Aga Bai-OS Mature- Part 3 on page 17 - Page 3

Originally posted by: sai14

Uz, Thank you so much 🤗 me and tease 😆 KK probably wants to take me down an alley and kill me for stopping where i did 🤣

I will try to write Part 2. Need to find a way to do it gracefully as in my mind it just kept going graphic🤣 KK ki asar LOL

Originally posted by: LaughItOff

Hotness overflowing!!☺️!!!

Originally posted by: Arooj.M

Loved it! So cute & romantic. ❤️

Originally posted by: PreciousPri

Sai!! Thank you for this KK special update 😃😆

You write really well ... it was hot and romantic 😉

Originally posted by: THEfanOFheartz

Hey!!!🤗Loved it!❤️ You've written this fab yar!😉 😃

"☺️"The update was very romantic😳 🤪

Nicely written👏 Good job yaar👍🏼It was amazing srsly!😉

Do write more OS's soon😉

@Do PM me for ur future works😃

Originally posted by: pomegranate

Omg omg this was such a cute afternoon romance. There were so many lovely moments in this story, From the car washing scene to when raman was teasing her while slicing vegetables, it is so typical of him to rile up his biwi. Raman removing her jewelry was a nice touch as well, i had a huge grin on my face during that part. Poor raman did not get what he wanted I. The end but it makes sense. Ishita would never lie to Ruhi, even if they are in midst of love-making😆

Very well written and I hope you write more in this genre because you are quite good at it.

Originally posted by: Isma_A

OMG, Sai! Did Nikki and co get to you, too? 😆 😆 I'll res for right now. If it makes me 😳 a lot consider my like and 😳 as my acknowledgement that I read and liked it. 😆

Originally posted by: modernfamily

You are Good!!! That was very sensual and tastefully written. A clear picture of the future duo in love. Raman washing the cars in the morning and Ishita checking him out...I want this scene NOW.