Aga Bai-OS Mature- Part 3 on page 17 - Page 2

Sai!! Thank you for this KK special update 😃😆

Omg omg this was such a cute afternoon romance. There were so many lovely moments in this story, From the car washing scene to when raman was teasing her while slicing vegetables, it is so typical of him to rile up his biwi. Raman removing her jewelry was a nice touch as well, i had a huge grin on my face during that part. Poor raman did not get what he wanted I. The end but it makes sense. Ishita would never lie to Ruhi, even if they are in midst of love-making😆

OMG, Sai! Did Nikki and co get to you, too? 😆 😆 I'll res for right now. If it makes me 😳 a lot consider my like and 😳 as my acknowledgement that I read and liked it. 😆

^ Isma your 😳 just cracks me up now- so sweet😆🤗

You are Good!!! That was very sensual and tastefully written. A clear picture of the future duo in love. Raman washing the cars in the morning and Ishita checking him out...I want this scene NOW.

Originally posted by: Indian_Isha

Sai!!! I'm so glad I sent you this song to write an OS on! No this was not at all graphic! This was hell romantic, to me!

The whole Aga bai song is about the woman admiring her man in all possible ways and longing for him! You brought that out in such an interesting way!

I could totally imagine Raman in cargos and white crew neck washing his car! Awww! If I were in that balcony, uff no, I wouldnt be in that balcony!

You keep asking me, how come Ishita doesnt feel like pulling him by his collar to her room and how come she has such enormous self control! LOL! Aaj tumne khud jawab de hi diya dost! 😃 Totally loved the kitchen romance!

I blushed in pounds in the bedroom scene but yes, that's the need of the hour! 😆 Song aisa hai toh yeh sab banta hai aur isse zyada bhi! I could totally relate that bedroom scene to the visual of the song! Rani was all over Pritviraj! 😉

Uff! I'm so elated that you did complete justice to this song and produced such an interesting OS of a romantic afternoon! 😉

Originally posted by: happenstance

Omg omg res
I'm out but had to log in just to res!!

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Sai you tease!!😳😆 can't believe you stopped where you did and puleese i need a part two- KK is waiting like you said and he expects interest too!!

Loved the 'push n pull' you conveyed and omg i can totally imagine her checking him out from the balcony and him realising!

Now jaldi karol and write more ☺️🤗

Originally posted by: florine_20

Lovely os 😊

Originally posted by: swati_bhatia

awesome!