Rabir ff-'Why Us'[Last chap-PG 48] - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: hapo

😊 I m so happy that ur back with your ff😊

As i m fan of ur ff.
And actually before starting my os i always hw ll it b if kt n rachna r married n then love blossoms...
And bcoz u now I can imagine 😊
Plz do continue...

Aww so sweet of u..n thanks dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: saravathi

hey that's gr8 eagerly waiting fr urs..n thank u so much fr liking this One too

There would not be even once that I will not like ur ff because u put such a great effort in ur writing with so dedication that every time I love it to the core 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: AnjaliPunia

omggg !!!!!!!
res fr nw grl i m so teary eyed tat i cnt gather wrds

y teary eyed..fr Rajiv???
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: mkakkar93

There would not be even once that I will not like ur ff because u put such a great effort in ur writing with so dedication that every time I love it to the core 😳

luv u buddy
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: sandjanarai

Omg dear it is amazing
I was waiting so long for such a Rabir ff
Please make this rachna Really beautifull and not the behenjie type
Thanks for the pm
Update soon dear please please please
Pm me thank you

ys will write as u asked n thanks fr reading
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: hangok

oww this is great you should definitly continue

and pm me please

Thanks n ya will pm u
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks dear
Edited by saravathi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
Rabir ff-"Why us"
Chap 1
Rachna stepped in Kabirs house..
Dadi:Rachna I was always scared thinking of Kabir's future but now I dont have any worries I know you will take care of him well
Kabir:Dadi am not a child..
His one eye checked for Rachna's reaction but she was not in this world.

Dadi:First you both rest sometime..I will arrange for other rituals
Kabir:Miss Rachna I mean Mrs hmm
Rachna:Kabir ji,I want to sleep sometime
Kabir:Ya thats what I thought of saying you can sleep in my room..take left first room
Rachna left for the room and Kabir was relieved
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Rachna checked her mobile for messages from Rajiv but there was none ..she dialed his number again..This time it was not switched off..Rachna's eyes widened in excitement.Call got connected
Rachna:Rajiv..Where are you??
Call cancelled
Rachna:Rajiv..Hello.. hello
Dadi knocked on the door..Rachna wiped her tears and opened the door
Dadi:Rachna we have this ring ceremony now
Rachna:But Dadi
Dadi:Rachna all our realatives are waiting come soon
Rachna went with hesitation..All welcomed her but she gave a fake smile at all.She saw Kabir sitting among the crowds..He too looked not interested and she went and sat next next to him
Dadi:Come on my son..only you must win
Dolu:Didi only you should
Rachna and Kabir put their hand in to the bowl but neither was interested in taking the ring..Everyone waited so eagerly..
Dadi:Come on son search fast
Kabir's fingers touched Rachna's hand by mistake and she imideately took it back..

Rachna(whispered):Kabir ji,you take the ring pls..I cant tolerate all this nonsense
Kabir :" did she say nonsense" He got irritated from her response and went to take the ring at that time Dad pushed Rachna's hand in water.Kabir almost took the ring when both hands met ring got connected between both..Kabir and Rachna shared an eyelock
Everyone clapped for both n they both moved from each
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Kabir knocked on the door.When Rachna opened she gave a irritated look
Rachna:Pls leave me alone sometime
Kabir:Madam this is my room..Ok
He said and entered it..He saw his room fully occupied with Rachna's things
Kabir:Mrs Kabir what is this
Rachna didnt respond..Kabir went on his nerves
Kabir:Rachna
Rachna:What now
Kabir: Cant you see your things scaterred here,Why cant you arrange it.I need my room clean,I always prefer that and keep that in mind
Rachna:This is me Kabir..I cant be like how you wish..n I didnt ask you to marry me Its all your wish and you suffer
Kabir:What I wished to marry you ha ha who said this ..No way..Your parents pleaded me and thats why I did it feeling pity on you
Rachna:How dare you talk to me like that
Kabir:dont raise your hand madam
Rachna's mobile ring suddenly and she ran to pick it it was from customer care and she cancelled it with disappointment
Kabir:Was it Rajiv
Rachna:You better pls stay away from my personal
Kabir to himself" This girl has too much of attitude"
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Dadi:Rachna, what you think about Kabir
Rachna to herself " Why the hell should I think about him" hmm Kabir ji is nice human
"Really,I know he hates girls n I am sure it would be tuf for you to manage him"Laughed Dadi
Rachna:Why he hate girls
Dadi:His mom left him in his childhood it changed his life worst but there is other side of him..He is very soft,respects everyone He will do anything for the one he likes n am sure he will like you soon
Rachna gave a fake smile again and took blessings from dadi and went in to first night room
When she entered the room Kabir was already there sitting in bed which was all decorated.
Rachna's thoughts "I must say him..that I dont want this marriage"
Kabir's thoughts " I must say her that I am moving to London"
Both cleared their throat
Kabir:Hi come in
Rachna:So nice of you thank you
Kabir:You are looking good ..soo beautiful
Rachna:You too tooo handsome

"I want to talk to you something"Both said at the same time
Kabir:Ladis first
Rachna:hmm I dont want this marriage,I need to be free
Kabir:Rachna I was about to say that too
Rachna:Really Thank god..But how to convince our family
Kabir:I have a plan.I am moving to London in two days..N I will leave you here saying you dont have passport.I wont comeback for many years in that gap you talk wrong about me to your family and convince them
Rachna:Thats brilliant
Rachna in excitement went and hugged him.Kabir was shocked first time a girl was hugging him,He felt awkward .Rachna was badly in need of someone whom she could cry hugging him,she placed her cheeks on his chest and her tears fell on his arms
Kabir:Rachna what are you doing
Rachna broke the hug
Rachna:Am sorry really sorry
Kabir:Its ok ..You better sleep It got late goodnight
Rachna to herself "I am stupid,How can I hug him"
Rachna:Good night Kabir
Kabir:Good night
Rachna:Btw Kabir why you called me Mrs Kabir at that time..Ha Ha
Kabir:Only for two more days na adjust it..Good night Mrs Kabir
Rachna:Too funny
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Next morning:
Dadi:No way,I wont let you go London leaving Rachna
KAbir:But my whole business will be lost..
Rachna:Ya dadi let him go
Dadi:Rachna you dont know about Kabir..He is planning something else
Rachna and Kabir stared at each
Rachna:But Dadi if i had a passport I would have gone too..Kabir ji would have definitely taken me
"Rachna beta you have a passport la"Entered Dayal

Rabir was shocked..Kabir gave killing looks on Rachna
Dadi:Thank god..Now you both leaving to london in two days..Be ready
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Kabir:Your dad spoiled all my plans..For what he came now..shit
Rachna:Hello mind your words he is my dad
Kabir:Bcoz of him my london plan gone worse
Rachna:Hey one idea..Why cant we live in london as friends..who gonna check us..We can be as we wish
Kabir:Why it didnt strike me..Thats good but you are not my friend just my guest
Rachna:HuH I dont have any interest to be your friend

Both stared at each controlling their laugh but they bursted out in the end
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Edited by saravathi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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yipeee me frst res i knw i knw pehle wala bhi unres nahin kiya abhi tk but will do if kl
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
😭😭😭

Originally posted by: AnjaliPunia

yipeee me frst res i knw i knw pehle wala bhi unres nahin kiya abhi tk but will do if kl

lol😉..but actually i understood oly a little am not good in hindi

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