Rabir ff-'Why Us'[Last chap-PG 48] - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
#31
so here i unres both my cmmnts
i had tears in my eyes bcz u cheated me next ff ws supposed to be on me n rajeev n u backstabbed me on it 😭
lolz man i m joking i was teary eyed bcz rabir were finally married in precap itself
it was so gud old stry with a new masala kabir is harsh but has a soft heart n goes out of the way to fulfil promise to dai n save rachna reputation
he is all hard just to protect his innocent heart n rachna has to make dis out
1st
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Posted: 11 years ago
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fr d frst chap amazing kabir is jealous bt jealosy he is trying to hide in form of rudeness he knws rachna luvs rajeev n is still impatient to hear fr him n
the london shifting idea ws grt but dayal ko toh sab chaupat karna hai bhaag kr passprt le aaya n nw my couple is shifting to london will be waiting fr next update dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: AnjaliPunia

fr d frst chap amazing kabir is jealous bt jealosy he is trying to hide in form of rudeness he knws rachna luvs rajeev n is still impatient to hear fr him n
the london shifting idea ws grt but dayal ko toh sab chaupat karna hai bhaag kr passprt le aaya n nw my couple is shifting to london will be waiting fr next update dear

thank you first n ya same old story but will make sure will add more masala to it ...regarding u n rajivs ff 😳i hav no answer
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
Rabir FF-Why us
Chap 2:

Rachna and Kabir packed their clothes..They were all set for London.Next day morning they are going to leave for london.Dadi has called Rachna and Kabir to talk to them
Dadi:Kabir,Rachna is very precious child you should not let her get hurt
Kabir:Dont worry Dadi,I will take care of her
Dadi:You both dunno how much you are made for each other, You really make a best pair
Rachna and Kabir showed faces on each.
Dadi:And Rachna, I know its not easy for you to forget your past but You should this is your life, N one thing I can assure you if you love Kabir truly He will keep you like a queen
Rachna remembered Rajiv and put her head down to avoid Dadi's face and Kabir felt Rachna's discomfort
Kabir:Dadi you pls go sleep its too late
Kabir helped Dadi to walk to her bed

and Rachna stood there still thinking of what Dadi said
"forget your past"
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In flight
Kabir:Why you seem dull here too Mrs Kabir
Rachna:Mr Kabir,am no more Mrs Kabir ok stop calling me its irritating
Kabir:Still thinking of Rajiv??
Rachna:I never forgot him
Kabir:Actually why he left you..
Rachna:Its none of your business
Kabir:If you talk like this all guy will run away from you..
Rachna:Thanks for your concern
Kabir laughed at her..n They fell asleep soon.
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Rachna was in salwar and every one were looking down at her..And Kabir was enjoying it
and they finally reached
Rachna:Whose house is this?
Kabir:My friends he has left to Australia recently
Rachna:Your friend has too good taste I love the place
Rachna ran inside the house, It had a pool near it, A swing in the front, Doors furnitures were glasses .Rachna's mouth opened on seeing such a big house

Rachna:Kabir are we really going to live here??
Kabir:Rachna how many times you will ask this..Yes we are living here
Rachna:I will take this room,It has best scenary
Kabir:Ok I will be in this room then
Kabir hanged do not disturb poster in front of his door , And looked down at Rachna..Rachna showed her face on him and closing the door he went to his room..Rachna took a a sketch and wrote something on the poster and it read
"Do not disturb this Animal "
When she was laughing at it Kabir opened the door,He went on his nerves reading that
Rachna:Am sorry I did it for fun
Kabir :How dare you
Rachna ran away from him and Kabir chased her..She ran fast in to her room and locked the door..She fell on her bed and laughed heavily..Kabir hit his hand on her door and he took a paper and wrote
"Beware of Dog" and pasted in front of her door and he laughed heavily..Hearing his laughter Rachna opened the door and gave him a kill you look
Kabir:You started it
Rachna:Am dog..How shit!!!
Kabir:Am animal then


Rachna laughed first and Kabir too joined her and both blushed and moved to their own rooms
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Kabir in late night knocked at Rachna's door
Rachna:What now??Am sleeping
Kabir:Hey am hungry..cook something pls
Rachna:Cooking me..Hey no way I am damn tired
Kabir:Rachna your husband is hungry..Its wife duty to cook
Rachna:Bad joke,No pls...Even am hungry
Kabir:Ok then lets order sopmething..What you need
Rachna:Parathas
Kabir:Rachna this is london ok..Oh god pls save me from this girl ok am ordering pizza right now
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Rachna:Its mine why you eating mine too
Kabir:Rachna dont cheat you already ate yours
Kabir dragged it from her hand and went to bite it,Half of Pizza was in his mouth Rachna got angry n she too went to bite the rest..


They didnt realise their lips were so close untill Kabir took a larger bite..Rachna felt there is no more pizza near her lips n Kabir's lips was about to touch hers Rachna was shocked she stood up from the chair immediately..Kabir too felt awkward to be der
Kabir:Am sorry
Rachna:Am sorry too
Kabir:I think pizza idea is really bad..Next time we better not order pizza
Rachna laughed and KAbir noticed it..They went back to their rooms
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Rachna in her bed was thinking how her life has changed.Suddenly a beep sound from her mobile..She checked it n it was message from Rajiv
Rajiv:Today you will be My Mrs..I love you Mrs Rajiv n I wanna make our night the most spl
Rachna was confused She called him at once but it kept ringing then she checked the message details it was sent two days back but was only delivered now..She kept reading the message thinking all her memories with Rajiv
Rachna cried to herself "Where are you Rajiv "


End of chap 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Just loved the update love the million dollar smiles of both rabir and it was very mesmeserizing how they are adjusting to their new life which has taken a 360 degree turn in one night 😳Loved it to the core and also felt the emotional turmoil rachana would be facing through where is Rajiv can't wait to know why he left her 😳A big applause for u 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
Hmm Nice chapter dear i like it
I hopw that they will fall soon in love hihi
Can't wait for their romantic moments
Thanks for the pm
Update soon
Pm me
Thank you
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: mkakkar93

Just loved the update love the million dollar smiles of both rabir and it was very mesmeserizing how they are adjusting to their new life which has taken a 360 degree turn in one night 😳Loved it to the core and also felt the emotional turmoil rachana would be facing through where is Rajiv can't wait to know why he left her 😳A big applause for u 👏

360 degree turn...now only i realized it,ya i just write as it cums sometimes I do get away from the story...lol n for Rajiv track u should wait for more chapters...And thanks dear fr ur valuable comments
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: sandjanarai

Hmm Nice chapter dear i like it
I hopw that they will fall soon in love hihi
Can't wait for their romantic moments
Thanks for the pm
Update soon
Pm me
Thank you

Thanks dear..Romantic moments will be more from next chaps I guess so😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: saravathi

360 degree turn...now only i realized it,ya i just write as it cums sometimes I do get away from the story...lol n for Rajiv track u should wait for more chapters...And thanks dear fr ur valuable comments

This happens with all good writers and this is a fact one of my relatives write books on psychology and Buddhism he told me that when I start writing I don't look behind what I had written and what I am writing just write with the flow and only read when it is completed or published so don't worry u are in the progress to become a a great writer 😳👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
Wow!!!
Wht an update...
Luv it...
Hayee both 'rabir' look so so cute when they r smilling...
Thnks 4 the pm...
Continue soon...

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