Aga Bai-OS Mature- Part 3 on page 17

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Isha song challenged me to write an OS and the song is Aga Bai. I never heard the song before and Isha hopefully this OS some how relates to the song ☺️
This is also dedicated to all the KK fans 😆 This is our solace until KK comes back 🤗

This is a hard category to right so i hope it's good or atleast readable 😛

Idea for last part was borrowed from Saathiya movie and don''t kill me for the ending 😳 I didn't know how to continue without getting graphic ☺️.

The story is below.
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Everyone in the Bhalla house went to a wedding. It was about 1 in the afternoon. Ishita washed her hair and came out to the balcony to dry it. She was drying her hair with the towel and looked downstairs and there was Raman washing both of their cars. He was wearing cargo pants and white crew neck top and had a little stubble as he forgot to shave. Ishita was gladly taking in the hotness that stood before her. She thought how lucky she was to be married to this Greek god.

Raman saw her through the reflection on the window and was mesmerized by her fresh face. He just wanted to run up and take her in her arms. He realized she was staring at him and let her stare at him some more in secret. He took a bucket of water and threw it on the car and started using the sponge. Ishita wanted to run downstairs and give him a hug and get him inside. She saw Raman checking his phone and Ishita was enjoying the sight. Her hormones went out of control. Her enjoyment of her husband was interrupted when she heard a beep on her phone. She went back in to check and it was a text from Raman- "Are you fantasizing about me?" Ishita blushed and was embarrassed that she was caught red handed. Raavan Kumar has million eyes; nothing can get past him- she muttered to herself.

Raman came upstairs and saw Ishita in the kitchen. He went behind Ishita and hugged her from behind and whispered in her ear " I am hungry". She apologized to him saying that she got a late start to the day and she will finish lunch in 30 minutes. . He told her that she doesn't need to make food to appease his hunger. Ishita blushed and playfully chided him saying that it's just 1 in the afternoon and plus they need to eat food.

She gave him a cutting board and vegetables and told him to make himself useful. Ishita proceeded to get the pan, oil and other ingredients for palak paneer ready. Raman repeatedly brushed against Ishita- her arm, back, hands. They were small seemingly innocent touches but with every touch Ishita's heart pounded.

"Raman, I know what you are doing"- she chides him.

"It's called cutting the vegetables" Raman responds with a sly smile.

He went to the sink to wash the onions and again brushed up against her but now this time with his back side.

She takes the cutting board away from him and tells him to go sit down as she will never finish cooking with his mischief. Raman turns off the stove, picks up Ishita in his arms and takes her to their bedroom and locks the door. He puts her down on the bed. He stood by the footboard of the bed and both were staring at each other taking each other in. Raman climbed on the bed and they both share a long liplock. He whispers in his ear "Do you think I look hot in these pants". "Yes" she responds to him. Ishita pulls Raman to her and wraps her around his neck and kisses him again. He pulls away "but you were showing attitude outside. I guess you don't want me". She forcefully grabs him and bites his ear "but I want you now". She takes off his shirt and runs her fingers through his chest. He removes all her jewelry telling her that it pricks him. Raman climbed on top her of her . He planted kisses all over her body. She could feel each and every body part of his and tightly held on to him. They were both exploring each other's body and were enjoying the feeling of ecstasy.

All of a sudden they hear the front door open and everyone were wondering where did they go. Ruhi came and try to open the bedroom door and told them it was locked. Ishita tried to open her mouth and Raman covered her mouth and whispered to her to keep quiet and they will forget about looking for them. She pushed him off her telling him that they can't lie to Ruhi. She got dressed went to the washroom to wash her hands and face and looked at Raman who was laying on the bed with the sad look of a kid who just lost his icecream. She ran back to him and kissed him and told him he will get what he wants with interest at night.

Ishita walked out of the room and greeted everyone and hugged Ruhi. Raman got dressed and walked behind. Amma too had come in to drop of some Idli and Vada.

Amma looked at Ishita and was shocked. "Ishu, where is your mangalsutra and why do you not have any sindoor on?". "Amma, woh woh" Ishita strugged to find an answer.

Raman chimed in "Amma, if anything happens to me today that's because of your daughter. Your daughter didn't even feed me today.

Ishita hit him in the stomach and told Amma to ignore him and that she took it off when she was showering and will go put it on.

She rushed to the bedroom to put sindoor back on and her mangalsutra. Raman turned around and gladly took in the views of his wife's backside.

Edited by sai14 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sai!!! I'm so glad I sent you this song to write an OS on! No this was not at all graphic! This was hell romantic, to me!

The whole Aga bai song is about the woman admiring her man in all possible ways and longing for him! You brought that out in such an interesting way!

I could totally imagine Raman in cargos and white crew neck washing his car! Awww! If I were in that balcony, uff no, I wouldnt be in that balcony!

You keep asking me, how come Ishita doesnt feel like pulling him by his collar to her room and how come she has such enormous self control! LOL! Aaj tumne khud jawab de hi diya dost! 😃 Totally loved the kitchen romance!

I blushed in pounds in the bedroom scene but yes, that's the need of the hour! 😆 Song aisa hai toh yeh sab banta hai aur isse zyada bhi! I could totally relate that bedroom scene to the visual of the song! Rani was all over Pritviraj! 😉

Uff! I'm so elated that you did complete justice to this song and produced such an interesting OS of a romantic afternoon! 😉
Edited by Indian_Isha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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brb :D
YOOO! 😃

Okay i know youre super mad, dont say those words out loud, alright!? 😛
HAH, I LOVE YOU! 😛


Okay, so OMG, i had to read this again, so i could comment so i did this mistake last night. HAYEEE Thanks to this Aga Bai, meri neend urr gayii! 😛 ☺️ 😆

This was so so beautiful and sensuous! ☺️
HAYEEE! MUJHE AISE TOUCHY TOUCHY Mr & Mrs Bhalla chahiye!!!
I absolutely LOVEEED this Ishita! ☺️ Haye, somewhere down the line... humain bhi aise IshRa milenge na!? 😛 Nahi? acha 🤔 ofcourse, Sanskaari STAR PLUS! -_- 😵 and apparently CHILDREN also watch YHM 🤣 according to Divz' latest interview! :P

Okay, so initially, at the start of the OS, how Ishita is admiring and fantasizing about her husband who's in OMG HES IN CARGO PANTS ☺️ 😛 yes, i can SO IMAGINE YOUR STATE, DEAR ISHITA! lol
it was super sensuous yaar! :) and then HAYEEE THE KITCHEN ROMANCEEE MY FAVVV! ❤️ Promise id do ANYTHING to see aisa proper Kitchen Romance between IshRa ❤️

and then as their rendezvous started... OFCOURSE it had to be interrepted... Ruhi Ke Liye... would these beautiful Bhallas ever get proper time alone, alag from that madhouse?! :P 🤣 haha, but then, part two mein ☺️ HAYE too cute, i LOVEEDDD how Ishu tried seducing him and then later he had no choice but to give in... it was just AAH TOO HOT! ❤️ <3

please write more hotness, k? 😛

Yes, now i will edit the other one! 😳
Edited by serendipity. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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omggg sai...u made us KK family SO SO PROUD...👏👏👏...

wht an OS...!! aaah hot naughty cute os......

the starting scene...Raman washin cars..i donno y bt the way u explained...i ws rememberin only song,,"garam masala" film title track...😆😆...

i just loved loved tht sms thing..could so so imagine......

kitchen romance..haaye loved flirty naughty bhalla...

bedroom romance...too hot...btw u made ur armaan speak thru ishita na..cargo pants waala..i so remember ur SPA REHEARSALS comment darling...😆😉...

ending ws cute too...

u should write more such KKpanti OS,,,
Edited by Nikki_Titli - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Omg omg res
I'm out but had to log in just to res!!
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Sai you tease!!😳😆 can't believe you stopped where you did and puleese i need a part two- KK is waiting like you said and he expects interest too!!

Loved the 'push n pull' you conveyed and omg i can totally imagine her checking him out from the balcony and him realising!

Now jaldi karol and write more ☺️🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow! It's so beautifully written. Loved it :D
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Hotness overflowing!!!!!☺️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow!! Amazing totally loved it, it was romantic!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved it! So cute & romantic. ❤️

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