Jab Tak Hai Jaan Poem for Parud

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Finally completed it lol..it was just there since agess..

Jab Tak Hai Jaan Poem-Part 1

Your eyes, mischievous and saline,
Your laugh, an airy insolence,
Your hair, waves undone and shine.
I will not forget... your memory
Until I breathe this life.


Your hand slipping from mine,
Your shadow turning its gaze,
Walking away without turning... into a haze.
I will not forgive...
Until I breathe this life.


Jab Tak hai Jaan Poem-Part 2

Your dancing freely in the rain,
Your getting angry on small things without reason,
Your small, childish mischievous acts,
I'll love them all,
Until I breathe this life.

Your false promises,
Your burning dreams,
Your heartless wishes,
I'll hate them all,
Until I breathe this life.



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Jaz1990 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow ash didn't know u wer interested in poems lol
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jaz1990

Wow ash didn't know u wer interested in poems lol

I am only interested in Gifing😆
i listen to a lot of stuff lol and everything just connects to rr sumhow in my mind..😆
Edited by Cute_Ash - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ashu you have translated it beautifully <3
And gifs ekdum perfect che ;)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Great poem ash...⭐️
And gifs are very apt ..😳
Edited by _AngryBird_ - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -BarunSanz-

Ashu you have translated it beautifully <3

And gifs ekdum perfect che ;)

hehe thankyuuuzz🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: _AngryBird_

Great poem ash...⭐️

Thanku AB..😛not by me tho its from the movie poem written by aditya chopraa..
Edited by Cute_Ash - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow it was so beautiful. loved it.
awesome post baisa.
waise, jab thak hai jaan, hum bhi nahi bhool payenge inke mohabath ki daasthan ko ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow! Wow! Wow! This is so brilliant!
You uploaded this on your tumblr?? I'll reblog it for sure!!


Amazing this is Ash!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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So apt to Parud...Poem made for them.. I love it...Brilliantly composed...Thanks for it.

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