomorrow?"

I exhaled. "Chhoti, I just got home, tired and I really don't want to get out of the house now."

"Fine." She sulked. "Why not tomorrow?"

"I promised Vyan I will go with him to meet his family tomorrow evening."

"You what?" She asked in shock and I repeated it.

"Why?"

"He said his family wanted to meet his new partner." I gave the explanation Vyan had given to me.

"Are you sure it's not more than that?" She asked suspiciously.

"Of course not." I answered without taking a second to think.

"Hmm..." I heard Raunaq call for Raya from behind her. "Di, Raunaq's calling. I'll talk to you later."

When Raya cut the call, I was left to ponder over her question. "There's nothing more to this meeting," I assured myself. "Is there?"


Edited by mayyo - 11 years ago

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